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Phoenix Wleft™ Cartoon (Windows Movie maker) Sprites, RequesTopic%20Title

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Okay so I'm making the spites and stuff and the lips wont be sinc'd but it'll be funny if ya want me to make a sprite for you in this style just ask. Or If you wan't to use some give credit.

Here's an engarde sprite when phoenix catches him when hes evil and he changes back real quick.

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Wow. You are my hero. :matt:
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Brandon Strong wrote:
Wow. You are my hero. :matt:


Really???
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Really really!
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Brandon Strong wrote:
Really really!



Wicked!
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Re: Phoenix Wleft™ Cartoon (Windows Movie maker) Sprites, RequesTopic%20Title

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Anyone have a Request for a sprite??? :hotti: :eh?:
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Soooooo not a Nazi!

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how about a sprite for Shoe? :shoe:
:badger: = awesomeness
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I'd fix all the details on that sprite if I were you. It isn't pretty but it's pretty well animated.
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Desert rose, why do you live alone?

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Yeah, the artwork definitely needs improvement. It looks ass ugly.
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I really, REALLY don't know how to respond to this.
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Guys, don't be rude. Constructive criticism is great, rash comments are not.

Honestly though I think you should work on cleaning them up, there's a few floating pixels around.
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First thing to do is find what on earth a 'sprite' is. Second of all, improve on your spriting untill you feel it to be near 'official quality'.

This is just animations of fastly made paint drawings put together in an animation, not sprites. Compare it to the original phoenix wright sprites. Does it, even remotely, reach that quality? Is the style kept?

I really don't know how much constructive criticism I can give. There isn't much that isn't just wrong here. Oh, and if you really want to show your artistic progress, show some form of 'rank' in your speeching. 'I'm a noob, and I know it', instead of 'I'm making some sprites and taking requests!'

know thine enemy and know thine self.
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The outline on Engarde is waaaaay thick. You need too downscale and make your sprites smoother, and throw in some shading. And if you complain that all you have is MSPaint, that's no excuse as MSPaint is great to work with.
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DarzieP wrote:
The outline on Engarde is waaaaay thick. You need too downscale and make your sprites smoother, and throw in some shading. And if you complain that all you have is MSPaint, that's no excuse as MSPaint is great to work with.


That's the next step, but first you need to get the mentalitity of an artist. You can't know everything, nobody can, so all you can do is try out diffrent styles, and work your way forward.

And for heaven's sake, a little perfectionism and self-criticism is not in the way.
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Re: Phoenix Wleft™ Cartoon (Windows Movie maker) Sprites, RequesTopic%20Title

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the outline was supposed to be thick xD
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Yes, but thick outlines can still be neat. For example, in Flash cartoons. Your animation is pretty good but you should work on your anatomy, form, construction ect. in drawing.
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