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So yeah, these are my sprites. Some of them are OCs, some of them are just edits on original characters.
I don't think that I've created anything that will start a revolution or anything, just trying to do my thing. :godot:
I would really like constructive criticism on all of these, not just your basis 'practice anatomy!!!' or anything like that,
but telling me if my nose is out of alignment or my face doesn't match the head. That kind of thing.

Canon Characters


Ema Skye

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I rp Ema on gaiaonline, and one of the first things I did after I learned to animate, was make more sprites for Ema to
help me express more emotions. :redd: Most of these were fairly simple for me to make, the sad sprite was the most difficult. I know that CR has an Ema thinking without speaking sprite, but I did this before that came out, and it has the eye movement that the CR one doesn't have.

Since these are Ema sprites and not exactly complicated, feel free to use them, just please leave me a message to let me know.

Klavier

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Okay so this was really more just messing around than actual spriting. And succeeded in amusing me and irritating people who know how to actually pronounce Klavier

EVERYONE LOVES MAGICAL KLAVIER
'CAUSE THE TRICKS THAT HE DOES ARE EVER SO CLEVER~ :rock'n:

Grey

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Just making it silent. I'm fairly sure that the timing is off.

Matt

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One of my rp friends complained that Matt didn't have enough sprites. I did what I could. >.>

OCs

Nikola Gavin

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Nikola Gavin is the spawn of Ema Skye and Klavier Gavin, although he does love his Uncle Kristoph~! He takes after
his father far more than his mother, much to her distress. He plays the guitar, using one that his father gave him,
and wears his father's old glasses, given to him when he started playing the guitar. He's not to the skill of his father,
and will probably never be that skilled. He hasn't given a thought to his future, and is pretty unemotional. One of the
reasons there's only a few sprites is that he's usually quiet and calm, without many expressions.

Emil Skye

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Emil Skye. Ah, a male version of Ema, you say? Not quite. This male is, in fact, a female. Originally Ema Skye, for
various reasons, she saw fit to dress as a man and take on the persona of a genderbent Ema. He tries to
act as opposite of Ema as possible, and is very docile, calm, and easily bossed around without complaint.

Juan Corrida from gaiaonline helped me with the base. c:

Eric

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My first sprite, done in Paint. I'd like to think that I've improved since then. Eric is a robot, believe it or not, created by Ema Skye to assist her in her lab work. He was designed originally to be a blank slate, gaining emotion as he saw fit. Thanks to hanging out with some of her friends, he's picked up sarcasm, which Ema is usually on the receiving end of.
They often spat while handling deadly chemicals. It's a wonder her house hasn't blown up yet.

Me

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Do I count as an OC? Well, I whipped this up in ten minutes for my avatar here. A quick little sprite that
is supposed to represent me, PWified.
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Laziest Spriter in the West

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Hey, that's a lot of sprites! XD You look like you have a good handle on this, but I'll offer my 2 cents since you asked for crit~

First of all, you seem to have some transparency issues. Most of your sprites either have white backgrounds or dots, and they're cropped at random sizes. Try either cropping them down to the size of the sprite, or 256x192 pixels (the size of the DS screen) A clean presentation will make them 10 times better and more usable. I can't find any other problems with Ema, Matt and Turner at all.

Your self sprite is cute but needs higher contrast. The shading on the hair is very subtle, and it's almost invisible on the shirt.

The Emil sprites are well done, except I'm confused why s/he has 2 pairs of glasses. XD'''

The shading on Nikola's shirt changes a lot on his thinking sprite, and his left forearm on that sprite is shaped a little strangely; make it thicker towards the elbow on top, and move that curve on the bottom closer to the elbow.
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Still Searching For Lux-Pain...

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Wow,great First-Time Sprites.

My Favorite,Emil.He/She looks great with the glasses.Gender-Bended Ema Confuzzles Me....
Supports :odoroki: / :draw:
Jesus:Lord and Savior!
Avatar Awesomely done by Purple Angel,a friend I will miss.

Son of CCCM and Arkillian,brother to Perrydotto,Dekuran,and Lida_Rose.Join the NEW CR FAMILY TREE!
Engaged to Minter.
Father of Nadindi and GDM
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Oh you silly faggot :payne-stroke:
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¯\(º_o)/¯ lol whut

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Location: In America!

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I made up that Magical Klavier
you buttface >:U
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Lame sprite edit (Click it for my Deviantart!)

I love Klavema OTL
Also Shiina x Rou
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