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Lindsay's Sprites (Updated- 9/13)Topic%20Title
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I like a man with a big... vocabulary.

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Yeah... So I decided to make a topic of my sprites. Most of them are edits. I do not make my sprites from scratch. (Though I wish I had the ability to...)
Please no HARSH comments, but I would appreciate constructive criticism. :maya:

Spoiler: My first ever sprite edits. NOT my best work...
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Spoiler: Iris recolor. Could be a lot better, could be a lot worse.
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Spoiler: An OC of mine. No name yet. She definitely needs work...
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Spoiler: Another OC. I like how she came out.
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9/9/08

Spoiler: Young versions of the OC above.
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Same hair length, just with the ponytail in a bun. I practiced using different parts of different people on this one.

I do plan on changing the body at some point.


Spoiler: I'm not even really sure what this is.
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I was just adding things from different people. I'm disappointed with it...


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9/12/08

Spoiler: Magical Alita. I just got bored so I did this.
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Uhh... It's not exactly "good". :sadshoe:


Spoiler: Heh... *shot*
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Honestly I was just bored when I made this. :edgy:
It's bad, but it gets the point across. I should start practicing more instead of doing dinky little edits.



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9/13/08

Spoiler: My first attempt at editing a TWEWY sprite.
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Basically, it's just a few pieces of a few people put together and recolored. But yeah... It's my TWEWY OC. I didn't go overboard on adding/editing stuff because that's what she looks like. Pretty simple, I guess.

It's still NOT my best work, but I guess it's alright for a first.


Spoiler: Yay! I animated my Spirit Medium OC.
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I don't really have an opinion about it.

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Many thanks to Vickinator for the avatar!


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Re: Lindsay's SpritesTopic%20Title
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Looks good so far, Your sprites are clean,sharp,well blended.
They're well made, but perhaps you could mix&max some more.
For example parts of this face, parts of that, this sleeve, that body, etc.

Still, for your first sprites: Exelent!
Re: Lindsay's SpritesTopic%20Title
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I like a man with a big... vocabulary.

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Ceres wrote:
Looks good so far, Your sprites are clean,sharp,well blended.
They're well made, but perhaps you could mix&max some more.
For example parts of this face, parts of that, this sleeve, that body, etc.

Still, for your first sprites: Exelent!


Thanks. ^^ :pearl:
I'll try to do that more when I edit more sprites.

Thanks again!
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Many thanks to Vickinator for the avatar!
Re: Lindsay's SpritesTopic%20Title
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For you're first sprites these are really good! especially your last one, it's like my personal favorite, IT'S SO WELL DONE I love it <3
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Aaah....Splendiiido.
My favourite was the last one. Cuteness overload!! O.O
And I think same with Iris. Could be better, but could be WAY worse.
Nice.
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That last one is great.
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Re: Lindsay's Sprites (Updated- 9/9)Topic%20Title
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I like a man with a big... vocabulary.

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Thanks everyone! :maya:
My favorite one is that one, too.
I kinda need help naming her, though.

Oh, and I added two younger versions of her. Not the best, but I guess they could be worse.
I will edit her body later. I have to go soon.
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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kawaai! <3

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I guess jag can help little with JPN name.
Howabout....Kirei Kiku?
Means beatiful Chrysanthem.

O' howabot...umm...

Subarashii Hohoemi?
(lovely smile)

...Ja...I guess I give this another try XD
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I love the name Kirei Kiku. I'll think about that one. :pearl:
Thanks!


I added a new sprite edit. It's uhh... not my best work.
I basically have spriter's block right now. (If there is such a thing...)
It was decent practice, though. I hope I get better soon. :think-think-think:
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You can defiantly see the improvement in your work! Your work is awesome :D
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Indeed. Indeed.
The new has good combination.

...Anyone wanna translate that? XD
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No need to translate that Zinle, Your grammar (like your sprites ) have improved greatly over a small period of time. :P
Re: Lindsay's Sprites (Updated- 9/12)Topic%20Title
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I like a man with a big... vocabulary.

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Added a Magical Alita. It's not the best thing ever...
The coloring is horrible. It's uhhh... The effort that counts? :will:
Sorry if someone has already made a magical Alita, please just tell me and I'll take it down.

I need tons of practice. :yuusaku:
But skills don't grow on trees, so hopefully I can get a lot better in the future!. :pearl:


I also need to work on bodies. That's my (main) weak point.

Edit: Added an Edgeworth edit. ...It was basically just erase-copy-paste and a little editing. (Neckline, skin tone, etc.)
This one wasn't serious.
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Many thanks to Vickinator for the avatar!
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Hey hey hey! The colors aren't bad at all.
Not at all. Just need using to it.
(OK..:That sounded better in mah head...)

And about EdgeTa...Just small the head a bit.
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I like a man with a big... vocabulary.

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I'm gonna start practicing coloring for a little. Yeah, so fun. :hobohodo:
P.S.: Added my TWEWY oc. Could be a lot better. Eh, I'm satisfied with it though. :pearl:

Edit: Also added an animated version of my spirit medium oc.
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Many thanks to Vickinator for the avatar!
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