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Re: The Spritings of Nadindi ~ COMPLETELY REVAMP-ERISED ^_^Topic%20Title
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*gigglesnort*

Sorry, you just sounded so...un-godot like there. ^_^

I'll do this all tomorrow. Hope you don't mind waiting before you can use your gut instinct :edgy:
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I'm sorry for the late replying, but I just finished my class and supper> <



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Actually I seldom make sprite (only once, to be honest. Making sprite is too difficult to me), so I'm just giving a few suggestions from the angle of drawing fanarts.

First I resized both of your sprite and Dahlia's, just make it easier to see the details.

Here is the shape of Dahlia's skull.

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Copy+paste.Let's see how does it work on yours.

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See the differences?


So here are my suggestions:

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Red circle:Erase the extra part of her face. It's very tiny, but hurts a lot.(<---THIS is what I wanted to say this afternoon, not the jaw...I really have no idea what's its English name, but since I even have no idea how to say it in my mother tongue...forget about it. :payne: )

Blue circle: Add more hair, make sure it covers her skull properly.

Green circle:I suggest erasing some of her hair here and adding more hair on her forehead. Not necessary though.



And then the neck...well there are two problems here.

I sketched the lines of Dahlia's neck as well. Although a part of her neck was covered by the collar, it's still easy to tell her body edge like this:

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And with yours:

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I know their bodies are facing to different dirctions, but her neck is not supposed to be that thin , I believe.

The another poblem is the shadow on her neck is wrong. I have no idea how to fix it since I don't have a lot sprites on my computer, so I just redrew the neck and added some shadow on her face.

So I fixed the neck and hair and all, this is what I finally got:

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Resized one(exactly the same size of the original one):
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That's all, hope it would help^-^ You've done pretty well, just keep going! :edgy: :butzthumbs:
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So I was right =< *Cheer*
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Vordox wrote:
So I was right =< *Cheer*


Yeah, sort of. :gant:
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I only saw the jaw though, since I do not use "Head lines" ever, I draw from scratch then swap it out what looks off. =<

Never saw the top of the head though.

And yeah you were talking about the CHIN, not the jaw. =<
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Vordox wrote:
I only saw the jaw though, since I do not use "Head lines" ever, I draw from scratch then swap it out what looks off. =<

Never saw the top of the head though.

And yeah you were talking about the CHIN, not the jaw. =<


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:maya-shock: Wow. I hope you don't mind that I steal that; I will credit you of course, Tues :shoe:

I'll get on animating it in a mo. Thanks again :edgy:
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I changed the mouth of the stationary sprite. I also animated it.

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She looks and talk like she's quite angry and offensive. :P SO I take it that is her char.
And the shadows on her chest could be a bit more done. =<
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Hehe, yeah, she is a bit of a tsundere.

As for the chest, could you elaborate a bit more? :oops:
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Keep an eye on the shading, then compare to her arms/Face. Not sure on how to answer it without being rude. =<
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...still don't getcha.

Don't mind rudeness, knock yourself out XD
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From which sprite was the torse taken off? Franziscka?
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:mareka: Dessie ^_^
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Spoiler:
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You changed her right stomache a bit which makes her look like she is pushing her chest out so much that it looks triangluar instead of circle.

That or I am very paranoid. :larry2:
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I like it poofy ;-;

I dunno. I might change it, just to see what it looks like tomorrow.
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Nadindi wrote:
:maya-shock: Wow. I hope you don't mind that I steal that; I will credit you of course, Tues :shoe:

I'll get on animating it in a mo. Thanks again :edgy:


Not at all, I'm really happy it helps! You are very welcome~ :jazzedgy:


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I changed the mouth of the stationary sprite. I also animated it.

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Tips?


The animated one is wonderful! Very good job:3 :butzthumbs:
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That poofy stomache isn't as bad as I think it is, but then there is something else I won't say that would imply a change of her torso. =3

Still a nice sprite, she looks likes a bad persona. ^^
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Mm, I guess I'll keep her the same.

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The animated one is wonderful! Very good job:3


Thanks. Wouldn't be anything without the initial shape though! :edgy:
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I've made a little KlaviPollo sprite compilation...thing.

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Hehe ^_^
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"Play me"? ...

AAIAIEEH MY BRAIN JUST MELTED!
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You came up with that, not me.

Even though I was THINKING it...
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Phwoar, haven't been here for a while.

Justine Loi - My defense attorney in a comic-to-be.

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Animation is in progress!

Crit, anyone? :edgy:
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L'animation? C'est fini! XD

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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Beautiful.
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Huh? No criticism? O_O
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火曜日 wrote:
Vordox wrote:
I only saw the jaw though, since I do not use "Head lines" ever, I draw from scratch then swap it out what looks off. =<

Never saw the top of the head though.

And yeah you were talking about the CHIN, not the jaw. =<


Oh, so I learned a new word! XD Thank you~~~


The name of that particular area of the chin you highlighted is called the Side Mandible. [/smartypants]

And that is a beautiful sprite, Nadine.
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火曜日 wrote:
Vordox wrote:
I only saw the jaw though, since I do not use "Head lines" ever, I draw from scratch then swap it out what looks off. =<

Never saw the top of the head though.

And yeah you were talking about the CHIN, not the jaw. =<


Oh, so I learned a new word! XD Thank you~~~


The name of that particular area of the chin you highlighted is called the Side Mandible. [/smartypants]

And that is a beautiful sprite, Nadine.


Fank choo ^_^

So there's seriously nothing wrong with it?!

O_O *happy*
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Nadindi wrote:
Huh? No criticism? O_O

Ya wanna it` :beef:
Well...Not at this moment...Oh! The forehead...
Well...I can't say it correctly so I say like this:
- Looks like it would miss a tiny part of it.
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Zinle wrote:
Nadindi wrote:
Huh? No criticism? O_O

Ya wanna it` :beef:
Well...Not at this moment...Oh! The forehead...
Well...I can't say it correctly so I say like this:
- Looks like it would miss a tiny part of it.


It's too...protruding?
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Give the lipstick more noticeable shades.
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I've added the rest of her poses.

And most of them are le-crap XD
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Pretty cool, actually.
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Nice work, m'dear.
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Thank you's! ^_^
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Have you made an objection sprite yet?
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The new sprite's verry nice, Looks gorgeous.
Hmm, the only thing that really bothered me, was well...It's basicly a recoloured Mia with some edited parts.
(But i still love it nonetheless XD)
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Ceres wrote:
The new sprite's verry nice, Looks gorgeous.
Hmm, the only thing that really bothered me, was well...It's basicly a recoloured Mia with some edited parts.
(But i still love it nonetheless XD)


Well, yes. I'm not an amazing spriter yet, so I guess that's the best I could do XD

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Have you made an objection sprite yet?


Hmm? Oh, yes.

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I also made a logo.

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Nadindi wrote:
Ceres wrote:
The new sprite's verry nice, Looks gorgeous.
Hmm, the only thing that really bothered me, was well...It's basicly a recoloured Mia with some edited parts.
(But i still love it nonetheless XD)


Well, yes. I'm not an amazing spriter yet, so I guess that's the best I could do XD

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Have you made an objection sprite yet?


Hmm? Oh, yes.

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I also made a logo.

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^_^



I like it. :pearl:

The only thing is, in my opinion the hair to the right of her nose looks a little weird. But it's still a great sprite. :pearl:
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I think I see it. Is it like, near her right eyebrow?
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