Hard Thinker Fanfics Updated Dec/19/09

Sun May 11, 2008 3:19 pm

hard thinker

whoa, what happened last night?

Gender: Female

Location: in a pit with a pendulum

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 8:19 pm

Posts: 158

Here is the place, I guess, I'll show my fanfictions.
Wow, this is a mess.

Title: 12 Years Ago
Author: hard thinker.
Rating: G? I dunno.
Status: INcomplete.
Pairing: Klavier & Ema
Summary: Klavier's first crush was when he was
12! And it was... Ema! What a coincidence! Will
12 year old Klavier has his first gilfriend? Or not?

Klavier Gavin: 12 years old
Ema Skye: 13 years old
Kristoph Gavin: 20 years old

Spoiler: Chapter 1

Spoiler: Chapter 2

Spoiler: Chapter 3

Spoiler: Chapter 4

Spoiler: Chapter 5

Ema: I’m just glad that something actually happened between us. Now, I won’t be figeting about never having a boyfriend, or I could think of him whenever I sing in the choir, or… I could end up hating him. No you’re supposed to like people, treat them the way you want to be treated. Wait, a second, I’m not going to be treated any way from him, because he moved without telling me! Have to do my homework, my teachers already dislike me… But, I’m only distracting myself from what’s really important to me! Either way, I’m still going to think about him. Well, I give him a letter of love, apologizing for my actions, I bet he’s showing it to everybody in his school, or something. What a prick.
Lana: Ema do your homework, and go to sleep!
Ema: But I have something on my mind!
Lana: You’re really going on with thoughts of that stupid guy? I’ll tell you this, if you have a problem with a person, just stay away from them in your minds, so no matter how close you get, you’ll always be able to hate him.
Ema: What? That’s it! I’m calling one of those popular people!
Lana: How do you know if they want to listen to you? All they want to do, is just talk and talk and talk, about secret loves, and crushes.
Ema: Then who am I going to talk to?!
Lana: Talk to yourself, but do it quietly. Light a candle, because I have to turn out the lights. Meditate, or something. (She leaves, and flicks off the lights.)
Ema: What help you are. (Dials weird popular person.)
Ema: Hey, Geena, is that your name? Yeah. Listen, that cute blonde guy didn’t work out…
Trendy Girl #1: Hey, Ema. I’m on the line with, uh, uh… My friend! Wait a second, are you a boy, or a girl?
Trendy Girl #2: Girl. So, Ema, we were just talking about you.
Trendy Girl #3: Yeah, is it true that you bathe with luminol?
Ema: What?! I w-was- talking about K.G. !
Trendy Girl #2: Really. Nobody cares about that, it’s so last week.
Trendy Girl #1: Now, it’s either you talk about your disguisting habits, or get off the phone, because we have important stuff to do.
Ema: Geena. Wow, I’m surprised at you, I thought you didn’t know what “important,” means, because it isn’t you. (Hangs up.)
Ema: Great, now I have to create a scientific hypothesis on how to even out popular people. Off to the research. (They're probably going to get wasted in a few years, anyway.)

At least she got her mind off of him.

Spoiler: Chapter 6

Title: Lamiroir's Concert
Author: hard thinker
Rating: G? (Or not.) The story changes to my mood.
Status: Complete
Pairing: Machi & Trucy, maybe some implied Valant & Lamiroir.
Summary: Lamiroir and Machi perform another concert at Sunshine Colliseum,
with a new song. With an unstable keyboard, a new song, and tons of pressure,
what will Machi do?

Spoiler: GS4 Ending Read IT

Spoiler: Chapter 1

Spoiler: Chapter 2

Spoiler: Chapter 3

Spoiler: Chapter Four

Spoiler: Chapter Five

"Lamirior? Machi? Where are you?" Trucy kept her hands close to herself, something was different than before. The glistening, sparkly decoration swayed faintly, but there wasn't any feeling left in them. It's almost as if the place was inhabited by nasty zombies. No! Think straight, Trucy, I don't want them to be dead!
"Alright. You go in there and I'll go in here." He really didn't want to be near people now.
"What?! Is this the start of a zombie movie, where we split up, and never see each other again?!"
"Gosh, Trucy, that only happens in other dimensions. You'll be just fine." He entered the room he was standing in front of, which happened to be the bathroom.
"O-Okay." She dissembled into something that looked like a sad young Ema, and pushed the door open.
-----
"Oh, great, it's Lamiroir's." She stared faintly around the room. She giggled.
"They still didn't change the floor tile." Since she was thinking that she was in a sci-fi movie, she had to use strategies that would seem crazy, when you're calm, yet a miracle when you're not. She giggled again.
"I wonder... If there is a secret door on where the tile was removed..." There was nothing.
"Oh. I guess the miracle never happened." Sighing, she plopped on the couch.
"... Hey! I'm hungry! They wouldn't mind if I had some, wouldn't they?" The bowl was absorbed in a few minutes. Trucy sucked each one of her fingers noisily.
"Yum! Ah, okay, I need to check other ro-"
"Hey! Trucy!"
"Ahh!" The bowl of fruit spilled all over the place, and her hands hurt from throwing them up at such a high speed. Where did that come from?!
"Uh. T-Trucy. Up here." Her eyes drifted around until they were on the air vent. She could see a tiny blonde boy sticking his head out.
"What are you doing up there?!"
"Uh. I'll explain later. Go get ladder, up here."
"It's a step ladder!"
"Uh. It is?"
"... I think it is. Daddy told me that all ladders are called step ladders."
"Hmm..."

Trucy climbed up the step ladder, and Machi helped her get in the air vent. He smiled softly, as did Trucy. Through all this, Apollo was still in the bathroom.

Spoiler: Chapter Six

Spoiler: Chapter Seven

Spoiler: Chapter Eight

Title: Alternate Scientist
Author: hard thinker
Rating: Teen? (has cursing and some irrational behavior)
Status: incomplete
Pairing: KlavierxEma in some kind of weird way
Summary: Ema gets the results-and guess what- she isn't a scientist. Will she find an alternative or just end up being Gloomy Skyes all the time?

Spoiler: Chapter One

She was mulling over this subject for a while now. How could she NOT become a forensic scientist? Do you know how many years she spent abroad, all the nights where she didn’t eat, sleep, or even breathe? It’s just so unfair.
So, she decided to become the closest thing. A cop. Sure, she could boss kids around, but it wasn’t as fulfilling as finding evidence and swapping prints and all that cool stuff. The only reason she wanted to be one because it was cool. Maybe that was her problem. Just ‘cause it’s cool?
--
“Hey, you, you can’t go in there.” I sharply told some high school student with a peace sign in his hair hanging out with some magician. His expression was atypical when mixed with his hair and his clothing. His eyebrows sunk low, and he moved his lips downward. He was confused.
“Yeah, but I’m a lawyer, you see?” He pointed to some weird badge on his collar.
“Did I ask? Now get out of here before I pour some of this (unpronounceable) chemical on your head.” I pulled out a test tube with some soda in it.
“Oh, jerkers. Trucy, let’s get out of here.” She pulled on his shirt.
“But, I wanna see the dead body!”
“Kid, the body’s in the coroner’s office. Now scrat.” They both made childish expressions and solemnly walked away.
I looked over to my right. Some crazy old lady was trying to get into the park. Have I seen her before?
“Are you sure we can’t go in?” They both popped up in front of my face, with puppy dog eyes on.
“GET OUT!!!” I pointed to the exit. My teeth were clenched. Klavier popped up just as fast as the other two did.
“Why can’t you just let them in?” What the hell is he trying to do?
“It’s a fucking crime scene, you IDIOT! Do you randomly let strangers into your home?” As stupid as he was, he probably did.
He walked over to the two, and put his arms around their shoulders. They cringed at the feeling, as he shook them.
“But, one’s a lawyer, and the other is the daughter of Phoenix Wright.” My eyes widened.
“Can you please let go of me, Mr. Gavin in second form?”
“Don’t worry, kid, the other one’s in jail.” Him? He had a daughter. She doesn’t look anything like him. I pretended to be peeved.
“… Okay. But, if they break anything, it’s on your ass.” I moved over to let them in.
“Yay!” They squealed and ran in. Doesn’t he have something better to do, like actually getting evidence for his case?! As Klavier passed, he whispered something in my ear. Man, this space is tight.
“I’ll definitely get Wright’s address for you.” I blushed.
“Shut up, I can get it myself.” I stood guard at the entrace like before. I could hear behind my back, Klavier harassing them another time, while they tried to examine something. Poor kids. So young. They don’t know what an idiot he is. Oh, well, I told them to scram. They had their chance. Stupid kids. (That was, until I saw how the peace student was in court. Just like Wright. It’s like he’s being channeled or something.)

Whoa, this is so confusing.

These are by Rini Mazaki. Thanks.
Jeez, I thought I was dead!
I must have been resurrected...

Last edited by hard thinker on Sat Dec 19, 2009 3:27 pm, edited 5 times in total.

Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Sun May 11, 2008 5:33 pm

root_beer_junkie

Ac#e to the rescue!!! Avvy be Leeling.

Gender: Female

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Rank: Prosecutor

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I like the writing style, it's a nice break from the usual paragraph form.
M'aww, poor Klavier. :(

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Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Wed May 14, 2008 3:44 am

hard thinker

whoa, what happened last night?

Gender: Female

Location: in a pit with a pendulum

Rank: Decisive Witness

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Posts: 158

Thank you people!

I am happy people wrote back!
Umm.. It was supposed to be made into a comic book,
but then I realized I couldn't draw. Anything.

These are by Rini Mazaki. Thanks.
Jeez, I thought I was dead!
I must have been resurrected...

Last edited by hard thinker on Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:22 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Thu May 15, 2008 12:33 am

Julia...<3

I'm a rockstar and a defense's aide.

Gender: Female

Location: The Philippines, ja?

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Mon May 12, 2008 1:10 am

Posts: 273

But can you write more of this?

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Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Thu May 15, 2008 1:13 am

hard thinker

whoa, what happened last night?

Gender: Female

Location: in a pit with a pendulum

Rank: Decisive Witness

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Posts: 158

I CAN write more of this, but I don't know if It'll work.
Can you peoplez expand on this with your imaginations.
I expanded this story all starting from one fact:
Klavier and Kristoph have the same initials.
So, I don't know. Tell me a request? <----- am i supposed to say this?
Hmm....

These are by Rini Mazaki. Thanks.
Jeez, I thought I was dead!
I must have been resurrected...

Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Thu May 15, 2008 2:02 am

Julia...<3

I'm a rockstar and a defense's aide.

Gender: Female

Location: The Philippines, ja?

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Mon May 12, 2008 1:10 am

Posts: 273

...Um, I request a new chapter? LOL.

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Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Thu May 15, 2008 9:30 pm

hard thinker

whoa, what happened last night?

Gender: Female

Location: in a pit with a pendulum

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 8:19 pm

Posts: 158

Spoiler: Chapter 2

Ta da! Well, was it good?
LOL! Ema's psychic!!!

Tell me. Now.

These are by Rini Mazaki. Thanks.
Jeez, I thought I was dead!
I must have been resurrected...

Last edited by hard thinker on Thu Jan 15, 2009 3:05 am, edited 2 times in total.

Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Fri May 16, 2008 12:36 am

Julia...<3

I'm a rockstar and a defense's aide.

Gender: Female

Location: The Philippines, ja?

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Mon May 12, 2008 1:10 am

Posts: 273

Kyool!!!
Can't wait!

I love my life as much as I love to change my avvies and sigs.
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Nick Jonas has diabetes. Make sure he doesn't die!!

Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Sun May 18, 2008 4:44 am

root_beer_junkie

Ac#e to the rescue!!! Avvy be Leeling.

Gender: Female

Location: Donuts.

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Tue Apr 08, 2008 4:11 pm

Posts: 716

You know what's so funny? I can really picture that happening! LOL XD

Thanks to the combined awesomeness of Ceres and the Vickinator, I shall TAKE OVER THE WORLD!
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Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Sat May 24, 2008 12:13 pm

FlashPoint

Pleeaase don't hurt me.

Gender: Male

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Thu Mar 27, 2008 4:16 pm

Posts: 225

Poor Klavier. And Kristoph.

Thanks Elriel for the sig!

Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Tue May 27, 2008 11:37 am

Missile. x

Where's Pikachu? ...I mean Wally!

Gender: Female

Location: Cannock of course...like you know where that is?

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Tue Apr 01, 2008 4:25 pm

Posts: 602

Wow i like it, it's good, will there be anymore chapters? (I hope so) but i gotta ask, what was Kristoph thinking dating a 13 year old girl if he's like 20? Meh it was a good story anyway and i can totally imagine kristoph only talking about Lawyers and Prosecutors. That bit made me laugh. Oh and the bit where Ema says "i get a strong feeling of him being a mass muderer" that bit made me LOL

:phoenix:

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Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Tue May 27, 2008 2:26 pm

root_beer_junkie

Ac#e to the rescue!!! Avvy be Leeling.

Gender: Female

Location: Donuts.

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Tue Apr 08, 2008 4:11 pm

Posts: 716

Wait... Did you say you wanted this to be a comic? I can kinda draw cartoons... Nah, I don't have a scanner. Never mind. :payne:

Thanks to the combined awesomeness of Ceres and the Vickinator, I shall TAKE OVER THE WORLD!
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Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Tue May 27, 2008 9:25 pm

hard thinker

whoa, what happened last night?

Gender: Female

Location: in a pit with a pendulum

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 8:19 pm

Posts: 158

I am glad people liked my story.
Kristoph dated her because

Spoiler:

There could be more; I am lazy.

These are by Rini Mazaki. Thanks.
Jeez, I thought I was dead!
I must have been resurrected...

Last edited by hard thinker on Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:24 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Thu May 29, 2008 7:09 am

kana-hajime

Loving Shi-Long Lang~!

Gender: Female

Rank: Medium-in-training

Joined: Tue Jan 15, 2008 10:09 am

Posts: 345

I love your story so far, looking forward to more! =D
I had a go at drawing lil Klavi after reading your story, hope you like it XD

Spoiler:

DeviantART - Fanart Thread

Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Thu May 29, 2008 8:43 pm

hard thinker

whoa, what happened last night?

Gender: Female

Location: in a pit with a pendulum

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 8:19 pm

Posts: 158

Wow!
You draw better than I do.

Third chapter is hiding somewhere.
*ahem* I am LAZY!

These are by Rini Mazaki. Thanks.
Jeez, I thought I was dead!
I must have been resurrected...

Last edited by hard thinker on Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:24 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Fri May 30, 2008 9:01 pm

Aviv

Rise and shine, Mr. Judge.

Gender: Male

Location: Hugging MMF!

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Wed Jan 09, 2008 12:55 pm

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"Wow. this guy isn't handsome. i'll knock him out!"

Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Sat May 31, 2008 1:36 pm

hard thinker

whoa, what happened last night?

Gender: Female

Location: in a pit with a pendulum

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 8:19 pm

Posts: 158

Spoiler: Chapter 3

HE moved. End of Chapter 3! Yay! It was short.

These are by Rini Mazaki. Thanks.
Jeez, I thought I was dead!
I must have been resurrected...

Last edited by hard thinker on Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:25 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Sat May 31, 2008 1:51 pm

Julia...<3

I'm a rockstar and a defense's aide.

Gender: Female

Location: The Philippines, ja?

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Mon May 12, 2008 1:10 am

Posts: 273

ACK! He moved! MOOORRRE!

I love my life as much as I love to change my avvies and sigs.
My Sprite Thread ~ My Fanart Thread ~ My Avs and Sigs thread
Nick Jonas has diabetes. Make sure he doesn't die!!

Lamiroir's Concert- Machi & Trucy

Sat Jun 14, 2008 7:22 pm

hard thinker

whoa, what happened last night?

Gender: Female

Location: in a pit with a pendulum

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 8:19 pm

Posts: 158

Title: Lamiroir's Concert
Author: Me
Rating: G? (Or not.) The story changes to my mood. :yogi:

Status: Incomplete
Pairing: Machi & Trucy, maybe some implied Valant & Lamiroir.
Summary: Lamiroir and Machi perform another concert at Sunshine Colliseum,
with a new song. With an unstable keyboard, a new song, and tons of pressure,
what will Machi do?

Spoiler: GS4 Ending

Spoiler: Chapter 1 Saving Space

These are by Rini Mazaki. Thanks.
Jeez, I thought I was dead!
I must have been resurrected...

Last edited by hard thinker on Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:45 pm, edited 2 times in total.

Re: Lamiroir's Concert- Machi & Trucy

Sat Jun 14, 2008 7:25 pm

root_beer_junkie

Ac#e to the rescue!!! Avvy be Leeling.

Gender: Female

Location: Donuts.

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Tue Apr 08, 2008 4:11 pm

Posts: 716

Aw, that's so cute! Next chapter please! ^^

Thanks to the combined awesomeness of Ceres and the Vickinator, I shall TAKE OVER THE WORLD!
...Just kidding. But check out the sig they made me!

Re: Lamiroir's Concert- Machi & Trucy

Sat Jun 14, 2008 11:36 pm

hard thinker

whoa, what happened last night?

Gender: Female

Location: in a pit with a pendulum

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 8:19 pm

Posts: 158

Thanks you.

Spoiler: Chapter 2

~~Cuteness Overload!~~ Analissa, mentioned in the story, is one of my OC's.

These are by Rini Mazaki. Thanks.
Jeez, I thought I was dead!
I must have been resurrected...

Last edited by hard thinker on Wed Sep 17, 2008 8:29 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Re: Lamiroir's Concert- Machi & Trucy

Sun Jun 15, 2008 12:27 am

root_beer_junkie

Ac#e to the rescue!!! Avvy be Leeling.

Gender: Female

Location: Donuts.

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Tue Apr 08, 2008 4:11 pm

Posts: 716

Nicely done, hard thinker! ...Sure, I'd like to know more about Analissa. ((That's a pretty name, btw.))

Thanks to the combined awesomeness of Ceres and the Vickinator, I shall TAKE OVER THE WORLD!
...Just kidding. But check out the sig they made me!

Re: Lamiroir's Concert- Machi & Trucy

Sun Jun 15, 2008 2:23 am

hard thinker

whoa, what happened last night?

Gender: Female

Location: in a pit with a pendulum

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 8:19 pm

Posts: 158

Spoiler:

These are by Rini Mazaki. Thanks.
Jeez, I thought I was dead!
I must have been resurrected...

Last edited by hard thinker on Wed Sep 17, 2008 8:31 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Re: Lamiroir's Concert- Machi & Trucy

Mon Jul 07, 2008 4:19 pm

Missile. x

Where's Pikachu? ...I mean Wally!

Gender: Female

Location: Cannock of course...like you know where that is?

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Tue Apr 01, 2008 4:25 pm

Posts: 602

Hey, is there any more to this? i wanna know what happens next! Machi and Trucy! Sooo cute!

If it's not the end, PLEASE Write more!

:phoenix:

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Re: Lamiroir's Concert- Machi & Trucy

Mon Jul 07, 2008 6:22 pm

Neon Lemmy Koopa

Yo Dawg!

Gender: Male

Location: Houston, Texas

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Wed Oct 17, 2007 12:57 am

Posts: 1221

This is nice. cant wait for more!

Re: Lamiroir's Concert- Machi & Trucy

Tue Jul 08, 2008 6:43 pm

hard thinker

whoa, what happened last night?

Gender: Female

Location: in a pit with a pendulum

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 8:19 pm

Posts: 158

Thanks for the comments.
It isn't the end of the story. Just only of the world...
I have another chapter awaiting.
It's super funny, but, it needs editing.
I am super lazy, I can't even finish that other one.

Anyway, I'll probably post it here today.

These are by Rini Mazaki. Thanks.
Jeez, I thought I was dead!
I must have been resurrected...

Last edited by hard thinker on Tue Sep 02, 2008 8:19 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Re: Lamiroir's Concert- Machi & Trucy

Tue Jul 08, 2008 8:06 pm

hard thinker

whoa, what happened last night?

Gender: Female

Location: in a pit with a pendulum

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 8:19 pm

Posts: 158

Spoiler: Chapter 3

Hehe... It's kind of short and goes very quickly.
That's all I could think of.

These are by Rini Mazaki. Thanks.
Jeez, I thought I was dead!
I must have been resurrected...

Last edited by hard thinker on Wed Sep 17, 2008 8:33 pm, edited 2 times in total.

Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Sat Aug 16, 2008 10:51 pm

theatrejunkie

Keep your hand at the level of your eyes

Gender: None specified

Location: A theatre (duh)

Rank: Desk Jockey

Joined: Thu Jul 31, 2008 1:23 am

Posts: 85

oh the bittersweet first name issue. poor kristoph. good writing, though.

"Beginning today, treat everyone you meet as if they were going to be dead by midnight. Extend to them all the carekindness, and understanding you can muster, and do it with no thought of any reward." --Og Mandino

Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Sun Aug 17, 2008 1:03 am

PrincessPhilomena

Avatar by me ^^

Gender: Female

Location: Canada~ :)

Rank: Desk Jockey

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Posts: 142

Aww, this is cute :pearly:

I loved your bit about the Snackoos!
Please write more! <3

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Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Sun Aug 17, 2008 11:06 am

DramaticaXIV2

Otaku, #1 Machi fan, #2 Machi Fan

Gender: Male

Location: Engl- Ooh, over 3000 posts. (England)

Rank: Ace Attorney

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Due to being a Stickler, just with English instead of Science, I'm not sure I care for your writing style.

However, looking past that, this is pretty good. I love Ema thinking that Kristoph may be a mass murderer and knocking him out. Wait, 20 and 13, hmm...

I also like seeing how Ema got her first taste of snackoos, even though she would have eaten lots in AA. Bring Lana in and this will be perfect.

ALL GLORY TO THE HYPNOGANT

Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Sun Aug 17, 2008 9:23 pm

hard thinker

whoa, what happened last night?

Gender: Female

Location: in a pit with a pendulum

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 8:19 pm

Posts: 158

I can't believe how long ago I updated this.
Yeah, I don't really care for the way I wrote the chapters so far.

Spoiler: Chapter 4

----
I may start drawing it into a comic or something.
And something that have little connections to this.

These are by Rini Mazaki. Thanks.
Jeez, I thought I was dead!
I must have been resurrected...

Last edited by hard thinker on Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:27 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Re: 12 Years Ago- Klavier & Ema

Mon Aug 18, 2008 6:03 pm

PrincessPhilomena

Avatar by me ^^

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Location: Canada~ :)

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Heehee...I loved that bit where Lana threatens to take away Ema's luminol testing fluid :edgy:

Please post the next chapter soon!!! :accordion-head:

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Re: Lamiroir's Concert- Machi & Trucy

Tue Sep 02, 2008 1:06 am

theatrejunkie

Keep your hand at the level of your eyes

Gender: None specified

Location: A theatre (duh)

Rank: Desk Jockey

Joined: Thu Jul 31, 2008 1:23 am

Posts: 85

SO CUTE!

Although I highly dislike this pairing (that's what OCs are for) I thought it was ADORABLE!!!

"Beginning today, treat everyone you meet as if they were going to be dead by midnight. Extend to them all the carekindness, and understanding you can muster, and do it with no thought of any reward." --Og Mandino

Re: Lamiroir's Concert- Machi & Trucy

Wed Sep 03, 2008 1:39 am

hard thinker

whoa, what happened last night?

Gender: Female

Location: in a pit with a pendulum

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I slacked off a lot, and I forgot about this!

Spoiler: Chapter Whatsit now?

Spoiler: The next chapter of whatsit

"Lamirior? Machi? Where are you?" Trucy kept her hands close to herself, something was different than before. The glistening, sparkly decoration swayed faintly, but there wasn't any feeling left in them. It's almost as if the place was inhabited by nasty zombies. No! Think straight, Trucy, I don't want them to be dead!
"Alright. You go in there and I'll go in here." He really didn't want to be near people now.
"What?! Is this the start of a zombie movie, where we split up, and never see each other again?!"
"Gosh, Trucy, that only happens in other dimensions. You'll be just fine." He entered the room he was standing in front of, which happened to be the bathroom.
"O-Okay." She dissembled into something that looked like a sad young Ema, and pushed the door open.
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"Oh, great, it's Lamiroir's." She stared faintly around the room. She giggled.
"They still didn't change the floor tile." Since she was thinking that she was in a sci-fi movie, she had to use strategies that would seem crazy, when you're calm, yet a miracle when you're not. She giggled again.
"I wonder... If there is a secret door on where the tile was removed..." There was nothing.
"Oh. I guess the miracle never happened." Sighing, she plopped on the couch.
"... Hey! I'm hungry! They wouldn't mind if I had some, wouldn't they?" The bowl was absorbed in a few minutes. Trucy sucked each one of her fingers noisily.
"Yum! Ah, okay, I need to check other ro-"
"Hey! Trucy!"
"Ahh!" The bowl of fruit spilled all over the place, and her hands hurt from throwing them up at such a high speed. Where did that come from?!
"Uh. T-Trucy. Up here." Her eyes drifted around until they were on the air vent. She could see a tiny blonde boy sticking his head out.
"What are you doing up there?!"
"Uh. I'll explain later. Go get ladder, up here."
"It's a step ladder!"
"Uh. It is?"
"... I think it is. Daddy told me that all ladders are called step ladders."
"Hmm..."

Trucy climbed up the step ladder, and Machi helped her get in the air vent. He smiled softly, as did Trucy. Through all this, Apollo was still in the bathroom.

These are by Rini Mazaki. Thanks.
Jeez, I thought I was dead!
I must have been resurrected...

Last edited by hard thinker on Wed Sep 17, 2008 8:34 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Re: Lamiroir's Concert- Machi & Trucy

Sat Sep 06, 2008 10:55 pm

theatrejunkie

Keep your hand at the level of your eyes

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I hope the fact he's in the air vent actually makes sense and isn't just a lame excuse to get them alone together.

But even if it is, write more anyway.

"Beginning today, treat everyone you meet as if they were going to be dead by midnight. Extend to them all the carekindness, and understanding you can muster, and do it with no thought of any reward." --Og Mandino

Re: Lamiroir's Concert- Machi & Trucy

Wed Sep 17, 2008 6:54 pm

Missile. x

Where's Pikachu? ...I mean Wally!

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Wow! I love the story so far and can't wait for the next chapter! I really need to know what happens!

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Re: Lamiroir's Concert- Machi & Trucy

Wed Sep 17, 2008 9:01 pm

hard thinker

whoa, what happened last night?

Gender: Female

Location: in a pit with a pendulum

Rank: Decisive Witness

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Posts: 158

My computer went BOOM, with all my documents.
I'll go search for my other chapters.

These are by Rini Mazaki. Thanks.
Jeez, I thought I was dead!
I must have been resurrected...

Re: Lamiroir's Concert- Machi & Trucy

Wed Sep 17, 2008 9:11 pm

DramaticaXIV2

Otaku, #1 Machi fan, #2 Machi Fan

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Nice. I love MAchi, obviously... Except Phoenix is a ladder person, IIRC...

ALL GLORY TO THE HYPNOGANT

Re: Lamiroir's Concert- Machi & Trucy

Sun Sep 21, 2008 2:12 pm

theatrejunkie

Keep your hand at the level of your eyes

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I'm sorry hardthinker. I hope your computer fixes itself.

when you find the documents, post them.

:(

"Beginning today, treat everyone you meet as if they were going to be dead by midnight. Extend to them all the carekindness, and understanding you can muster, and do it with no thought of any reward." --Og Mandino

Re: Lamiroir's Concert- Machi & Trucy

Sat Sep 27, 2008 4:04 pm

hard thinker

whoa, what happened last night?

Gender: Female

Location: in a pit with a pendulum

Rank: Decisive Witness

Joined: Mon May 05, 2008 8:19 pm

Posts: 158

So, my documents were deleted for more room.
I re-wrote it, and I think it sounds better than my memory of the other one. ~~But, it still sucks.~~

Spoiler: Chapter of the Split Whatsit

These are by Rini Mazaki. Thanks.
Jeez, I thought I was dead!
I must have been resurrected...