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A young Franziska von Karma. Hm. >_>

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First one. Looks scary. XD

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Second, updated. Neck looks okay now, in my opinion, but now the hair is off. :yuusaku: Eh...

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Cindy Stone, the victim from the first case. Yes, I know she doesn't look like this.

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Matt with newly coloured hair. Hm.

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I know this has been done so many times before, but I wanted to try it. A young von Karma.

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not bad for a first sprite.


though, on the neck, there are a few stray pixels. Also the hair can use a few more pixels in certain zones.

I take note on the detail ^^; but overall on your first try its good.
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Thanks for the advice. :maya:
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And with young von Karma, I poke this board up, looking for advice. :matt:
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I think you've done a pretty good job with Von Karma. Maybe smooth out the area around his cheeks just a tad, as that area looks a little bumpy.
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Younger von Karma is my favourite!
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I smoothed out young Karma's cheeks now, and did a few re-colouring things on his eyebrows. Thanks, to both of you!
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The first one is actually REALLY good.

Well done.

I need to start making some.
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Yay. ^_^ Thanks.
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Very good sprites for a beginner, but if you want to avoid losing colours and such, use a "Pallette" If you don't use a pallette, you might end up running out of colours that you need. Take the clothing colours, (each one) outline colours, facial colours, and hair colours. here is an example of a pallette:

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I took Phoenix's Colours, and made a pallette, yours doesn't have to be as neat as mine, but I did that on purpose one day because I was bored... Feel free to use it if you plan to make a phoenix someday.

And the reason your first one is kinda messed up is because of the Expression (Eyes/eyebrows+mouth) They can make a character look happy, sad, mad, excited, crazy etc.

Hope that helped...
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Hm. Well, thanks, I'll keep that in mind. :maya:
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Emi wrote:
Hm. Well, thanks, I'll keep that in mind. :maya:

no Prob, Ive been doing sprites for at least two years, and I've found this technique very useful.
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I see wut you did thar.

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I leik X3

Hrm...All I see that's wrong with it is that the coloring on 2's neck is kinda too light on the edges and the red in Matt's hair could use a bit of blending in with the black a little :3

I especially like the young von Karma X3
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Thanks for the comments. I was actually thinking of re-doing the second one so it looks cleaner, and I kind of see what you mean on the Matt sprite.

People do seem to like the younger von Karma one. xD
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I do too, well done!
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Thank you. ^_^
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Updated with a younger Franziska. Wow, I actually did something. :pearl:
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those are pretty good :gymshoe: you should be proud
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