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Gah, well, here's a fanfiction I'm making, and it's featuring my (other, if you heard of my first one) OC, Katrina Fang. Please enjoy!
Title: Just Friends
Author:Leeling793
Rating: T (better safe than sorry!)
Status: Working on it!
Pairing: Apollo X OC (Katrina)
Summary: That was the past, and this is now. She's just a great friend and that alone. But... For some reason... I want to be more than "Just Friends"... Apollo's POV But when other people think, it's a different POV

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Just Friends

Chapter One

Kat


"Ah, isn't this great! Shopping with my older brother! It's great, huh Apollo?" Trucy beamed. It's been over a week since Lamiroir told us that Trucy and I are siblings. I just can't get it out of my head that Lamiroir... is my mother. Ever since we found out Trucy treats me like we should do everything together. I've kinda gotten used to it...

"Yeah, it's great that we're shopping at a beauty shop, Trucy. I just love to buy makeup, jewelry, and hair accessories," ...but it still bugs me that it always goes her way and we always end up doing something feminine.

"I knew you'd love hanging here!" Trucy said. Apparently, she didn't recognize the sarcasm in my voice. Nor does she ever. "Daddy was so nice to let us go out to the mall! Just you and me!" I was ignoring her babbling about how fun she was having, then I saw a sign that said:

Hair Care Products


Hmm, I do need more hair gel... And it could be a great way to escape from Trucy for a while. I thought. I snuck away from Trucy and went to the Hair Care Products.

"Hey, Apollo, how does this barrette look on me?" Trucy turned around, finding out that I wasn't there. "Uhm... Apollo?"

"Alright, let's see. I wonder if they have the hair gel I buy a lot," There was a lot of products, but it was mostly shampoo and conditioner, and only some of it was hair gel. Good going Justice, you're looking around trying to find hair gel for men in a beauty shop for girls... I look like a woman searching for the perfect shampoo. While I was walking thinking about how stupid I look doing this, I bumped into a young woman.

"Nnngh!" she groaned as she fell on the floor, dropping her items.

Crap! I must've bumped into her pretty hard! "I'm sorry! Are you alright, Miss?" I asked, concerned. "I didn't mean to make you fall!"

"No, it's alright, I was holding a lot of items, I should've gotten a basket," she replied. I held out my hand and helped her up. I also picked up her products she was about to buy. "Thanks,"

"Don't mention-" I stopped mid sentence. I took a better look at the girl. I-it... can't be...! I widened my eyes. She also looked the same way. Amber red hair, slanted red eyes to match, that fang on the left side of her mouth, it is her! "K-K-Katrina?!"

"Apollo?!" she exclaimed. "Apollo! Oh my God! It's you!" She opened her arms and hugged me.

"Kat!" I hugged her really tight in my arms. "Kat, what are you doing here! I thought you were in Japan!"

"Well, I was, but then I missed America so much... so-"

"Apollo! There you are! I knew you'd be over here!" A familiar voice said. "A-Apollo! What are you doing! What are you doing hugging a woman you don't even know!"

"Gah! Trucy!" I gently pushed Katrina away from me. "Listen, I know this wo-"

"Nu-uh! Not another word!" Trucy snapped. She turned to Kat. "I'm so very sorry Miss," she turned back to me. "We're going back to the agency, let's go!"

"W-w-wait! OW!" she pulled my hair. Ugh, I finally meet her again, and Trucy interferes. Perfect. Just Perfect... But I managed to say to Katrina, "Kat! You can-OW!-visit me at the Wright Anything Agency! It's just around the-GAH!-corner!" After that, I was dragged out of the store. Man, for a teenager, she's pretty damn strong.

Wright... Anything Agency? Alright, I'll pay you a visit... Apollo Justice.

While I was being dragged, I was in deep thought. So, you're back. I thought I'd never see you again... Katrina Fang.

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I hope you enjoyed the first chapter! I might put the second chapter today since I started this last night. So, who is this Katrina Fang? And how is she involved with Apollo in some way? I for one think my story line is kinda predictable. But... that's up to you. Please, I know I'm not that good at writing fan-fiction, so please don't be VERY harsh.
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Last edited by Leeling793 on Mon Jun 23, 2008 4:18 am, edited 3 times in total.
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This is quite humorous, Leeling! That last part where Trucy was pulling Apollo's hair was great! Keep it up. :minuki:
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Okay, chapter 2 is comin' at ya!

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Chapter Two
Spill the beans, Apollo! Who is she?!


"So then I forced him out of the store," Trucy explained what happened at the mall to Mr. Wright. "Apollo was being very naughty, Daddy!"

"Stop acting like you're our mom, Trucy," I complained. I mean, really! I'm 24 and she's only 17! I'm seven years older and yet she treats me like this!

"Heh, thanks for keeping your older brother out of trouble," Mr. Wright praised. I was outraged, he was taking her side!

"Mr. Wright! Trucy! I wasn't doing anything wrong!" Oh great, now I'm acting like a kid.

"Then tell me this, Justice. Why were you hugging that young woman? Don't tell me you were always a pervert who likes to sneak up on ladies and hug them in a surprise attack," Wright smirked.

"Mr. Wright, who do you think I am?!" I shouted, my face in a deep shade of red. Seriously, what the HELL.

"Answer the question criminal!" Trucy yelled, shining a flashlight to my face. I also heard laughter in her voice.

"I-I don't know her!" I exclaimed. I don't want them to know about her.

"Polly, you're a terrible liar," Trucy said happily. "You know I can see through your lies,"

"Heck, even I knew that you're lying," Mr. Wright teased. "Also the fact that you hugged her completely contradicts your statement,"

They were so persistent, they really wanted to know! They even went all out to cross examine me! "I-it's none of your business! She's just an old friend! Nothing more!"

"Tell us the truth Apollo! Spill the beans! Who is she!?" Trucy asked, with a fiery passion.

"Gnnnggh...! Gaaah! Alright! Fine!" I gave in, they were too strong... "You really want to know?! Alright then!" I took a deep breath, my face red and feeling hot, I shouted, "Her name is Katrina Fang! We were in the same law school! And... And..." I couldn't continue, I just couldn't!

"And what?!" The two waited impatiently. They were all up in my face, so I just let out my secret I didn't want them to know...

"AND SHE WAS MY GIRLFRIEND!!! THERE! ARE YOU GUYS HAPPY?!" I shouted at the top of my lungs, louder than any of my Chords of Steel have ever shouted before. I was panting fast, then finally took a deep breath. When I looked at them, they were surprised, but it was mostly Trucy. Her jaw practically touched the floor. There was nothing but silence.

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There's chapter 2 for you guys. I enjoyed making this chapter even though it's short. I enjoyed it because Trucy and Feenie are cross examining Apollo. But mainly because Phoenix accused him of being a pervert...lol. I guess they were surprised because they didn't think Apollo was a ladies man XD. Trucy and Phoenix are such nosy people. So, why did Apollo did not want them to know about his ex-girlfriend, Katrina? You'll find that out in Chapter 3! (You may know already, but this is set 2 years after GS4)
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Aw, this is cute! I await to see his explanation! :edgy:

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That was cute and quite funny. I actually started giggling out loud during the "cross-examination." Besides, there are few things more adorable then Trucy saying, "Apollo was being very naughty, Daddy!" Very nice. :)
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This is good, can't wait to find out why he didn't want to tell them!

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...Poor Polly. XD
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HOLY OH MY CRACK YOU GUYS ACTUALLY LIKE MY WORK Ahem... Thanks for all the nice comments, everybody! I didn't expect people to like my work! ...Okay, maybe a little. But I appreciate it! Chapter 3 is on it's way, so be patient!
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Chapter 3 all of you! The point of view will still be Apollo in the flashback, but it will be as if it was in the past. GAH! Ooops!

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Chapter Three
How We Met


It was dead silent in the agency. Well, how was I supposed to know they'd be left speechless? Finally, Trucy broke the silence.

"You had a girlfriend?! I can't believe it! You never told me you were such a playboy, Polly! Ahahaha!" she giggled. I turned red and and scratched my head.

"Trucy!" Mr. Wright glared. I was hoping he was concerned that she was teasing me, but I think he only cared about Trucy knowing what "playboy" is.

"Trucy, Katrina was my first girlfriend, and only, girlfriend. I'm not that kind of person," I protested.

"Well, why did you want to keep her a secret Apollo?" Mr. Wright asked.

"Yeah! Relationships like that are worth telling your family!" Trucy said. She did have a point, we were family. But, there was a reason.

"I didn't want you guys to know about her...because I wanted to forget about Katrina,"

Trucy gasped, "What! Why?! She was your first girlfriend! Also, you were really happy when you saw her again anyway! Why would you want to forget about her?!"

"She's right, Justice. You just can't forget about your first relationship," Mr. Wright added, "even I can't forget my first relationship. Freakin' Dahlia Hawthorne..."

"What was that?" I asked, curious.

"Let's just forget that, alright," he answered nervously. "so anyway, why Justice?"

"Alright, but it's gonna be a long story, so you may wanna take a seat," I advised. "It all started in the library in the school. Actually, the way we met there, was the same way I met her again at the mall: By bumping in to her by accident.

4 Years Earlier
Abraham Lincoln University School of Law


"Alright, let's see, where did the librarian say the books for defense attorneys are...?" I said to myself. I finally came to a law school, and I'm aiming for a career as a defense attorney. I was looking for the right book to study from. Just because I just started here, doesn't mean I can't study right away!

"Ah, here's one," I whispered, skimming and scanning the pages. "Yup, all I gotta do, is check this out,"

While walking to the check-out counter, I was thinking about what it would be like as a defense attorney. Oh boy! I can't wait to graduate this place and become a top notch defense attorney! I could get famous... maybe I can even get my own video game! I can see it now, Apollo Justice: Ace Attorney! Gah, but what if I don't do it... No, don't think like that Justice! I wasn't even paying attention when I ran into a young girl carrying like, I dunno, truckloads of books. "Agh!" I tried to sound as quiet as I could, on account that I was in a library.

"Nnagh!" the girl cried as she fell on the floor, along with her books.

Uh-oh! I must've ran into her pretty hard! "I'm sorry! I wasn't paying attention when I was walking!" I tried to apologize. I helped her up.

"Eheh, it's alright," she answered, playfully sticking out her tongue, "I think I got too many books," I took a better look at her, and I just noticed how cute she looked. She was wearing a pink blouse,faded jeans, glasses, and had long, messy, red hair with ruby red eyes that matched. Also a little cute fang on the left side of her mouth. Just looking at her made me blush. I helped her with her books.

"Prosecution?" I read on one of her books.

"Oh, yes!" she replied gleefully, "I'm planning on becoming a prosecutor! Just like my mother!"

"Heh, that's cool. I'm becoming a defense attorney!" I said proud.

"Nice! Uhm, oh yeah! I'm Katrina Fang," she introduced.

"Apollo Justice, pleased to meet you!"

"Same here. Uhm, I think I'm gonna return some of my books, heh..." Katrina said.

"Alright, see you around!"

She nodded, and scurried to the prosecution section. I think I was hypnotized by Katrina, because I just stood there in the middle of the library.

Katrina Fang... "OW!" I was brought back to reality by the librarian hitting me with a ruler.

"Excuse me, but I do believe you were talking out loud, in the library,"

While the elderly woman was lecturing me, I paid no attention. All I could think about... was Katrina. "OW!" she hit me again with a ruler.

"Are you listening to me, whippersnapper?! Kids these days!"

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Alriiiight... so I didn't really tell you guys in detail why Apollo didn't want the to know about Kat... *brick'd* But, it's a start! So yeah, it was deja vu for Apollo! Man those things are scary... Looks like Polly had love at first sight! :bellboy: I dunno if you care but
Spoiler: These are the changes in Katrina's appearance... There's not much, but....
Younger Kat: Longer hair, glasses.
Present Kat: Shorter hair, now has contacts.
I dunno how long this flashback will last... so please bear with me! Did you see some of the references to the games, and by some I mean 2 of them? Heheh. Yes, there is such a law school named after Abraham Lincoln, in L.A. I did research, so what? Oh, and I'm not that creative with names, I know. KATRINA FANG, SHE HAS A FANG TOO. WHAT A COINCIDENCE *brick'd again* A cookie to you if you know who the librarian is :cookie: (It's obvious :D) So, until next chapter...
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I think it's cute. There are some minor grammar issues, but nothing that really interfered with the story. I do have an issue with how you referenced Dahlia in the story and her relationship to Phoenix since your description is inaccurate, but I won't push the issue. Honestly, I think it might work better without the last part of that particular line, but that could just be me. Anyway, it's cute. :) The part with the old woman at the end, whom I'm assuming is Oldbag, made me laugh.
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That was good! Man! i wanna know why he was so reluctant to tell Phoenix and Trucy! which will come out in the next chapter? *hint hint*

Anyway good work, can't wait for chapter5!

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great story so far keep up the good work :)
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