Hi, I'm QueenFox :)
I've just recently started spriting, so my sprites aren't that good.. ;-;
x3.

'aight, so, I have a few sprite edits that aren't dogwolf ugly, so I'll post them here :)

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'tis Ryu from street fighter :)
(also if someone could remove the white background on this one, that would be apreciated :) )

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I also have Vega from Street Fighter, as well x3

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I have a few (evidence) sprites for my fangame (they're not very good ;-;)

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~ stab wound, heavily edited from Quecus Alba's.

~ and a dead body! how cherry x3.

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And an alternate outfit for Larry :)


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That's about it. If y'all have an comments or corrections I could use to fix them, I'd be very happy to fix them :3 (if I can xD)

Last edited by QueenFox on Thu Nov 24, 2011 7:24 pm, edited 1 time in total.

These are fairly good for a beginner!
You could probably become one of the more famous spriters.

Ahaha :)
Thank you :)

Not too bad at all,these are really good,better than mine. JOY AND ANGER!

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Thanks x3
Your sprites are good~! You actually know how to animate sprites ;-; xD.

I don't know if we're allowed to post if we update, but I updated :3
Added in a Vega sprite to go with my Ryu ^.^

Nice to see a new spriter :p

Your ideas are pretty good, however the execution can be quite messy - in particular, that Vega one. However, it's not a bad start at all, they just need some work.

For the Vega one in particular, I'd clean up the outlines (these are the main issues) and I'd fix the shading on the hands and hair. Try doing that, and you'd get a much cleaner result ;)

Hope this helped.

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its not a bad start for a beginner what id suggest to improve is take some time to see the official sprites and how there made or go to other spriters topics to see how they made them.

now then from what im seeing from your sprites ill just use ryu to try and point out things...
ryu:
right off the bat i knowtice his pants or belt...youve made it a completely straight line you should try and make it appear to curve this can be done with some shading on both his sides, speaking of shading you should try and bulk up your lines a bit by using some shading though the actual line itself should be visable enough to tell it apart from the shading and the actual line finally from what i see with the neck your using a black line on tan skin...its best not to doo that...take a look at the arms for example try and use the darker shade of tan instead...ill stop here but your biggest issue like most beginners is your lines both proportion and strength wise.

I hope this helps you