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Skully B.'s Sprite-porium - UPDATED 11/23/08 - Winston von KTopic%20Title
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Hey, all. So I saw the bandwagon rolling by and I thought, "hey! I might as well hop on!" So I did, and this is the result. I apologize to those whose eyes bleed, but please help me out--being new to the Phoenix Wright style, I need a lot of practice and constructive criticism.

Spoiler: Damien Law and Company
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This is Damien Law, my fan character. He is, obviously, a defense attorney (as shown by his spiffy lil' badge). So far, he's just a Phoenix recolor with crappy hair.

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Damien's got a facelift and better hair now! At least... I think. His tie's a bit less out there, now. I hope you're happy :I

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And this is Joy, Damien's requisite college-age assistant. Joy is pretty much perpetually happy--infuriatingly so. Her happy demeanor can get the saddest of people in a better mood--and it can get some people a bit annoyed. Nonetheless, Joy helps out a lot with Damien's investigations, and her logical thinking can help out when Damien's in a bind.


Spoiler: Splices
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Ron Tigre! : :ron-jazz:

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Winston von Karma. No, Winston, this will not make you any more intimidating.


Like I said, comments are always appreciated!
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Its a nice start...id suggest to blend the hair just a tad more and try to make the glasses alittle more clear...i say this because hes not actually wearing them so they look more like reading glasses...but thats just my opinion i hope this helped you out a bit :godot:
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Just...leave me alone, alright?

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Something seems a bit off about that tie, but I'd say this is a great beginning. Can't wait to see more!
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as phoenix edits go, it's pretty good. The hair is well sprited and the expression is good as well, the only real problem I'm getting is the tie, perhaps it's a little too bright.
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Cold52 wrote:
i say this because hes not actually wearing them so they look more like reading glasses...


Yeah, Damien's got far-sightedness. He needs these to read the case files :sawit:

Enter The Jaws Theme wrote:
Something seems a bit off about that tie, but I'd say this is a great beginning. Can't wait to see more!


Yeah, sloppy recolors tend to do that.
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Touche! Awesome start indeed, skullboy ^^
(Mind if I call ya like that?)
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I'd sau the hair needs more definition, but apart from that, good start.
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i think it is very origional :hotti: it r purdy
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Alright, then! I gave Damien a facelift! Of course... he's still pretty shoddy-looking. But hey, that's practice for you.

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Wuh... this is... uh... awkward.
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Re: Skully B.'s Sprite-porium - UPDATED 11/21/08 - Ron TigreTopic%20Title
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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No it's not. This is SPARDA! O.O
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Re: Skully B.'s Sprite-porium - UPDATED 11/21/08 - Ron TigreTopic%20Title
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Hey, new sprites!

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Meet Joy! She's 100 percent custom, and 100 percent happy! She's Damien's college-age assistant, whose extensive knowledge and affinity for logic puzzles help out when Damien can't quite get it.

Comments are appreciated!
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Re: Skully B.'s Sprite-porium - UPDATED 11/21/08 - Ron TigreTopic%20Title
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aka Ami <3

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SkullB wrote:
Hey, new sprites!

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Meet Joy! She's 100 percent custom, and 100 percent happy! She's Damien's college-age assistant, whose extensive knowledge and affinity for logic puzzles help out when Damien can't quite get it.

Comments are appreciated!


Critical thinking is the key to-*shotshotshot*

I like her, but if I may add some critiques?

- The light source is off. Reference? Vest and shirt.
- She seems a little...masculine...I may be biased since her hair reminds me a lot of James from Pokemon-*bricked*
- Her arms seem to be sinking into her back. I realize that her hands are probably there, but...idk, I'm probably not articulately about that either.
Re: Skully B.'s Sprite-porium - UPDATED 11/22/08 - JoyTopic%20Title
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Thanks, man. I'll try and fix it.
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Re: Skully B.'s Sprite-porium - UPDATED 11/22/08 - JoyTopic%20Title
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Yeah...the main problem is that he/she is too masculine...
Has...Joy...Any relavents to Armstrong?
(Asking serieously ^^)
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It's a girl, Zin... :P

No, no connections to Armstrong -shiver- whatsoever. There is a character of mine, however, who enjoys "Claurice" Armstrong's poetry for whatever reason.
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Re: Skully B.'s Sprite-porium - UPDATED 11/22/08 - JoyTopic%20Title
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Huh? What ya mean...Umm...Oh...Now I see it...
Sorry. He is now fixed. Now it say: he/she.

Sorry, but I often do this mistakes...When something looks guy enough then there is 50% change I write it wrong.
But I guess Ya can see that it is actually pretty masculin now?

This really was a mistake from me, but teaches a lot, huh?
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Yeah... I guess I'm not that good. :sadshoe:
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Re: Skully B.'s Sprite-porium - UPDATED 11/22/08 - JoyTopic%20Title
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I hate Klaviema >_>

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I don't think it looks masculine...

It's very good for 100% custom, My edits are worse than that half the time!
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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^
Well...I what I meant with masculine is that there is something with the face.
Body and it's shading is fine with me...I mean...boos and everything =)
*strike!*
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Re: Skully B.'s Sprite-porium - UPDATED 11/23/08 - Winston von KTopic%20Title
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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*strike*

Mr von Payne is here.
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Re: Skully B.'s Sprite-porium - UPDATED 11/23/08 - Winston von KTopic%20Title
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did i do something wrong what is the strike ;_;

If Winston isn't in GS5 I will be ungodly disappointed.
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SkullB wrote:

If Winston isn't in GS5 I will be ungodly disappointed.


truer words have never been said.
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Hey, What's up ,man?

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*shiver shiver* i'm still getting over the whole, "ron tigre" thing...god thats scary... :larry:
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Re: Skully B.'s Sprite-porium - UPDATED 11/23/08 - Winston von KTopic%20Title
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No DSis in the courtroom please.

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Joy looks pretty good.
I think everyone else covered all the major problems with her.
For being scratch and such, it's really nice =D
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Hey, What's up ,man?

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i have to agree, they are very good! :phoenix:
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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SkullB wrote:
did i do something wrong what is the strike ;_;

Hm? Oh "Strike"...One of my words.
Means that ball goes like a rocket and just keeps flying...
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...Or you could just say: thumbs up.
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Hey, What's up ,man?

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Zinle wrote:
SkullB wrote:
did i do something wrong what is the strike ;_;

Hm? Oh "Strike"...One of my words.
Means that ball goes like a rocket and just keeps flying...
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...Or you could just say: thumbs up.

at first when i read your message, i thought something was reffering to sexually, but then read the rest, never misread things people, it just turns out bad in the end, most of the time at least... :godot:
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