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Urrich Ryuaga Sheet.Topic%20Title

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Hey Everybody. Do you think this sprite sheet is okay. I'm submitting it to Croik.


Behold: Image

Do you think it's cool?
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Haha, I still love Daft Punk <3

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It's good but there's something wrong with his collar.
It's going over his neck where it should be behind.
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Hmm... I think I'll get away with that for the first sprite.
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Haha, I still love Daft Punk <3

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And the second two rows necks are really awkward.
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I'm stickin with this for now.
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You should do wome shading on the glove and the hat. They don't really fit in at all. Fix the neck/collar, and the shouldr in the point animation.
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Manfred von Karma wrote:
You should do wome shading on the glove and the hat. They don't really fit in at all. Fix the neck/collar, and the shouldr in the point animation.



Thank you I will. :edgy:
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It's just an edit really. And Croik doesn't really like those very much, IMO. Also it's really flawed and doesn't look like on the parts you DIDN'T edit.

Nice try, but it needs great improvement.
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Sorry, but Croik only accepts stuff that's, you know, good.
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Hey guys, no offense but please don't be telling people "CROIK DOESN'T LIKE IT". I actually think the concept isn't that bad. It's just not executed well. So let's try to think up some constructive criticism for the man.

Like, there's no detail on the glove. It would really benefit from shading.

The red splotch on his neck doesn't look like shading. Is it supposed to be a scar or a burn or something? It looks like you used the red color from the inside of Daian's jacket, but it doesn't really belong there.

The neck is too skinny in every one of the sprites.

You ought to change the color of the hoodie, at the very least. Maybe even add a design so it doesn't look quite so obviously Phoenix.

Those are my suggestions!
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Croik wrote:
Hey guys, no offense but please don't be telling people "CROIK DOESN'T LIKE IT". I actually think the concept isn't that bad. It's just not executed well. So let's try to think up some constructive criticism for the man!


Umm... yes... let's see... one more thing is, if you look closely... you'll see that his face is pointing towards us... but the main reason for that is because his eyes are facing us.
If you moves the pupil inside his eye over a little, it might look a little better.
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I see wut you did thar.

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What program do you use for your sprite editing, by the way?

The hat looks pretty good, but it could use a little shading. :3

As for the neck situation, just get the head to attach to the hobo Phoenix body without the head looking 'sewn on' :3 and if that thing under the neck is a red shirt, you could just add the shirt after you attatch the head to the body (as in just draw in a shirt) (it'd be best to just start all over with the body as in, get a clean version of hobo Phoenix and attatch Urrich's head to his body :3 )

And for the glove, just recolor the hand green and maybe add some lines to look like stitches in the gloves to make it more obvious he's wearing gloves.

And his right (our right, not Urrich's) ear looks kinda off, so maybe try removing it to see if that makes it look a bit better. It just looks a bit off to me, that's all. :3

I do most of my sprite recoloring with the 'recolor tool' in Photoshop, so if you have it, that would help and make your life easier with the recoloring thing :3 I hope this all helped! (Sorry to be such a critic D; I just want to help, that's all...)
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I have MS paint lolz
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Cropanimations wrote:
I have MS paint lolz


Why lolz? And BTW it looks akward in the pointing ones because... the head facing us...
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