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It's going over his neck where it should be behind.
I'm not going to be here very often anymore.
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I'm not going to be here very often anymore.
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Nice try, but it needs great improvement.
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Like, there's no detail on the glove. It would really benefit from shading.
The red splotch on his neck doesn't look like shading. Is it supposed to be a scar or a burn or something? It looks like you used the red color from the inside of Daian's jacket, but it doesn't really belong there.
The neck is too skinny in every one of the sprites.
You ought to change the color of the hoodie, at the very least. Maybe even add a design so it doesn't look quite so obviously Phoenix.
Those are my suggestions!
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Umm... yes... let's see... one more thing is, if you look closely... you'll see that his face is pointing towards us... but the main reason for that is because his eyes are facing us.
If you moves the pupil inside his eye over a little, it might look a little better.
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The hat looks pretty good, but it could use a little shading. :3
As for the neck situation, just get the head to attach to the hobo Phoenix body without the head looking 'sewn on' :3 and if that thing under the neck is a red shirt, you could just add the shirt after you attatch the head to the body (as in just draw in a shirt) (it'd be best to just start all over with the body as in, get a clean version of hobo Phoenix and attatch Urrich's head to his body :3 )
And for the glove, just recolor the hand green and maybe add some lines to look like stitches in the gloves to make it more obvious he's wearing gloves.
And his right (our right, not Urrich's) ear looks kinda off, so maybe try removing it to see if that makes it look a bit better. It just looks a bit off to me, that's all. :3
I do most of my sprite recoloring with the 'recolor tool' in Photoshop, so if you have it, that would help and make your life easier with the recoloring thing :3 I hope this all helped! (Sorry to be such a critic D; I just want to help, that's all...)
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Why lolz? And BTW it looks akward in the pointing ones because... the head facing us...
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