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I've been spriting for... years and years, but there are plenty of things that I'm bad at. To improve in these areas,
I've decided to start working with Phoenix Wright sprites. I hope to improve my anti-aliasing, efficient use of color palettes, and texture design (especially hair and cloth).

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Larry Butz, age fifteen. My first PW sprite edit.

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Maggey Byrde, age twelve. :salute:


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A butler and maid for Auraion's game Ryu Kenji: Ace Attorney.

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Lenard Daniels, Leroy Daniels, and Russell Weike, members of the Eagles basketball team for Tap's game Justice's Memoirs. Since Weike is such a minor character, I've decided to post several of his animations.


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Maggey Byrde, Junior Attorney.

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Terry! Spark! Wh.. Why?!

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My avatar and joke sprites from April 1st, 2010.


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The making of Young Maggey

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The making of sad Young Maggey

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"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind." -Theodor Geisel (Dr. Seuss)


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Haha It's very well made
he looks like from 14 to 16
good job :butzthumbs:
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Chesu wrote:
I actually created this topic (and joined this forum!) to get opinions on a single sprite, but who knows, I may post more. I tried to make a teenage version of Larry, but I think I may have overshot my goal.

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How old does he look? Or, does he just look like a smaller, happier version of the normal Larry sprite? :larry:


welcome to the forums :P

on the sprite I don't see any errors, its quite well done...anywho good luck on future sprites :godot:
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Chesu wrote:
I actually created this topic (and joined this forum!) to get opinions on a single sprite, but who knows, I may post more. I tried to make a teenage version of Larry, but I think I may have overshot my goal.

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How old does he look? Or, does he just look like a smaller, happier version of the normal Larry sprite? :larry:


Very nice. It's clean and well done. I can't see anything to crit :)

I'm looking forward to your next sprites.
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Like they say.
To me it doesn't look that young at all,
but then again, the child Larry in 1-4 was allmost too adult like too.
So no complains here, then.

New one in the group, eh?
After seeing that one it would be fun to see more works.
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Two others I'm playing with... Mainly just for spriting practice.

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A lot of PW1 sprites don't look fantastic, so their bodies need some touching up... but I'm more concerned with the hair. On the left we obviously have palette swapped Franziska, and the one on the right probably needs bigger hair to compensate for the small head. I've always been terrible with hair, so I'm considering baldcapping them both and drawing it from scratch, for practice. Unfortunately... I'm also terrible at coming up with hairstyles.

edit: Larry's static sprite was getting on my nerves, so I gave him a talking animation.

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This is still far from being finished, but I was wondering if you guys
could tell me how old you think the younger Maggey looks?

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Stand back! I'm about to try SCIENCE!

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The lack of a tie is kind of odd, but the hair is perfect. That's definitely what her hair looked like as a kid. And it got paste in it and got caught in things.

Yes.
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Hello there. :3 Your sprites are very good; Larry looks awesome, I'd say he looks about 14-15.

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...and the one on the right probably needs bigger hair to compensate for the small head.

Personally, I wouldn't change hair on this one. It looks perfectly fine as is. :butzthumbs: I'd rather work on the other one - the eyes look slightly too dark in comparison to the rest of the sprite, and the mouth is a bit too far to the right to look natural.

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This is still far from being finished, but I was wondering if you guys
could tell me how old you think the younger Maggey looks?

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I'd say...10-11.
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Untaken Fingerprint wrote:
The lack of a tie is kind of odd


Like I said, it's not finished yet. I haven't done any shading on the blazer, or touched up the outlines. I actually haven't decided whether she'll wear a necktie, a bow or something else... This is a school uniform, mind you.

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I'd rather work on the other one - the eyes look slightly too dark in comparison to the rest of the sprite, and the mouth is a bit too far to the right to look natural.


Hrm, you're right about the eyes, I'll fix that if I ever touch the sprite again. The mouth is supposed to be that far to the side though, she's smirking. :odoroki:
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Whoa, really good sprites. I liked the Larry and the use of Franziska's hair. About the young maggey, it's weird the detail of the tie, but still it's really good... awesome hair BTW. She looks like 11 or something like that...
Thanks. It was, is and always will be a pleasure.
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Fine, fine, here's a version with the necktie (and my recent revisions).

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...I'm surprised everyone likes the hair though, it's just her normal hair lowered and flood-filled. I haven't even started shading or detailing it yet... :yuusaku:
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Very nice. I wonder if you can make a younger Gumshoe?
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What, as a kid? I guess I could, but I'm spriting Larry and Maggey as they would appear in 2008...
If I ever do Gumshoe, it'll probably be as a twenty-two-year-old officer.

edit: Maggey's done! Well, for now, anyway. I wasn't sure which piece of neckwear I wanted, or if she should have a hair ribbon, but I eventually decided to go double-bow, as seen in the animation.

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I like the one with the bow better :) it seems more fitting for a young girl's school uniform. If you decide to go with the tie, I'd suggest you work a little more on it. It looks fairly uneven, try to make it slightly wider and rounder in shape.

EDIT: You ninja'ed me xD Still, good decision ;3 Double bow fits her nicely.
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I'm not sure the necktie was ever really an option... They're a lot more common than bows in Japanese school uniforms, but so many characters in this series wear them that with a blazer, she looks like a small lawyer. I could have left her with just the jacket and shirt, but that wouldn't have been very visually interesting. That's why I removed the tie in the first image of her I posted, but didn't draw the buttons or anything else on.

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Oy. I still haven't added them, her shirt is plain white below the bow. I knew there would be small details that I forgot. :maggey-sad:
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Yeah, Gummy as a kid. No one ever did Gumshoe as a kid I think.
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O_O
I love your younger Larry and double bow Maggey! <3
Fantastic.

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Thanks! I'm going to start work on Maggey's "insecure, holding her arm" pose later tonight... I'm not sure what I'll do after that.
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Nice. And if your planning to do young Gumshoe, I can't wait!
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Sad Young Maggey is done!

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I added the buttons to her shirt, and fixed a minor color issue with the bow.
I guess I'll apply these changes to the normal pose, then animate the sad one.

edit: How does everyone feel about Emote Bow? The mouth on Moe's hat did something similar.

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I love both of these, but especially young maggey! She looks nice with long hair.
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Thanks! This is my commission for Auraion, in the form of a compressed sprite sheet. It doesn't show
how the sprite is supposed to be animated, but is more secure from theft, and takes up less space.


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I like the regular bow better...

The emote bow is a little creepy to me.. for some reason. O.o;

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Young Maggey and Larry are welldone! You do a very great job at altering a character's age, it looks natural and believable! Can't wait for more stuff :)
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I'm prone to making mistakes while spriting, so I always make a copy of the last major revision to my sprite.
Thanks to this, by the time I'm done I have a long line showing the progress of the sprite... and can do this!

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Bam! Wait. That's a fish?!

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Chesu wrote:
I'm prone to making mistakes while spriting, so I always make a copy of the last major revision to my sprite.
Thanks to this, by the time I'm done I have a long line showing the progress of the sprite... and can do this!

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That's pretty interesting. But I like your sprites, keep it up and have some fun while you're at it!
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I'm back, mate! Still lurking like a ninja but whatevs :3
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Oh noes, by replying you have exposed the secret of how I make the big spaces between images!

Thanks, though... and I always have fun. :keiko:
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A butler, as requested by Auraion. Image
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Chesu wrote:
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A butler, as requested by Auraion. Image

Thanks a lot Chesu
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These are all gorgeous sprites!
Especially your young Larry and Maggey, personally I would have prefer the tie but the bow fits her very well too. The animated Maggey is my favorite. Can't wait to see more of your works :gant:
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Wow the butler looks pretty well made. Keep it up, and make some more fun stuff
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I just finished the first part of a request for Tap; the defendant in the first case of his fangame, Justice's Memoirs.

Spoiler: Lenard Daniels, Ace Basketballer
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Also, by popular demand...

Spoiler: Young Maggey wearing a necktie
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These are really great. Do you use paint to make them? 'Cause they're real good. And how did you give Maggey the long hair? I know you used the bottom of her short hair and moved it down, but how?

I wonder what a young Diego would look like?....
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Yes, I use MS Paint. For Maggey's hair... Yeah, that's pretty much all I did.I moved the ends of her hair down, drew in connecting outlines, then flood filled the base color in that area. While finishing up, I gave it a bit more shading... which doesn't look too great., since I'm bad at that kind of thing.
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Easy, carrot, none of us were born as pro's.
Just keep doing those things and you should see a clear difference to your old works after few months.
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Chesu wrote:
Yes, I use MS Paint. For Maggey's hair... Yeah, that's pretty much all I did.I moved the ends of her hair down, drew in connecting outlines, then flood filled the base color in that area. While finishing up, I gave it a bit more shading... which doesn't look too great., since I'm bad at that kind of thing.


Okie dokie. You should enter the OC Contest, your really good at spriting. :edgy:
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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BTW...Anyone have any info when is the next OC contest?

EDIT: Nevermind...Allready have my answer.
Iish! Time to get to work again! ^^
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Zinle wrote:
Easy, carrot, none of us were born as pro's.
Just keep doing those things and you should see a clear difference to your old works after few months.


Well I'm not going to pretend that the hair is good, just because the flaws are only clear up close. It's only the second PW-style sprite I've ever made... and learning to sprite hair is one of the reasons I'm doing this to begin with. :yogi:

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Okie dokie. You should enter the OC Contest, your really good at spriting. :edgy:


I was thinking about it, but I'm not great at designing original clothing... For that contest I would want to make a flashy prosecutor or something. :rock'n:
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:onamida: Do you ever have an idea that just won't leave you alone until you bring it to life? :pealshock:

Spoiler: Seriously, WTF, Terry?
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