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Hey there. I decided I'd have a go at spriting. Just one basic sheet for now but im hoping to update it and make a few more characters. I know it's not perfect but im hoping to improve with time. I'd apeciate any advice veteran spriters could give :phoenix:

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This is my fan made defense attorney (dubbed by me as the arogent attorney).Im hoping to use him in future projects.

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Location: Canada

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Joined: Wed Feb 06, 2008 11:15 pm

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Not bad, but I think you should add a bit more shading, and make the outline of his hair darker. I believe his suit is also missing its lapels (is that what it's called?) unless you intended to make it that way.

For the very bottom set of sprites the outline on the shoulder area.. um, the line that divides the sleeves and the main part of the suit, it's a little angular. You're also missing the outline for his sleeves. I'm not sure if he's supposed to be missing his eyebrows, but he is. The ear seems a bit cut off too...

I hope I don't sound too picky or stuff... >_<
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