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Ask please before using something please? Also I'm really slow at doing stuff so yeah.
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Channing Fey(Animated by ApolloGrimoire)
Margaret Jing(Animated by ApolloGrimore)
Ali Care 2.0 animated by ApolloGrimoire:
Henry Park animated by ApolloGrimoire
Judge's grandaughter animated by ApolloGrimoire
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Extra Ema poses
Angie for ApolloGrimoire and animated by him
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Cambrio DeLite for the competition "EVERYTHING IS RELATIVE" in AAO, got third place animated by ApolloGrimoire
Mari Possa for The Sound of Music competition animated by ApolloGrimoire:
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Thanks! Do you have any suggestions?
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If you want some proper feedback/suggestions, I can recommend mercurialSK to you.
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They're pretty good. Definitely not bad for first time sprites, especially considering that they've mostly been made from scratch.
Recommendations:
-You need to work on the arms and hands, especially around the shoulders and elbows. In some sprites, her elbow is a different spot on her arm than in other sprites. You need to make sure she's anatomically consistent (I'm looking at her sprite where she's holding the paper... She has almost no forearm in that one). Also, you should adjust the seams around her shoulders in a few of the sprites (specifically the desk pound one, comes to mind).
-In a few of the sprites, she looks really thin. When she turns to the side, maybe thicken her up a bit.
-What is her right hand doing in the sprite where she touches her face? It looks like it's shoved down her pants.
I can think of more, but I don't have much time to write at the moment. I might add later. Good work so far.
Edit: Those were all referring to Margaret.
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If you want some proper feedback/suggestions, I can recommend mercurialSK to you.
That would be nice!
How can i return the favor?
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They're pretty good. Definitely not bad for first time sprites, especially considering that they've mostly been made from scratch.
Recommendations:
-You need to work on the arms and hands, especially around the shoulders and elbows. In some sprites, here elbow is a different spot on her arm than in other sprites. You need to make sure she's anatomically consistent (I'm looking at her sprite where she's holding the paper... She has almost no forearm in that one). Also, you should adjust the seams around her shoulders in a few of the sprites (specifically the desk pound one, comes to mind).
-In a few of the sprites, she looks really thin. When she turns to the side, maybe thicken her up a bit.
-What is her right hand doing in the sprite where she touches her face? It looks like it's shoved down her pants.
I can think of more, but I don't have much time to write at the moment. I might add later. Good work so far.
Edit: Those were all referring to Margaret.
Thanks for the recommendations!
(I LOVE CONFLICT OF INTEREST)
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If you want some proper feedback/suggestions, I can recommend mercurialSK to you.
That would be nice!
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A sprite of a OC, but I need to show you my works first.
Done Channing Fey
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I had to add a middle blinking sprite for the last set.
As for the sprite, I'll pm you with that in a moment.
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Just Margaret's face when looking to the side is kinda squished in. Maybe don't have her face so flat, and a protruding nose, and round it out. Other than that, a great start to spriting! All those poses are good practice!
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Just Margaret's face when looking to the side is kinda squished in. Maybe don't have her face so flat, and a protruding nose, and round it out. Other than that, a great start to spriting! All those poses are good practice!
I have seen your works to!
I really love your new Ocs, my favorite is Dimitri
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I would say that the most pressing thing to improve right now is anatomy - specifically, understanding of the torso. This problem is most evident in Margaret's objection pose. (There is also the issue of objection startups having one frame only instead of the two you have there, but that's a minor detail compared to her torso.)
I look forward to seeing more of your work. :)
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If you want some proper feedback/suggestions, I can recommend mercurialSK to you.
That would be nice!
How can i return the favor?
A sprite of a OC, but I need to show you my works first.
Done Channing Fey
I had to add a middle blinking sprite for the last set.
As for the sprite, I'll pm you with that in a moment.
They look awesome! I just love it
I really want you to know how happy i feel
Send me as soon as possible the information of your OC please!
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I would say that the most pressing thing to improve right now is anatomy - specifically, understanding of the torso. This problem is most evident in Margaret's objection pose. (There is also the issue of objection startups having one frame only instead of the two you have there, but that's a minor detail compared to her torso.)
I look forward to seeing more of your work. :)
The thing is Margaret where my first sprites, and making them in Paint its some times frustating, i tried to use Gimp but i´m a little bit idiot using it.
Thanks! I love your works too
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Thanks! Working right now in your Oc
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This is thena! ^^ I've yet to add my icon but its meeeeee
I wanted to tell you that I really love the sprites and also could I throw some DA poitns your way for an aditional MArgaret sprite? I wanted to make her abreakdown one and I drew it out and everything but I like I said I don't do digital art. Anyway I wanted to say hi and nice sprites and all ~ UuU
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This is thena! ^^ I've yet to add my icon but its meeeeee
I wanted to tell you that I really love the sprites and also could I throw some DA poitns your way for an aditional MArgaret sprite? I wanted to make her abreakdown one and I drew it out and everything but I like I said I don't do digital art. Anyway I wanted to say hi and nice sprites and all ~ UuU
Don´t worry about that, im going to do that pose for free.
Good luck Athena in Court records!
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Comment your thoughts about him and if there´s something wrong or things of that nature
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Looks great! the lines are nice and smooth, and the composition is well done! I really like it!
If you want me to give you some nitpick-y advice, would I be able to slightly edit this sprite and explain the changes? (If I put it into words, it'll sound a lot larger an issue than it really is, so showing you might be easier)
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Comment your thoughts about him and if there´s something wrong or things of that nature
Looks great! the lines are nice and smooth, and the composition is well done! I really like it!
If you want me to give you some nitpick-y advice, would I be able to slightly edit this sprite and explain the changes? (If I put it into words, it'll sound a lot larger an issue than it really is, so showing you might be easier)
That would be nice!
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I could change color but i don´t think i can´t make them rounder since the person told me to do it rectangular
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Here:
I really like what you did and thanks for let me use it!
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Henry Park!
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You didn't tell me...
Nice sprites Hessehl!
I am now confident that you will do a great job.
I was going to, my bad
Thanks!
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Thanks they look awesome!
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Hessehl, I just want to tell you that it is unsafe for you to post the sprites of Turnabout Attorneys here on C-R.
The issue is that, people can easily use those sprites without permission and I don't feel confortable with that.
Just make people know that "Henry" can only be used with my permission.
But we can get promotion,lets just put a disclaimer
ok?
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She has more idea in what she's doing than her grandpa
Y'know
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Mr.Nearavex, have you seen the evidence correctly?
because if you compare the two judges
THEY ARE ABOUT THE SAME SIZE!
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Thanks! But she can´t be compared to the beatiful sprites of our inmortal judge
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Given the proportions of the Judge's bench so far, I'd expect more something like this
We shouldn't see too much of her body, since most of it chest down should be covered by the bench. If she's smaller, it doesn't make sense for her to be taller than Udgey and show more of her body above the bench as a result.
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Given the proportions of the Judge's bench so far, I'd expect more something like this
We shouldn't see too much of here body, since most of it chest down should be covered by the bench. If she's smaller, it doesn't make sense for her to be taller than Udgey and show more of her body above the bench as a result.
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My spelling is awful.
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