Title:Turnabout Justice
Author:Phoenix
Rating:****
Genre:Murder/Court/Trails and cases
Summary:Mr.Wright studies through the murder of the Judge.
Chapter 1
Location???Date???Time???
???:I have been waiting.
Phoenix:Why wait for me?
???:I wanted to talk about the...death...of your parents.
Phoenix:What?
???:You do remember...do you?
Phoenix:The case that set my path as an attorney?
???:No.How you killed your parents.
Phoenix:Wwwhaaaaaaaaaaaa?!?!
Then the mysterious person dashes into the shadows leaving a knife covered on blood. I walk forward to the bloody knife and suddenly I look left only to find a man with stomach wounds. Then a person's shriek comes from the shadows.
Lady:You monster...How could you kill someone that way!?!
Phoenix:I-I...didn't do it...I couldn't kill anybody.
Lady:I would only let the judge handle that because you heading for the guilty verdict!!
Phoenix:Nooooooooooooooo!
Wright & Co. law offices
9:30 a.m

Wright:Whoa look at this mess...
Phoenix Wright is looking to clean his office. Everything is messy and dirty like someone was having a party here.
Wright:Huh? What this?
A letter lay on the floor saying this:
Dear Nick,
I have been at the detention center where there is a desperate guy who looks exactly like you Nick.
Nick I will be waiting for you here in the detention center.
From,
Maya

Wright:Whoa this sounds pretty serious.I better get to the detention center quick.
Detention Center
9:45 a.m

Wright:Maya.
Maya:Hey Nick.
Wright:What do want to talk about Maya?
Maya:This guy that is over there.
Wright:!!!
Wright:He looks just like me.
Phoenix:Hi guys.
Wright:What happened to you?
Phoenix:I was arrested for the murder of my uncle.
Phoenix:He was stabbed multiple times in the stomach.
Wright:I see.
Wright:Where were you at during the murder.
Phoenix:I was at the crime scene wandering when I saw the body.
Maya:Did you kill him?
Phoenix:I would never!
Wright:Are you sure?
Phoenix:Positive.
Maya:Nick he is telling the truth.
Phoenix:I was arrested by a under cover cop that was apperently a witness.
*shows attorneys badge*
Phoenix:So your one to huh?
Wright:I want to defend you.
Phoenix:I...don't think you would win my case ever.
Maya:But, Nick is trying to help you!
Phoenix passes Maya the evidence list and a picture of the stabbing.
Maya:Eeeeekkkkkkkk!
Phoenix:Wright I think you know what is going on.Wright?
Phoenix:Well an offer is an offer and since everybody has turned me down I guess I can trust you since your the only one who can save me.
*writes on paper*
Phoenix:I you want to help go to this place.
*Phoenix leaves*
Maya:I think we need to pay this place a visit.
Wright:T-this is the court house!
The mystery starts with the murder of a uncle and the most oddest place a murder has ever been committed in the court house!
District court no.9
10:00 a.m

Wright: Wow I never thought I would ever come here to investigate!
Maya:I always thought this would happen.
Wright:(No you could never think like that!)
Wright:Wait if this is a crime scene then...
Gumshoe:Woooooooooooya! Pal!
*Detective Gumshoe shoe runs fast at Wright*
Gumshoe:Hey what are you doing here?
Wright:I am here to check the crime scene.(What's so new about this time?)
Gumshoe:I think even you wouldn't take this case.
Wright:Why is that?(Don't tell me he confessed.)
Gumshoe:The evidence is all against him. The murder weapon was coated with that guy's finger prints.
Wright:Whaaaat!
Gumshoe:But here comes bad news and even worse news.
Wright:(Why does it feel like there is the worst to come?)
Wright:It doesn't matter it is still bad news.
Gumshoe:Apparently we have a witness that saw the whole scene of the crime.
Gumshoe:And from here it only gets worse pal.
Wright:Why?
Gumshoe:Apparently the victim was none other than the victims uncle the Judge.
Wright/Maya:Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttt!!!!!!!!!
Maya bursts into tears as she hears the tearful news. The old man that has been the Judge in every of Wright's cases has finally was forced into retirement.
Wright:I can't believe something like that even happened.
Gumshoe:I can't believe it ether pal, someone killing that kind old man...IT'S IS THE WORST THING A GUY CAN DO!
Maya:Nick is it really true the kind old Judge is gone.
Wright:It appears that way.
Gumshoe:Anyways here is his autopsy report.
Wright:Thanks Detective Gumshoe.
Gumshoe:Here's the autopsy report.
*Gumshoe gives Wright report*
Anyways here is what happened that night. The defendant went to the court room an met the Judge. They had a conversation until the defendant took out a knife and visouclily attacked the poor Judge. Moments later a witness comes to see the defendant crying over the dead Judge. Witness arrests the defendant on the spot.
Gumshoe:Pal this is a unwinable case I don't think you will ever win this one.
Wright:Detective Gumshoe I think you can show us around the crime scene.
Gumshoe:Sure pal.
*Detective Gumshoe walks Wright & Maya around the scene of the crime*
Gumshoe:Here is the murder weapon,it has the defendant's left finger prints.
Gumshoe:And here is where the victim was last...
Maya:Where our good friend was.
Wright:Detective Gumshoe there is some thing really suspicious about this crime scene.
Gumshoe:What pal?
Wright:There is a sharp metal pipe sticking out of the ground that is covered in blood.
Gumshoe:Yeah that pole was...
Officer:Hey Detective your needed at the percent on the double!!Sir!!
Gumshoe:Alright I'll be there.
Gumshoe:Any last questions before I go?
Wright:No, I got enough evidence for now.
Gumshoe:I'll see you in court tomorrow pal.
Wright:I'll see you later Detective Gumshoe.
Wright:Maya I think that were are going to go into the most toughest case I ever had.
Maya:Yeah I think.
Wright:Maya I think I'll call it a day.
Maya:Okay Nick.
To be continued (BTW the character named Phoenix is me)

Last edited by The Lawyer Man on Sat Sep 01, 2007 2:47 pm, edited 2 times in total.

Chapter 2
Detention Center
11:00 p.m
Phoenix:Oh hey it's you how's the investigating?
Wright:I got a few questions I want to ask you.
Phoenix:Okay bring it.
Wright:Why are your fingerprints on the murder weapon?
Phoenix:I was confused with what was going on I picked up with out even knowing it.
Phoenix:I miss the Judge...
*Suddenly a tear comes down my eye*
Phoenix:He would always tell me about the trails he has been judging with you. He would say "That Mr.Wright was the most unpredictable Defense Attorney I have ever met!"
Phoenix:Why would someone take the life of the only family I ever had!
Maya:This guy couldn't have a motive to kill the Judge would he?
Wright:(Theres only one way to find out!)
*Pulls out Magatama from pocket.*
Wright:Are you sure you had no motive to kill?
Phoenix:I swear I would never ever kill family.
Wright:.....(I suppose he is telling the truth.)
*Maya whispers in my ear*
Phoenix:Wright I want to ask you a question?
Wright:Sure.
Phoenix:Are you my twin brother?
Wright:Who gave you that idea!?!?!
Phoenix:Umm nobody, but seriously I want to help you in court.
Phoenix:Will you let me bro?
Wright:(I am not your brother!!!!!)
Wright:I am sure you take places with Maya during rescess.
Phoenix:Thanks bro.
Wright:(I think this guy seriously needs to find an actual brother.)
Maya:Nick 2 I want to ask you about that sharp bloody pole.
Phoenix:I am not sure if I saw any pole.
Phoenix:And I am sure that the pole was buried under my uncle's body.
Wright:(I think we better check the crime scene once more.)
Maya:Wait Nick I want to ask why the knife is covered with blood?
Phoenix:Probably because the murder wanted to frame me.
Wright:(I think should ask that question when I get back.)
District Court no.9
11:10 p.m
Maya enters along with to check the crime scene to check for more vital clues when a mysterious woman confronts Maya and Phoenix and says.
???:What are you guys doing here?
Wright:Where to investigate a murder.
???:Murder? Oh I am so sorry I forgot to introduce my self I am Deputy Claire and you fellas are?
Wright:I am Phoenix Wright attorney at law.
Maya:And I am Maya Fey spirit medium.
Deputy Claire:Well I can tell the two of you make a great couple.
Deputy Claire:So you boyfriend and girlfriend?
Maya:N-no!!!
Deputy Claire:The more you deny it the more I think you are.
Wright:Anyways, can you tell us what happened here?
Deputy Claire:W-wait a minute you I saw you before your the murder!!!
Wright:N-n-no! I am defending the guy!
Deputy Claire:Oh!Sorry you look exactly like him!
Wright:(I guess that makes this woman the witness that saw the whole crime so to speak.)
Wright:So what did you witness on the scene of the crime?
Deputy Claire:I saw exactly this.I was standing by the door when I heard a screams of agony!Suddenly I bust into the room to see the defendant stabbing that poor Judge.I went to knock out the defendant so I could save the Judge, but it was to late.
Deputy Claire:I swear I could never save a life I must be useless as a deputy enforcer.
Tears came streaming down Claire's face and she could not hold it in any longer.
Maya:Poor Claire.
Wright:(Poor Claire!What about us?How can we protect Our client from that testimony!)
Wright:Anything else you want to share about the crime?
Deputy Claire:Yeah...The defendant disappeared and came back to the body but only crying.
Wright:How long did he disappear for?
Deputy Claire:About ten minutes or so.
Maya:Is that all?
Deputy Claire:I am sure that is all.
Wright:(finally the hole I have been looking for.)
As Deputy Claire starts to leave the crime scene Wright yells out
Wright:Wait!Who is going to be the prosecutor in tomorrow's trail?!?
Deputy Claire:Miles Edgeworth!
Wright/Maya:!!!
The day ends with a socking ending. The prosecutor is none other than Phoenix's fourth grade friend. Will Phoenix Wright make it through the trail or will he have a guilty hanging over his clients head find out in the next chapter in Turnabout Justice!
To be continued!

Last edited by The Lawyer Man on Sat Aug 25, 2007 4:17 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Somebody should try and give people better names.... I swear.

Yeah I am really sorry about that/But hey once I am able to upload pictures I'll add crime scenes and all sorts of other stuff!
BTW it took me two hours for each chapter

Chapter 3
District Court no.9
9:00 p.m
Jury *talking*
*BANG*
Judge:This court is in session for the trail for the Matthew Phoenix.
Judge:The trail is about the murder of a fellow judge.
Judge:The prosecution may start with it's opening statement.
Edgeworth:As we all know the victim was a fellow judge.
Edgeworth:The cause of death was due to several stab wounds.
Edgeworth:I think we shall listen to the Detective about the events that happened that night.
Judge:Alright bailiff please escort the dective to the stand.
*A few minutes later*
Edgeworth:Witness name and occupation.
Gumshoe:Detective of the homicide at the local percent.
Edgeworth:Okay detective tell us the events that led to the murder.

Gumshoe:That night the victim called the defendant to the scene of the crime.
Gumshoe:They were apparently talking about the defendant's parents.
Gumshoe:The defendant got really angry and he attacked the Judge who never could never defend him self.

Gumshoe:As for the crime scene it is exactly where were are holding this trail.
Judge:So about the evidence of the stabbing.
Gumshoe:I brought the evidence of the stabbing with me today.
*Judge holds up knife*
Judge:Hmmmm...This knife is covered in blood!
Gumshoe:Yeah it is covered in blood.
Judge:Is there any fingerprints on the murder weapon.
Gumshoe:As usual it's the defendants fingerprints and the fingerprints are from his left hand.
Judge:The defense may begin his cross-examination.
Wright:(I have got to find something that there or else!)

Gumshoe:That night the victim called the defendant to the scene of the crime.

Wright:So what did the victim call the defendant for?
Gumshoe:Apparently they were talking about the defendant's parents murder.
Wright:Why would they be discussing that?
Gumshoe:They were actually related to each other.
*Desk slam*
Wright:How were they related?
Gumshoe:The Judge was the defendant's uncle.
Wright:...I understand.
Edgeworth:Witness you may continue your testimony.
Gumshoe:They were apparently talking about the defendant's parents.
Gumshoe:The defendant got really angry and he attacked the Judge who never could never defend him self.

Wright:Do you actually have any proof that the victim did not fight back?
Gumshoe:Well ummm...
Wright:Well detective?

Edgeworth:Mr.Wright do you actually have proof that the victim fought back?
Wright:Um.
Edgeworth:I thought so.
Edgeworth:Witness continue your testimony.
Gumshoe:...!
Gumshoe:I just remembered something!
Judge:Really!You did?Well add it to your testimony.
Gumshoe:There was writing in blood on the floor.

Wright:Who's name was written?
Gumshoe:Mathieu.
Wright:...!!!

Wright:Wait did you just say Mathieu?
Gumshoe:Yeah.
*scratches his head*
Gumshoe:I did why?
Wright:That is very strange,because the name of the defendant is Matthew!

Edgeworth:Mr.Wright how does that change anything?
Wright:Actually it changes everything!
Edgeworth:How does it may I ask?
Wright:If I was your nephew would be able to forget how to spell my name?
Wright:I knew the Judge too well for him to forget a name.Let alone a family member!
Jury:Mummer Mummer Mummer.
*BANG* *BANG*
Judge:Order!
Judge:This brings up an interesting question!
Judge:Detective please inform us about the bloody message on the ground.
Gumshoe:Yes sir.

Gumshoe:We weren't able to figure out the hand writing.
Gumshoe:The oddest part about the message written on the ground is...
Gumshoe:The type of the blood.
Gumshoe:As for the name we have no clue.
Judge:So what is so odd about the blood?
Gumshoe:It is the defendant's blood.
Judge:W-what!
Edgeworth:W-what!
Wright:(Wow!that is really unexpected!)
Judge:Well testify about this oddity!!!

The blood on the murder weapon
Gumshoe:When we checked the blood type on the murder weapon.
*Scratches head*
Gumshoe:I was really puzzled when I saw who's blood was on the murder weapon.
Gumshoe:So that means the defendant was stabbed.
Judge:...
Wright:W-w-wait a minute!
*Desk slam*
Wright:If the defendant was stabbed the how can that ever be the murder weapon!Huh?
Jury:Mummer Mummer Mummer.
*Bang* *Bang* Bang*
Judge:When you put it that way that means the defendant couldn't have killed the victim.
Wright:Exactly my point your honor.
Judge:It seems like this trail is over.
Judge:This court finds the defendant...

Edgeworth:Wait your honor!
Judge:Y-yes!
Edgeworth:I object to your judgment!!!
Edgeworth:I have found another way that the defendant murdered the victim!!
Judge:Well lets take a ten minute recess and then we will have the prosecution explain the murderer killed it's victim.
Judge:Until then it is time to go to a break for now.
To be continued!

Last edited by The Lawyer Man on Sat Sep 01, 2007 3:56 pm, edited 3 times in total.

Well, work on a few grammar issues, but otherwise it's great. I really like the Objection and Hold it things.

Thank you I'll get right to work on that buddy!

I got all the spelling mistakes I think

Sorry guys for being late on the updates I was super busy so here is the fourth chapter!!!!
Chapter 4
Defense lobby
10:00 p.m
Mr.Wright,Maya and were all in discontent. Mr.Wright comes out to say.
Wright:I wonder what kind of tactics Edgeworth is gonna come out wit...
Before Mr.Wright could finish his sentence Edgeworth interrupts.
Edgeworth:Wright I have some bad news...
Wright:(You have got to be kidding me!)
Edgeworth:Wright I am no longer the main prosecutor for this case.
Wright:How did this happen?
Edgeworth:I want to help you this time. I'll be as your aid Wright in this fight.
Wright:Thanks Edgy, but are sure about this?
Bailiff:Guys it's time to go back to court.
The battle in court has just begun and the prosecution has joined sides with the defense, but the same question stilll comes up.
Wright:Who is the new prosecutor for this case Edgeworth?
To be continued?

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