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Oh, uhh, speaking of which.

Will you be requiring...how should I put it...you know, one of the big sprites when the lawyers are yelling at each other? With the teal background behind it, the same color as the one behind the one I just posted, but with the head and part of the suit? (That was...dysfunctional...)

I mean, Payne doesn't have one. Prolly because he's, you know, never cool enough to get into a heated debate with the defense like other prosecutions do. But I could *try* to edit Phoenix if you feel that the absence of a large Payne would bore a hole deep into the foundations of your very soul. :cody-shock2:


Do so if ya want to. ^_^
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bibliomaniac wrote:
Oh, uhh, speaking of which.

Will you be requiring...how should I put it...you know, one of the big sprites when the lawyers are yelling at each other? With the teal background behind it, the same color as the one behind the one I just posted, but with the head and part of the suit? (That was...dysfunctional...)

I mean, Payne doesn't have one. Prolly because he's, you know, never cool enough to get into a heated debate with the defense like other prosecutions do. But I could *try* to edit Phoenix if you feel that the absence of a large Payne would bore a hole deep into the foundations of your very soul. :cody-shock2:


Do so if ya want to. ^_^


Huhm...

>_> >_< <_<

Yeah, I tried.

I think you might be better off with a hole in the foundations of your soul. I'll just get cracking on the last one. When I have time.
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bibliomaniac wrote:
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bibliomaniac wrote:
Oh, uhh, speaking of which.

Will you be requiring...how should I put it...you know, one of the big sprites when the lawyers are yelling at each other? With the teal background behind it, the same color as the one behind the one I just posted, but with the head and part of the suit? (That was...dysfunctional...)

I mean, Payne doesn't have one. Prolly because he's, you know, never cool enough to get into a heated debate with the defense like other prosecutions do. But I could *try* to edit Phoenix if you feel that the absence of a large Payne would bore a hole deep into the foundations of your very soul. :cody-shock2:


Do so if ya want to. ^_^


Huhm...Yeah, I tried.

I think you might be better off with a hole in the foundations of your soul.


What soul? XD *shotshotshotshot*

Alright. :minuki:
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Ok so ive started on the sprite...i cant say it looks great right now (good thing ive got alot of time) but anyways might as well show what ive got ATM Image
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Image well...cold your doin better than me XD
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Well i got the shape i believe but what do you think Image

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Whoa, everything looks fantastic! Amazing job! This collaboration between all us users is pretty awesome, I'd say.

As for Flash, I wish I could say I've worked on him more. But, not so much (sorry! Finals!) I've been on an unsaid hiatus for a couple weeks now, but... Winter break is approaching next week, so I will work on different poses any animation for Flash. Hee.

Good luck, and I can't wait to see more awesome stuff for this project, yo!
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Whew im Getting Close to Finishing (Sammie im assuming by the time anyone reads these ill be done...and ill post the final product...so be ready to add visor...hope its good geno...had to make alot of it from scratch :payne: )

Edit:Ok ive completed eveything...but ive hit a snag...i cant make his arm right no matter what i seem to try...i have the position of where the bench would be under his arm...but anyways someone else might need to do the arm...srry...heres the final piece that ive done :larry:

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well...after my frustrastion resided i tried again and made the arm...as to whether its good or not...not sure...but here it is the final product

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Cold52 wrote:
well...after my frustrastion resided i tried again and made the arm...as to whether its good or not...not sure...but here it is the final product

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I like it thus far. It's good for as a base for where he's standing there holding something, but looks somewhat awkward when he has nothing in his hands. Also, I can see Apollo's bracelet. XD
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i know...i thought abought making his bracelet into a watch or somthing...but i dont know...also i tried to make it look like he was grabbing apart of his vest...but like i said before its pretty tough...alot i had to do from scratch :grey:
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well mine obviously is using appolo as a base and i am failing at making it :P
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Cold52 wrote:
i know...i thought abought making his bracelet into a watch or somthing...but i dont know...also i tried to make it look like he was grabbing apart of his vest...but like i said before its pretty tough...alot i had to do from scratch :grey:


It's fine! As for grabbing his vest, it really looks like he just has his hand in the air. And wouldn't grabbing the vest be a sign of nervousness or something? Robert's a cool costumer, and laughs in the face of insurmountable odds. :P

Well, I wouldn't go adding anything to this sprite that wasn't already there on the forward-facing base sprite.
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whell most of the sprite is from scratch...the parts i used where from Kristoph gavin,Spark bushel,Apollo,and Zak greymayre...see if you can find where i got what :gant:
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My update on ami is fast approacing...

Will I make my 24 hour target?

Probably :godot:
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RandomJibberish wrote:
My update on ami is fast approacing...

Will I make my 24 hour target?

Probably :godot:


YAY!

Cold52 wrote:
whell most of the sprite is from scratch...the parts i used where from Kristoph gavin,Spark bushel,Apollo,and Zak greymayre...see if you can find where i got what :gant:


*Can't* Well, keep up the good work! This is very nice thus far.

kirashii wrote:
Whoa, everything looks fantastic! Amazing job! This collaboration between all us users is pretty awesome, I'd say.

As for Flash, I wish I could say I've worked on him more. But, not so much (sorry! Finals!) I've been on an unsaid hiatus for a couple weeks now, but... Winter break is approaching next week, so I will work on different poses any animation for Flash. Hee.

Good luck, and I can't wait to see more awesome stuff for this project, yo!


Missed this. It's fine, Kira! And yes, it is awesome. I find that the more people you have working on a project, the more ideas, talents, skills, specialties, etc. you get, and ends up being one big slice of awesome.

As for Flash, I can wait. I completely understand your predicament, and wish you the best!
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Done!

Spoiler: Ami Sheet
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Updates:

Thinking pose (I like how the expression came out here)
Profile pic (The head's a bit small, but could be worse...)
Edited the Chain (Still looks nothing like a chain (I can't sprite chain at all...) but is less like grey twine)
Opened the shirt on the zoom pose to match the other sprites.

genodragon1 wrote:
Ami poses that I have thought of:

- Crossed arms, head cocked to her right, a grin on her face.

- Hands on her sides, head tilted downward slightly, a look of burning passion in her eyes (like she's on to a lead).

- Right hand on her face, an exasperated feel about her.

- Desk slam with her right hand, standing much like she is in the objection pose.

- Her head cocked to the right, her index finger of her left hand on her chin. (Thinking pose)

- Profile pic. A must.

- The close-up talking pose, that's shown with the blue background when a huge revelation is made. She needs to look sharp, passionate, yet not exactly angry.

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There seems to be a lack of a forehead in the profile pic... but very nice updates, nonetheless!
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If I may comment?

- The chain looks wonderful. More realistic. ^_^
- The profile pic looks like Mia with a hard plastic wig on and the beauty mark removed. :eh?: On that note...

- I know I defended it a long while back, but after doing a literal side-by-side comparison, it is young Mia with the face. Which I know is kind of nice when it comes to the body (which is much akin to Ami's figure) but Ami needs to be her own entity when it comes to the head. For instance, Apollo was used for the base of Geno's head, but the differences are so vast, it's unnoticeable. But with Ami, the similarities are so-striking, it's scary. As far as her poses go, they are similar for some, but it's negligible.

- I like the opening of the close-up sprite, but when I said unbutton her shirt more, I meant so for all sprites. And more than just one or two. More like...five...
Basically: Screw modesty. I'm taking her character traits a little further. As Ema once said (ugh, I hate using this term in any form, but it fits the situation...):
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More bust, more glory

end quote. Also, there doesn't seem to be buttons on her shirt.

- The thinking pose looks more like the confident pose. Which is nice, but it doesn't really say "Hm..." more than "Just as planned..." *shotshotshotshotshotshot* Also, if you look (not very) closely, the expressions are recycled from the confident pose. Furthermore, her hand doesn't look like it's one finger extended onto a chin.


>_>

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...plzdunkillme! :larry: ...sorry for the large pile of notes, JibJab...you're doing a wonderful job thus far. :larry:
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Working on it all now :godot:
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RandomJibberish wrote:
Working on it all now :godot:


Thanks! :minuki:
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ok so i put his hand in his pocket instead...as for the braclet...i made it gold...maybe he won it in poker :grey:
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ok so i put his hand in his pocket instead...as for the braclet...i made it gold...maybe he won it in poker :grey:
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...Wasn't it already gold? Never mind, I'm sure it can either be explained off, or maybe edited away. As for the other arm...it looks dislocated. And that his hand is going into the back pocket (if that's intended, okay, but otherwise it looks weird). Also, the other arm sorta looks out of place with the new pose (perhaps it's just hanging there, or is in the other pocket?).

Anyways, I like the direction it's headed in.
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actually it looked more bronze...but thats besides the point...yea i knew id have to do this afew times before id get it right :meekins:
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(prays the arm looks right this time) Image

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Better...

Try and move the sleeve beack to where the arm is.
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You mean like this jib?
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also this is what i feel like doing to the sprite ATM
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Fabulous!
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Cold52 wrote:
You mean like this jib?
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also this is what i feel like doing to the sprite ATM
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Wunderbar! Now what to do with that awkward positioning of other arm... :/

I've got nothing.
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well...you could always test it out and set a picture of it being used...it might help me see what i need to do...just an idea :payne:
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Cold52 wrote:
well...you could always test it out and set a picture of it being used...it might help me see what i need to do...just an idea :payne:


I'll do so in a moment. Right now I'm helping someone with a trial, and multitasking is a non-option when concentrating on the delicate art thereof. But I'll tell ya when I do. :hobohodo:
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Here:

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RandomJibberish wrote:
Here:

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!WARNING! : Theatre terms abound.

Okay, so he's at Right Profile, but we need him 1/4 Right. As they say "open up to the audience". The other arm looks like he'd be leaning on it, excepting that his center of gravity is shifted the other way.
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Ami Fix in progress:

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Good thus far, but...like I mean a lot of buttons. We need to be seeing cleavage (fans both present and future, you'll be thanking me later!). Ami = very promiscuous, flirty, etc.. I need to have her at that extreme so that her obligatory co-council character (Victoria) can have something to balance out.
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I see...(Gives himself a boot to the head)...Ill get to work then
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Cold52 wrote:
I see...(Gives himself a boot to the head)...Ill get to work then


I'm confident you and Sammie will do well on the sprites to come! ^_^
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hmm...maybe i wouldnt half to focus on changing his position if i Changed the hand that sits on the bench :grey:
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Ok so just to get this out of the way as I cry about my lifeless Topic sprite page I got the talking animation done for out of court (I dubbed the blinking part to tough due to the visor constantly screwing me up Image )
ow well maybe he has his poker face on :edgy:

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and the sprite sheet :gant:
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It's really good, but the one problem is his arms, they look ridiculously deformed, particularly the arm on our right (his left). The eyes though are quite commendable.

EDIT: I played around with your sprite a bit moving buttons, fixing the arm, and also, I softened the darkest black so it would make the sprite blend better.

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A few other tips I could offer is to ease up on the uber complex pallete, try not to have 15 shades of skin and 20 shades of clothes. Simplify it by repeating colors in different places, take advantage of optical illusions (a color looks darker surrounded by lighter shades of color and vice versa), otherwise its really good.
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