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It's my first fanfic ever.
Comments are welcomed.

The fic is in French, since I'm not that good in English.
I'll try to post new chapters regularly. And I hope I'll edit my fic soon: my sister is drawing some fanart for me.

Warning: Yaoi!!!!! Phoenix/Miles

(by the way, Benjamin Hunter is the French name of Miles Edgeworth)

First chapter


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Another work, not PW related. It's some poetry I wrote 11 years ago (oh God! Am I so old? ;) ).
I just wanted to share it, do whatever you like with this.



Liqueur de rêve, eau de vie de boulevard
Petite fille triste reste assise dans le noir
Laisse ses yeux pleurer un perfide désespoir
Et laisse s'évanouir le parfum du trottoir

Les silhouettes passent et trépassent dans la nuit
Sombres ombres omniprésentes et hommes impies
Fantômes sans linceul mais le boulet à la cheville
Qui dans un cri blessant donnent des larmes de vie

Les sons sont irritants et la lumière trop vive
Laisse-toi donc mourir avant que tu ne vives
Vivre une seconde ou deux et demeurer pensive
Ou mourir cent ans et devenir active

La fille de plaisir a déjà fait son choix
Et tient sa guérison entre ses frêles doigts
Une goutte d'infini dans un torrent se noie
Et déjà dans ses yeux rougeoie un feu de joie

Liqueur de rêve, eau de vie de boulevard
Petite fille morte reste assise dans le noir
Elle s'est perdue toute seule pour une piqûre d'espoir
Elle est passée de l'autre côté du miroir
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Second chapter is up.
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You torture me ;_;

I'm failing French, bad. After HS, I never wanna see it again xD

omfg O_o so many words I don't know...
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I could help you if you want :)
Even if my English might be as bad as your French...
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Yay, we can be mutual language buddies that suck xD

My french is terrible, but the last 2 years we had a teacher that didnt teach us anything.

Now we have a really hard teacher, and it's killing me X_X
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Arei wrote:
Yay, we can be mutual language buddies that suck xD


So we'll never say a correct sentence! We would be some kind of Google translator... a really bad Google translator...
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Third chapter.

Warning: serious stuff inside!!!
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Gahah, if I could read French I would totally read this. X_X Good luck with it anyway.
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I'm still waiting for my sister...
So now I will draw my own fanart for this fic!

Here is my drawing for chapter 2, still unfinished.

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Now it's finished!

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Chapter 4

New drawings for the fanfic soon (I hope...).
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Chapter 5

Short chapter.

Maybe a drawing today.


Nobody cares but I go on :p

Edit: sketch for the third chapter. I don't think I will do more today.
Spoiler: Warning: shounen-ai
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Chapter 6

Short chapter. No sex... Maya POV.
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Chapter 7

Long chapter, lot of sex :)

I think I can add a drawing today... but later.
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No art last time, because I didn't finish it...

BUT

My sister finally finished the art she promised me.

So here it is!

Spoiler: Phoenix and Miles
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Wednesday: it's fic time!

Here it is: chapter 8

Short chapter, very sad... :larry:

(OMG I have written 11 591 words...)
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Hop!

Chapter 9

Ah, love...
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Chapter 10

My god, when will I finish it?
Longest chapter I've written so far.
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Chapter 11

Very short chapter, Lotta Hart POV.
There will probably be one or two chapter after that. So almost done!
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Chapter 12 up

Very late update... BUT nobody cares :p
Miles needs some time alone :edgy:
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