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KrazyKaro wrote:
All seem to be fine but the hand one i think needs to be slowed down. Slightly too fast. To be honest somthings bugging me with the angry one. Maybe it ijust where it goes back to the mouth, it looks slightly weird. I think i needs an angry mouth. It seems to go from happy straight to angry.

I hate animation ones they confuse the hell out of me. But there good and the othe two seem to be fine. I REALLY like the Double thumbs up one. :D

I'll work on it :will:
also, new backgrounds, what do you think?
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Not too shabby, but the first one looks pretty irritating due to being mostly just mirrored on both sides. Nature never looks that symmetrical - Try distinguishing the two riversides with more details on the cliffs and the surroundings.
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Perrydotto wrote:
Not too shabby, but the first one looks pretty irritating due to being mostly just mirrored on both sides. Nature never looks that symmetrical - Try distinguishing the two riversides with more details on the cliffs and the surroundings.

like this?
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DefenceLawyer wrote:
Perrydotto wrote:
Not too shabby, but the first one looks pretty irritating due to being mostly just mirrored on both sides. Nature never looks that symmetrical - Try distinguishing the two riversides with more details on the cliffs and the surroundings.

like this?
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also, a cleaned up park:
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Wow, amazing. That river one...it seems to be an edit of some of Hazakura's features but...I can't pull it apart. It's so well done.

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DefenceLawyer wrote:
DefenceLawyer wrote:
Perrydotto wrote:
Not too shabby, but the first one looks pretty irritating due to being mostly just mirrored on both sides. Nature never looks that symmetrical - Try distinguishing the two riversides with more details on the cliffs and the surroundings.

like this?
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Yes, better, but the island in the middle with the tree on it is still VERY symmetrical.
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I think the bg edits are great!
My only suggestion is for the 3rd one: for the trees on the left, it might be nice to darken the trees that aren't in the foreground to separate them out a little more from the leftmost one in the front. Just a little shadow at the edges would probably do the trick.
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Lynx wrote:
I think the bg edits are great!
My only suggestion is for the 3rd one: for the trees on the left, it might be nice to darken the trees that aren't in the foreground to separate them out a little more from the leftmost one in the front. Just a little shadow at the edges would probably do the trick.

thank you everyone, Im working on them now,
also a little cleaning up later and...
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any critisisim? :will:
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thank you everyone, Im working on them now,
also a little cleaning up later and...
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any critisisim? :will:

Woah, I really like this! This is definately useful (Was getting sick of seeing that spilled paint on the door lol)

And, if you don't mind, may I use it for a sig I'm making?
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nekonohime wrote:
DefenceLawyer wrote:
thank you everyone, Im working on them now,
also a little cleaning up later and...
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any critisisim? :will:

Woah, I really like this! This is definately useful (Was getting sick of seeing that spilled paint on the door lol)

And, if you don't mind, may I use it for a sig I'm making?

of course :will:
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Thanks! :D
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Thanks! :D

your welcome, just make sure to show me it once you've done :will:
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update!
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update!
I have made a judge for my fan game:
Judge Rainford:
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you like? :will:
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Not bad, but I suggest taking a look at his hands on the newspaper sprite again: Nobody holds a newspaper like that. Check poses and reference to fix the hands and it should be fine!

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Not bad, but I suggest taking a look at his hands on the newspaper sprite again: Nobody holds a newspaper like that. Check poses and reference to fix the hands and it should be fine!

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thanks :will: I'll try and edit it :will:
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update! Older Characters!
Spoiler:
Image-Gumshoe Chief of police
Image-everyone can become a hobo
Image-Chief of crinimal affairs
Image-Prosecutor Maya Fey
Image Image-Older Miles
Image-older Godot

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DefenceLawyer wrote:
update! Older Characters!
Spoiler:
Image-Gumshoe Chief of police
Image-everyone can become a hobo
Image-Chief of crinimal affairs
Image-Prosecutor Maya Fey
Image Image-Older Miles
Image-older Godot


OMG! your older miles looks very good! i think i made too a older miles... If i finished my Apollo :will:
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Sprite-boy wrote:
DefenceLawyer wrote:
update! Older Characters!
Spoiler:
Image-Gumshoe Chief of police
Image-everyone can become a hobo
Image-Chief of crinimal affairs
Image-Prosecutor Maya Fey
Image Image-Older Miles
Image-older Godot


OMG! your older miles looks very good! i think i made too a older miles... If i finished my Apollo :will:

thanks, I'm working on a maya zoom now,
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My only problem is the Chief of Criminal Affairs Maggey looks too similar to Percei's. Good work on the others though.
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DefenceLawyer wrote:
update! Older Characters!
Spoiler:
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:minuki:- this is your future maya fey!

:sad-maya:- no.... that can't be true....
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My only problem is the Chief of Criminal Affairs Maggey looks too similar to Percei's. Good work on the others though.

Percei did one?
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He did a Pilot Gumshoe then Maggey as his attendant however, your one looks quite similar, coincidence of course.
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He did a Pilot Gumshoe then Maggey as his attendant however, your one looks quite similar, coincidence of course.

oh...I'm sorry, I'll go and find his thread now
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ok then,
first some phoenix aid sprites Im working on:
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and a revamp of my old sprite:
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DefenceLawyer wrote:
ok then,
first some phoenix aid sprites Im working on:
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and a revamp of my old sprite:
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phoenix's forehead looks kinda weird, but good work.
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You need to clean up his face and hair a little.
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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The second Phoenix from the left needs quite some work with his forehead.
Especially the area over his eyebrow. It like he had no forehead on that side of the head.
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"...Naturally."

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DefenceLawyer wrote:
ok then,
first some phoenix aid sprites Im working on:
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and a revamp of my old sprite:
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They are pretty cool. You may want to erase the stubble on the first one. And heighten his forehead on the second one. :phoenix:
Engaged to Reiji!
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Credit to Nadindi for the awesome sig! :D
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Update!
I am working on Larry attorney sprites... for no reason at all :will:
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Seems interesting.
*waiting for **** YOU! -pose ;)*
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Hahaha cool, larry as a DA? I think we all know what kind of clients he would defend.
Oh, you forgot about the tounge on one of the poses
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upDATE!
Spoiler:
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Spoiler: Edits of ME Concept
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Random Victim
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We have an update! Look at the front page :will:
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Eion Ville looks fierce.
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¢ħłөвø $ħөЌª wrote:
Eion Ville looks fierce.

Do you get the pun? :will:
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I have updates,
first a small revamp of my older pearl:
Spoiler:
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Then a new GK sprite,
Spoiler: Blanc Bleu
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Then I have a proto badger that I'm working on:
Spoiler:
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and a younger gant I'm working on:
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...and that's all folks :godot:
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DefenceLawyer wrote:
I have updates,
first a small revamp of my older pearl:
Spoiler:
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Because it still looks like a Plucy...

...

Other sprites look good. I can't wait to see the final version of Proto Badger/
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Tap wrote:
DefenceLawyer wrote:
I have updates,
first a small revamp of my older pearl:
Spoiler:
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Because it still looks like a Plucy...

...

Other sprites look good. I can't wait to see the final version of Proto Badger/

still? Is it the hair or the facial features?
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I quite like Eion Ville's sprite. ^^

But, yeah, those white borders on some of those later sprites... :adrian:
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