Heh. I've been away for a LONG time.

I wrote this story as part of my English Coursework, but decided to post it here.

Victim 1: Furio Tigre

Furio awoke.
He frantically glanced around the room, looking for clues to where he was.
After a few minutes, he could make out that he was in a small room.
It was painted yellow but from what Furio could see, there were huge stains on the wall.
After Furio's eyes had adjusted to the darkness, he recoiled in shock.
All around him, he could see dead people.
A TV screen flickered on beside him.
"Hello, Furio."
Furio stared at the screen, too scared to move.
"I'd like to play a game. You are wired to an electrical system."
Furio turned his left hand over, and saw there was a small bundle of wires hanging out from it.
"I wouldn't pull those out if I were you, you'll get such a bad shock, death will be guaranteed. In a second, all the lights will flicker out. You can turn on the lights as much as you want with the button in the middle of your left hand. However, there is a price. How much electricity can you take, before you die?"
The TV turned itself off, and the room was plunged into absolute darkness.
Furio stumbled around, blind, and a sharp pain coursed through his feet.
There was broken glass all over the floor.
Furio noticed the small button the Mask ۞ De Masque had told him was there.
He pressed it, and instantly, he received an electrical shock, and the lights flickered on again.
He pressed it again, but this time he held it in for a little longer.
He received a harsher shock, and the lights stayed on for longer, but as he released the button, they flicked off.
In the time that the lights had been on, Furio had seen 3 boxes, each with an illegible label on them.
He hobbled over to the boxes, wincing in pain each time a shard of glass embedded itself in his foot.
Again, he pressed the button, receiving an even harsher shock.
On top of each box, there was a label; "Hand in here." was written on each of them.
The TV flickered on, and Mask ۞ DeMasque's face appeared on the screen, taunting him, yet again.
"In one of the boxes, there is a switch to release the key to this room. The other contain…you'll find out."
Furio, very tentatively, placed his right hand into the middle box.
Almost instantly, the hole of the box had snapped closed onto Furio's hand.
"Wrong box. Find the switch within 10 seconds, and you can keep your hand."
Furio's hand frantically scrambled around the box for a switch.
His hand came to rest on a small lever. As he reached to pull it, the hole started to dig into his flesh.
Furio writhed and howled in pain, as the box removed his hand, and left him with a bleeding stump.
Furio grasped the stump, in an attempt to stem the stream of blood now gushing from the place where his hand had once been.
The ever-present voice came from behind Furio.
"You'll have to choose another. You'll probably die of blood loss within the next few minutes."
Furio tied his shirt around the stump, and considered his options.
He moved over to the box on the right, and placed his foot inside it.
He heard a click, and behind him, he saw 2 panels opening up in the floor, revealing a small vat of what appeared to be water.
A chain hung the ceiling above the vat of liquid.
Furio, pulling his foot out of the box, ran over towards the chain, and jumped at it. The chain fell from the ceiling, into the vat.
Furio placed his foot inside the vat, and felt a searing pain in his foot.
That wasn't water. That was acid.
Furio fell to his knees. The glass slashing its way into him, didn't seem to matter. He was stuck in this room. He was going to die here.
He started pounding the floor out of anger, however, he realised he was hitting the back of his hand.
After 2 minutes of enduring ever more painful shocks, Furio stopped.
A single tear dropped from his eye, as he pressed the button one last time.
"Viola…"
The lights flickered on and then off again. Forever this time, as Furio's life was eternally extinguished.
His last roar echoed round the room for a few seconds, before the last remnants of the man Furio Tigre disappeared forever.

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Um, wow. But, how did you GET the idea of Saw with Ace Attorney characters? Anyway, I don't like Saw very much, but this is very original!

BTW, you hate Zeni/Furio, right?

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Wow.

That was horrible. Seriously, Saw is just stupid. Don't ruin good characters with this crap.

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Somehow, someone has a different opinion than you, so therefor likes this crap and writes fanfics using good characters.

TBH, though, I'm not a big fan...

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SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW

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While I like the casting of Mask deMasque as Billy, there's inconsistancies with established Saw shit. Example: the tape appears to be live and gives them a continuous feed of info. That doesn't happen in the films, they're given basic stuff mostly "this is what will happen and when, why you are here" and sometimes cryptic clues how to get them out. It kinda takes away from the feel if it's constantly there.

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Oh, you have got to be kidding me. What possible entertainment value can you find in needless gore?

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To each his own and all that. I'm a fan of the traps, the symbolism, the life lessons, themes covered in it. Most people discount it as "gore for the sake of gore", but it's actually more than that. If you can stomach the gore, you get an intelligent movie with an actual storyline. It hasn't dabbled in supernatural stuff yet but if it goes past VI, I'm not watching any more. XD;

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Oooh, that was nice! xD
I'm a fan of Saw, too, and you have a pretty good idea there. =D
You should make a chapter with Kristoph. >D

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saw is scary that jigsaw guy is just plain scary ><

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Fixed.

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What about both of 'em? XD

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Oh, I'll do that. XD

Nah, just gant. It would be funnier. Besides, Krissi probably wouldn't play along.

The gant one can be like....every time he claps, a fingernail gets pulled out.

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THAT WOULD BE AWESOME!!!!

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Or maybe it could be something like "Put some PW villains in a room, and make them stay with Kristoph for at least 2 hours."
You can't survive that. xD
Or maybe make them try to stay with both Gant and Kris. xD

Argh, I'm just thinking of crazy ideas. o_o

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Yes, everytime he claps he gets a spike bracelet round his wrist tighter in.

And there is fast dance/rave music playing.

GANT

MUST

CLAAAAAAAAAAAAAP

AGH

Gant's downfall? Shake It by Metro Station.

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And next to the exit?

A swimming pool filled with pirahna.

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Oh my fucking fuck I loved that.

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