Okay, well, my 13 year old friend asked me if I could put this on for her.
It's a parody of Phoenix Wright - try and see if you can catch on ;p

This is only the intro, I'll ask her if she wants the full story on there.

Here it goes:


"Oh... how ignorant of me." The young boy lowered his head and smirked devilishly. He lifted his hand - but held still

when a female voice interrupted.

"Wh-what are you going to do Devin!?" A small childish, female voice shrieked loudly, so loud, it was breaking

the thin air atoms around her.

"Oh...nothing. Nothing at all." The boy smiled slyly, the creases of his dimples increasing.

"I just want a little...entertainment..." He raised his hand one more time; his other holding still with an object of

thick black, surrounding darkness.

"PLEASE! Don't do it! LEAVE HER ALON-" The boy quickly placed his free hand on the girl's mouth ; his face

was now an expression of deep hatred and anger. "Shut up, Sarah. They'll hear us!" The young male whispered

brutally. He did not care if the girl wimpered. He just didn't want to get caught. Not in the middle of the night.

The girl continued to scream, but with his hand placed over her small mouth, all her sounds were inaudible.

It was the perfect time to do it. The perfect plan. "Now...I..." The boy trailed off. He peered into the girl's sapphire eyes

and knew she was on the verge of tears. He let go of her, his grubby hand sliding back to his side, where it belonged.

"Do you know why I'm doing this, Sarah? Do you?" The boy questioned the girl, glaring straight into her tearful eyes.

"I...don't know..." The girl replied silently, her words almost broken by the sound of the police car sirens.

The boy was hesitant by the sounds, but he was still. Quite still.

"Well..?"

"D-devin...please st-stop..."

"ANWSER ME!" He visciously screamed, nearly forgetting the prescence of the police. Calm down, Devin. Lay low...

The boy let go of the object and violently grabbed her by the shoulders. The girl attempted to run; but it was impossible.

"You can't beat me. I have more strength than you. Even you know that..." The boy smiled and released his grasp

on her; gently, but firmly. He laughed with great insanity as he thought of the girl's attempt to run.

"Hah...! Funny. I thought you would've known..."

I think I'll have to do this the hard way. Time...is... up.

The female remained silent , still in shock by the boy's sudden actions.

Suddenly, he bent down and picked up two objects. The scraping of one of them off the floor had a clang sound to it,

while the other was inaudible; almost too soft.

"Let me give you a lesson, Sarah..." The boy readied his hands, both full with the black surrounding darkness.

"When the wheel's turning..." He raised his right arm slowly with the first object,

"You're in full speed..." He grasped his left hand tightly around the second object, squeezing it with force,

"But when the wheel of faith stops..." The boy trailed off, smirking as usual, laughing at the horrified

girl's face, "D-DEVIN! STOP IT! YOU'RE GOING TO GET-"

"You... die." And then he struck her head.

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Despite a possible formatting issue, it's a great start.

Yeah, that's what I thought, when she emailed me, it was all bunched up and messed. =/

She says sorry. :P

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