The first time

Thu May 08, 2008 4:15 pm

Deciconjustice

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Title: The First ime
Author:Deciconjustice
Rating:pg-13
Genre:Drama?
Status: not yet
Pairing:none really if their is its unintentional
Summary:its about De Killer. :radio:

CHORDS OF STEEL!!!!!!!! :odo-objection:

I LOVE COFFEE!!!!!! :Godot-object:

To the gentleman who just said that, excuse me but would you like to die? :shelly:

Re: The first time

Tue May 13, 2008 4:06 pm

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Chapter 1

Pant Pant "Never in my day would i ever think it would come to this." "argh!" pain shot through the man's leg. "Cursed police, they actually were ready, brought a sniper." This mans name was Shelly de Killer, a professional assasin. And for the first time, ever he had been shot. "God!" he shouted. He had managed to do his job. Killing the target, placing the card but then those cursed police.

When he reached his hidden mansion, he inspected his wound. A long gash along his leg was there, the bullet had only grazed his leg. "Damn" de Killer cursed. Another shot of pain. He looked down and there was his cat, Shoe.

Spoiler:

"Hello Shoe" He said through clentched teeth. Every step was pain. "A flaw, thats what this is." he thought out loud. "ill take care of it tomorrow" he decided "Now i must rest"

K i know its short but bear with me im new :odoroki:

CHORDS OF STEEL!!!!!!!! :odo-objection:

I LOVE COFFEE!!!!!! :Godot-object:

To the gentleman who just said that, excuse me but would you like to die? :shelly:

Re: The first time

Wed May 21, 2008 4:04 pm

Deciconjustice

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comments?

CHORDS OF STEEL!!!!!!!! :odo-objection:

I LOVE COFFEE!!!!!! :Godot-object:

To the gentleman who just said that, excuse me but would you like to die? :shelly:

Re: The first time

Sat May 24, 2008 8:27 pm

Furtzy

yeah so I left.

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It's... Okay.

It's not what you'd call great, but you're just beginning, right? ^.^

Re: The first time

Tue May 27, 2008 3:44 pm

Deciconjustice

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yes and i might be a while home school etc

CHORDS OF STEEL!!!!!!!! :odo-objection:

I LOVE COFFEE!!!!!! :Godot-object:

To the gentleman who just said that, excuse me but would you like to die? :shelly:

Re: The first time

Thu May 29, 2008 4:05 pm

Deciconjustice

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ok lets do it!!!

de Killer was woken by the sound of rain. He sat up and pain shot through his leg."ahhh!""meow" He glanced down to see Shoe at the foot of his bed. "good morning Shoe, hopefully we will get a client today." Remembering what he said yesterday. "ok lets take caree of this bullet." He had taken out a medical kit which had remained untouched for all his career....until now. As he applied alcohal (dont they use that?) the sting of it woke him up completely."mppph" he held back a scream. he took twezers and removed the bullet. he couldnt hold it "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

CHORDS OF STEEL!!!!!!!! :odo-objection:

I LOVE COFFEE!!!!!! :Godot-object:

To the gentleman who just said that, excuse me but would you like to die? :shelly:

Re: The first time

Thu May 29, 2008 4:06 pm

Deciconjustice

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comments i know its short but hey so much to do so little time to do it

CHORDS OF STEEL!!!!!!!! :odo-objection:

I LOVE COFFEE!!!!!! :Godot-object:

To the gentleman who just said that, excuse me but would you like to die? :shelly:

Re: The first time

Sun Jun 01, 2008 8:25 pm

ManfredVonKarma

Fascinating! Can you prove this, Wright?

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Shoe rules!!!! :shoe:

I am Perfect!!

:gant-clap:

Good show, Mr. VonKarma!

Re: The first time

Mon Jun 16, 2008 5:37 pm

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general luigi comments?

CHORDS OF STEEL!!!!!!!! :odo-objection:

I LOVE COFFEE!!!!!! :Godot-object:

To the gentleman who just said that, excuse me but would you like to die? :shelly:

Re: The first time

Mon Jun 16, 2008 5:53 pm

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Okay back to work

____________________________________________CH3________________________________________________

Shelly was downstairs drinking tea when it happened. The mail truck drove by. "Shoe get the mail." he ordered politly. Shoe just sat there. ......"Please." he added. "meow" Shoe trotted out the door. He read the news, the headlines read: New Defense Attorney Finds His own Mentor Guilty. and: Prosecutor Released From prison aAter 7 Years. He skimmed the first article "*mumble mumble Apollo Justice mumble mumble Kristoph Gavin mumble mumble WHAT!!, Phoenix Wright?!" He then read the article in full. Then he read the next."mumble mumble prosecutor mumble mumble coffee mumble mumble blind." De Killer thought to himself "hmmmmm.....Godot" his thought s were interrupted with a "MEOW" De Killer glanced down, apparently Shoe had been trying to get his atention for some time now. " Ahh thank you Sh-" There was a package in Shoe's mouth. hello whats this? it was a transiever. "Hello Mr De Killer, lets talk buisness."

DA DADA DA DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

CHORDS OF STEEL!!!!!!!! :odo-objection:

I LOVE COFFEE!!!!!! :Godot-object:

To the gentleman who just said that, excuse me but would you like to die? :shelly:

Re: The first time

Mon Jun 16, 2008 5:55 pm

Deciconjustice

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Okay back to work

____________________________________________CH3________________________________________________

Shelly was downstairs drinking tea when it happened. The mail truck drove by. "Shoe get the mail." he ordered politly. Shoe just sat there. ......"Please." he added. "meow" Shoe trotted out the door. He read the news, the headlines read: New Defense Attorney Finds His own Mentor Guilty. and: Prosecutor Released From prison aAter 7 Years. He skimmed the first article "*mumble mumble Apollo Justice mumble mumble Kristoph Gavin mumble mumble WHAT!!, Phoenix Wright?!" He then read the article in full. Then he read the next."mumble mumble prosecutor mumble mumble coffee mumble mumble blind." De Killer thought to himself "hmmmmm.....Godot" his thought s were interrupted with a "MEOW" De Killer glanced down, apparently Shoe had been trying to get his atention for some time now. " Ahh thank you Sh-" There was a package in Shoe's mouth. hello whats this? it was a transiever. "Hello Mr De Killer, lets talk buisness."

DA DADA DA DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

CHORDS OF STEEL!!!!!!!! :odo-objection:

I LOVE COFFEE!!!!!! :Godot-object:

To the gentleman who just said that, excuse me but would you like to die? :shelly:

Re: The first time

Mon Jun 16, 2008 6:05 pm

Deciconjustice

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double post my bad :udgy:

CHORDS OF STEEL!!!!!!!! :odo-objection:

I LOVE COFFEE!!!!!! :Godot-object:

To the gentleman who just said that, excuse me but would you like to die? :shelly:

Re: The first time

Sun Jun 22, 2008 2:12 pm

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De Killer stared at the transiever (spelling?) "Hello i assume you have a hit?" "Exactly Mr. De Killer sharp as always. My target is ....Phoenix Wright." "I beg your pardon?" Shelly responded. "ahh yes you have had dealings with him before.... havent you Mr. De killer." The man mused. Shelly then inquired, "your name good sir. I will not perform my duties unless I have your name." "ahh yes formal as always Mr. De Killer. My name is Kristoph Gavin"

...The plot thickens. comments?

CHORDS OF STEEL!!!!!!!! :odo-objection:

I LOVE COFFEE!!!!!! :Godot-object:

To the gentleman who just said that, excuse me but would you like to die? :shelly:

Re: The first time

Sun Jun 22, 2008 2:12 pm

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De Killer stared at the transiever (spelling?) "Hello i assume you have a hit?" "Exactly Mr. De Killer sharp as always. My target is ....Phoenix Wright." "I beg your pardon?" Shelly responded. "ahh yes you have had dealings with him before.... havent you Mr. De killer." The man mused. Shelly then inquired, "your name good sir. I will not perform my duties unless I have your name." "ahh yes formal as always Mr. De Killer. My name is Kristoph Gavin"

...The plot thickens. comments?

CHORDS OF STEEL!!!!!!!! :odo-objection:

I LOVE COFFEE!!!!!! :Godot-object:

To the gentleman who just said that, excuse me but would you like to die? :shelly:

Re: The first time

Sun Jun 22, 2008 2:13 pm

Deciconjustice

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ARGH DOUBLE POST CURSES

CHORDS OF STEEL!!!!!!!! :odo-objection:

I LOVE COFFEE!!!!!! :Godot-object:

To the gentleman who just said that, excuse me but would you like to die? :shelly:

Re: The first time

Mon Jun 23, 2008 6:40 pm

ManfredVonKarma

Fascinating! Can you prove this, Wright?

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Interesting turn of events....pretty good. WRITE MORE!! :gant:

I am Perfect!!

:gant-clap:

Good show, Mr. VonKarma!

Re: The first time

Tue Jun 24, 2008 8:16 pm

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Anyways

CH 4
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The place was nice 'hmm this man has a good taste in food if not enemies' De killer thought. "Ah Mr.De killer we meet at last." A man with unusually styled hair said. 'if good taste was jail' De killer finished. "Mr. Gavin I presume" De killer said as he motioned to an empty table "lets talk shall we, about... business" De killer started. "Indeed" Gavin continued. "First things first" De killer said while pulling out a contract. "A contract to seal our trust, sign here, here ,here not there there and signature here and done" "and my target is P-" "Phoenix Wright you told me already" De Killer finished "How, where, when, how much, and why" De killer questioned in an extremely professional way. Gavin responded,"Pistol, outside a courtroom, midnight, 100,000 dollars, and BECAUSE HE IS THE REASON I AM IN HERE. "Fine" De killer responded. and turned away without a second glance 'hmm' he thought ' i forgot to feed Shoe today'

CHORDS OF STEEL!!!!!!!! :odo-objection:

I LOVE COFFEE!!!!!! :Godot-object:

To the gentleman who just said that, excuse me but would you like to die? :shelly:

Re: The first time

Wed Jun 25, 2008 2:28 am

ManfredVonKarma

Fascinating! Can you prove this, Wright?

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.............. :shoe:

is the best

I am Perfect!!

:gant-clap:

Good show, Mr. VonKarma!