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this topic was already up but I put it in the wrong section (I put it in games :payne: ) but now it's in sprites =P so anyway here's his backstory

His Personality is mostly like a combo of Godot and Furio Tigre. He has a bad temper but he is also clever. He has a slight hint of a Brooklyn Accent. He holds a grudge against (don't kill me for making part of his backstory to a real PW character) Larry Butz because when they were teens he stole his girlfriend who's name is yet to be determined :payne: ...

that is the backstory and he looks more original now (display picture is Double A) hope to get more positive responses than negative ones and I hope I can get some advice if it ain't good :godot:
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Is this your first attempt at spriting? I'm not being mean here at all, simply giving my two cents :gant:.
Try not to copy and paste things too much, it could come off as unoriginal, not that there is anything wrong with that, just try editing the pasted bits more. Also the contrast between the greens of his outer jacket sort of clash, try a subtler colour for the lighter part of the jacket :edgy:
Now on to what I liked. The editing of Nick's hair is subtle and yet quite nice and the undershirt is quite good too. And the backstory is pretty original and would be the sort of trivial clash a GS game would have.
Keep trying and I'm sure you're spriting skills will flourish, it takes a while and even now I still have to constantly edit and re-edit my sprites, as do most spriters.
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Re: If anyone wants a prosecutor in their game...Topic%20Title
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thanx for the advice :godot: and no this isn't my first time spriting...this is actually my second attempt but I can tell u the first attempt at Double A was MUCH WORSE (it was just a recolor) and I'll do something about the coat...if I come up with anything...anyway I made up more of a backstory but it would be a spoiler so here it is

Spoiler: A Spoiler to more backstory of Double A
His Full name is Double A Von Karma...obviously he is Manfred's son and Franziska's older brother...and his first case was agaisnt Phoenix Wright which he actually won...he has a grudge against Phoenix because he put his father in jail and he thinks Phoenix and Franziska are having a relationship (he thinks this because of the picture Franziska had (note the pic at the end of PW:JFA) so he wants to put a stop to Phoenix and get HIM a guily verdict (his first attempt didn't work) so he can be 1) stripped of his attorney's badge and 2) get the death sentence..so he wouldn't have to deal with Phoenix
Re: If anyone wants a prosecutor in their game...Topic%20Title
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I am the ace prosecutor

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thanx for the advice :godot: and no this isn't my first time spriting...this is actually my second attempt but I can tell u the first attempt at Double A was MUCH WORSE (it was just a recolor) and I'll do something about the coat...if I come up with anything...anyway I made up more of a backstory but it would be a spoiler so here it is

Spoiler: A Spoiler to more backstory of Double A
His Full name is Double A Von Karma...obviously he is Manfred's son and Franziska's older brother...and his first case was agaisnt Phoenix Wright which he actually won...he has a grudge against Phoenix because he put his father in jail and he thinks Phoenix and Franziska are having a relationship (he thinks this because of the picture Franziska had (note the pic at the end of PW:JFA) so he wants to put a stop to Phoenix and get HIM a guily verdict (his first attempt didn't work) so he can be 1) stripped of his attorney's badge and 2) get the death sentence..so he wouldn't have to deal with Phoenix
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Better than last time, yes. :godot:
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Re: If anyone wants a prosecutor in their game...Topic%20Title
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thanx I agree with that statement lol this is much more of an edit...nothing like ceres but I try
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