After much pressuring by a friend who happens to be a CR member, she talked me into making an account here to post this little fanfic I wrote. Its like my first fic. Like ever. So be kind.

Title: Falling Turnabout
Author: Fidelius
Rating: PG
Genre: Comedy/Romance
Status: Complete
Pairing: Phoenix/Franziska
Summary: Franziska takes a spill...all thanks to Phoenix?

Franziska was steaming. That foolishly foolish fool of a man! How dare that Phoenix Wright defeat HER, Franziska Von Karma, Queen of Everything!!! She thrashed her whip around wildly as she walked down the halls of the courthouse, terrorizing a few hapless legal aides as she went. As she came down the stairs from the upper courtroom, her vision blinded by sheer fury, she happened to catch the heel of her shoe with her whip on a particularly violent swing, sending her off balance and into the air.

As she fell, the one thought that rang through Franziska’s brain was, This is just wonderful. I am going to die and it is all that foolish fool Phoenix Wright’s fault. I shall grind him to dust under my heel.

However, just at that moment, the subject of Franziska’s fury happened to be ascending the same flight of stairs in the other direction. Deftly, Phoenix caught her by the back, in a very dramatic sort of pose. Their faces were inches from each other.

Realization of what had just happened washed over Franziska. I was saved…by that man. That foolish excuse for a fool saved me. “I think I’d rather have died,” she said pointedly. Phoenix pulled her up, still not saying anything. They looked at each other on the stairs for a moment, then Phoenix resumed his climb and Franziska her descent.

Phoenix turned to watch his rival’s head move out of sight and smiled. “You’re welcome,” he said quietly, and turned away.

Franziska kept on moving until she was sure she was out of Phoenix Wright's sight, then turned around, and crept up a few stairs until the back of the defense attorney could be seen retreating down the hall. “Foolish fool,” she smirked.

Last edited by Fidelius on Sun Nov 11, 2007 5:59 am, edited 2 times in total.

I lol'd so hard the first and second time I read this. xD Especially the portrayal of Franziska's inner monologue. Short, sweet, and pretty much in-character for the both of them. Awesome job for a first (or second or third or etc) fic.

Have a hot lunch of win, darling.

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xD Thank you for the kind words. Here is another little something I whipped up tonight. I'm not usually one for the guy-guy pairings, but this just came to me. :3

Title: Turnabout at a Hotspring
Author: Fidelius
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Comedy/Romance
Status: Complete
Pairing: Phoenix/Edgworth
Summary: A misunderstanding...or is it?

“Wasn’t it nice of Mr. Edgeworth to invite us all to come to this hot spring with him Pearly?” Maya said brightly.

“Yes…maybe you and Mr. Nick can have some…special time…” Pearl cried with delight.

“Pearly, what are you talking about? Hm, I wonder where Nick is anyway? I’ll go find him,” Maya said.

Pearl turned strawberry pink. “Okay Mystic Maya, I understand, I won’t bother the two of you tonight,” she tittered, bounding off. Maya shook her head and went to Nick’s room. But when she reached the sliding paper door, the sound of voices met her ears.

“Oh yes, Edgeworth, I’m going to do it!” That was Nick…he sounded really weird.

“Wr-Wright, you’re drunk, you don’t know what you’re doing.” Hey, that was Mr. Edgeworth. What the heck? Maya moved closer to hear them.

“Edgeworth, you and I both know this was coming…”

“Ah! S-stop!”

“You’re looking so vulnerable right now.”

“No, Wright, I…”

“Shut up Edgeworth, it will be less painful if you don’t resist. Here it comes!” Maya had heard quite enough. “Nick, what the hell are you…?” she screamed as she ripped the sliding doors open.

“King me, Edgeworth, king me!” roared Nick triumphantly.

“Wright, you bastard! I want a rematch!” Edgeworth snapped back.

“…Checkers,” Maya said, with a heavy sigh of relief. “It was…just checkers.”

“Oh hey Maya, you wanna play too? Edgeworth sucks!” Nick beamed.

“You just shut your mouth Wright,” Edgeworth retorted. Maya smiled at them.

“Sure! I’ll go get Pearly and we can all play!” She shot out of the room. Nick and Edgeworth looked at each other.

“Do you think she suspects?” Edgeworth asked warily.

“Edgeworth,” Phoenix smirked, and laid a none too subtle hand on the other’s thigh. “You worry too much.”

Last edited by Fidelius on Sun Nov 11, 2007 6:20 am, edited 1 time in total.

LOL!
LOL?
LOL!!
LOL!!!
LOL!!!!
OMG!!!!!




That was.....what the hell am I supposed to say?! Words cannot begin to describe how funny this story was. xDD All I can say is, that was priceless. Please keep writing!

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