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fapman wrote:
Mikker wrote:
Inside jokes arn't good. I already scratched a few ideas because of that. 
Meh, it was worth a shot...alright, screw that earlier bit I suggested, and try this on for size...if this also sucks, then I'll stop with the ideas for a while:
(Takes place in Wright & Co. Law Offices)
: Maya, are you trying to trick me into doing something? 
: ...Noooooo, I'm not tricking you-
: 
(Shoves Wright out of the way)
: That's a damned lie, and I just so happen to have proof that says you are lying! : (Thinking to himself) Thank you, Captain Obvious. I wonder what he'll disprove next. : Well, Wright, what do you think? Am I ready to take over your job, yet-
: GET THE HELL OUT OF MY OFFICE NOW!!! : Eep! : AND DON'T COME BACK UNTIL I QUIT THIS GODFORSAKEN JOB!!!That made me rofl >.> I didn't get the Desu one.
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Deefunx wrote:
That made me rofl >.> I didn't get the Desu one.
After what Mikker said, I realized that the desu joke would only make sense to CR members who were here during 2007's April Fools Day. In any case, thanks.
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I want some suggestions... Maybe replace those red flash with something better?
Spoiler: Emo von Karma (Incomplete ~ 1st Update)
Well at least... The script has been update! It wasn't easy this time:
Unnamed Part 30 - by Nego
Unnamed Part 31 - by fapman
I haven't forgot about fapman's part involving DarzieP and myself. I'll hopefully check out my MP3 Player (for the microphone
) tomorrow.Nego wrote:
Thanks. I'd like to try to voice act as Edgeworth in Unnamed Part 28. It's night right now, so I'll try to record them later today (Monday). If I succeed, I'll send them to you and if I don't, I'll let you know so someone else can do them.
And thanks for letting me to be part of this project. It's a real honour for me.
And thanks for letting me to be part of this project. It's a real honour for me.
Oh thanks and I'm about to blush like crazy!
I'm just a person a like you! I shouldn't be treated with such praise...
And now with what you're offering. I've got you clips but I have a problem with them...
Is it the finnish accent? Nope, it fine like many other clips.
Is it the format? Now way, .wav and .mp3 are perfectly fine!
Is it the microphone quality? Bingo! My guess is that you microphone catches your voice so quietly that it get surronded by static interference. I'm not sure how you could fix that, just give it another try if you believed you've solved the problem.
Also, your third comic has been added to the script as Unnamed Part 30.
DetectiveAnonymous wrote:
*chuckles*
I'm still lurking this thread, but let me just say that Unnamed Part 29 is a brilliant idea. XD
I'm still lurking this thread, but let me just say that Unnamed Part 29 is a brilliant idea. XD
: The lurkers are upon us!Jyuni wrote:
I like Franziska in Unnamed 29 please.
The deed is done!
DarzieP wrote:
Rev's email address has a hideous habit of not actually getting them, so if you wanna send to me, (his second in command), I can do something with em.
Well, it's mainly a 50/50 thing. RonStarwind was going through hell to send his work.
: You can't handle the truth!fapman wrote:
Meh, it was worth a shot...alright, screw that earlier bit I suggested, and try this on for size...if this also sucks, then I'll stop with the ideas for a while:
(Takes place in Wright & Co. Law Offices)
: Maya, are you trying to trick me into doing something?
: ...Noooooo, I'm not tricking you-
:
(Shoves Wright out of the way)
: That's a damned lie, and I just so happen to have proof that says you are lying!
: (Thinking to himself) Thank you, Captain Obvious. I wonder what he'll disprove next.
: Well, Wright, what do you think? Am I ready to take over your job, yet-
: GET THE HELL OUT OF MY OFFICE NOW!!!
: Eep!
: AND DON'T COME BACK UNTIL I QUIT THIS GODFORSAKEN JOB!!!
(Takes place in Wright & Co. Law Offices)
: Maya, are you trying to trick me into doing something? : ...Noooooo, I'm not tricking you- : (Shoves Wright out of the way)
: That's a damned lie, and I just so happen to have proof that says you are lying! : (Thinking to himself) Thank you, Captain Obvious. I wonder what he'll disprove next. : Well, Wright, what do you think? Am I ready to take over your job, yet- : GET THE HELL OUT OF MY OFFICE NOW!!! : Eep! : AND DON'T COME BACK UNTIL I QUIT THIS GODFORSAKEN JOB!!!
It's from your new comic: http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/8865/case008er3.jpgI've seen this for some time and I was going to comment on it but I was too busy and ended up forgetting it.
This joke has left me laughing so hard! It has been added to the script as Unnamed Part 31.
Deefunx wrote:
Wow, I'm flattered that you like my joke. I knew it was funny but I thought it was proably because of my sense of humour. ;P
Thanks and it's time for my revenge, Deefunx!
fapman wrote:
After what Mikker said, I realized that the desu joke would only make sense to CR members who were here during 2007's April Fools Day. In any case, thanks.
True. That day was so messed up! Only a number of people understood your Desu joke but it still left me laughing!
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I'd like to be the Judge in Unnamed Part 29, please.
The deed is done!
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And Rev, I like how the Emo von Karma part is coming out.
I'd like Maya in Unnamed 31 please
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RevFirst wrote:
Oh thanks and I'm about to blush like crazy!
I'm just a person a like you! I shouldn't be treated with such praise...
And now with what you're offering. I've got you clips but I have a problem with them...
Is it the finnish accent? Nope, it fine like many other clips.
Is it the format? Now way, .wav and .mp3 are perfectly fine!
Is it the microphone quality? Bingo! My guess is that you microphone catches your voice so quietly that it get surronded by static interference. I'm not sure how you could fix that, just give it another try if you believed you've solved the problem.
Also, your third comic has been added to the script as Unnamed Part 30.
I'm just a person a like you! I shouldn't be treated with such praise...
And now with what you're offering. I've got you clips but I have a problem with them...
Is it the finnish accent? Nope, it fine like many other clips.
Is it the format? Now way, .wav and .mp3 are perfectly fine!
Is it the microphone quality? Bingo! My guess is that you microphone catches your voice so quietly that it get surronded by static interference. I'm not sure how you could fix that, just give it another try if you believed you've solved the problem.
Also, your third comic has been added to the script as Unnamed Part 30.
Yeah, I know you're a person just like me. What I ment was that It's a honor to be involved in a Phoenix Wrong -movie as I really love those films.
Ok.. I'll try to do something about the quality. I'm not sure if my microphones are low quality or if it's because I was kinda close to my computer. I'll try to record them again (standing not so close to my computer) the day after tomorrow and see if I can do something to them (I won't do it tomorrow as it's holiday and my mom is going to be home all day
).By the way, I like the script for Unnamed Part 30 and I understand if it's just you being lazy, but I seriously think there should be more questions as Phoenix's idea was to make Godot say that one line several times so he wouldn't notice Phoenix's questions. Otherwise, good job!
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I feel like a line hog, but i'm going to attempt all of these tomorrow when i get back from school. D: if anyone else wants to attempt them, though, they can go ahead; like i said, i feel like i'm hogging too many lines.
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What Von Karma's doing while he's echoing though, I'm not sure.
/EDIT The echo would be a little like the OVER... NINE-THOUSAND! NINE-THOUSAND! sort of thing. But not exactly like it.
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SEE !!!!!! ALL OF YOUR STUFF IS FUNNY XD
WHEN YOU PLAY THEM ALL AT ONCE IT SACRY X3
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RevFirst wrote:
Thanks and it's time for my revenge, Deefunx!
Ahhh! It burns D: ILLEGAL EVIDENCE! D:
*Penalized* Heh, sounds like penis
It does, doesnt it? Ahahahahaha *acro tears*>.>
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Jintor wrote:
What I was thinking was... he (Von Karma) would go RUINED! RUINED! RUINED! Ruined! Ruined... Echo-like as the background Du Hast noises built up and the Ruined sound fades, and then the drums kick in with the black and white effect and procede normally from there.
What Von Karma's doing while he's echoing though, I'm not sure.
/EDIT The echo would be a little like the OVER... NINE-THOUSAND! NINE-THOUSAND! sort of thing. But not exactly like it.
What Von Karma's doing while he's echoing though, I'm not sure.
/EDIT The echo would be a little like the OVER... NINE-THOUSAND! NINE-THOUSAND! sort of thing. But not exactly like it.
Originality friend. That's what this projects about. The over nine thousand thing has been done to death, I'm afraid.
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Well, it's mainly a 50/50 thing. RonStarwind was going through hell to send his work.
Yes... yes I was, Anyways could I take Phoenix for unamed part 30?
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Spoiler: Emo von Karma (Incomplete ~ 2nd Update)
Still, I've used this time to plan out what happens next and already setted up the upcoming graphics.
The fractals are made by Deefunx.
The echo idea is by Jintor.
The script is also updated... I just hope you people can send them in soon.
LySs wrote:
I love the new ideas! XD
And Rev, I like how the Emo von Karma part is coming out.
I'd like Maya in Unnamed 31 please
And Rev, I like how the Emo von Karma part is coming out.
I'd like Maya in Unnamed 31 please
Thanks but Maya's part is already taken. You should still send them in for judgement.
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Yeah, I know you're a person just like me. What I ment was that It's a honor to be involved in a Phoenix Wrong -movie as I really love those films.
Ok.. I'll try to do something about the quality. I'm not sure if my microphones are low quality or if it's because I was kinda close to my computer. I'll try to record them again (standing not so close to my computer) the day after tomorrow and see if I can do something to them (I won't do it tomorrow as it's holiday and my mom is going to be home all day ).
By the way, I like the script for Unnamed Part 30 and I understand if it's just you being lazy, but I seriously think there should be more questions as Phoenix's idea was to make Godot say that one line several times so he wouldn't notice Phoenix's questions. Otherwise, good job!
Ok.. I'll try to do something about the quality. I'm not sure if my microphones are low quality or if it's because I was kinda close to my computer. I'll try to record them again (standing not so close to my computer) the day after tomorrow and see if I can do something to them (I won't do it tomorrow as it's holiday and my mom is going to be home all day
).By the way, I like the script for Unnamed Part 30 and I understand if it's just you being lazy, but I seriously think there should be more questions as Phoenix's idea was to make Godot say that one line several times so he wouldn't notice Phoenix's questions. Otherwise, good job!
: O rly?Anyways, thanks and be sure to send in those clips as soon as you can...
If you feel like your part isn't presented the way you want it then post yours. Just copy it from the script and decide what should be altered and/or deleted.
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I feel like a line hog, but i'm going to attempt all of these tomorrow when i get back from school. D: if anyone else wants to attempt them, though, they can go ahead; like i said, i feel like i'm hogging too many lines.
Being a line-hog, aren't you?
To be fair, all I can reserve for you are Phoenix's lines for Unnamed Part 28 and Unnamed Part 29. You should still send in all your work for judgment and back-up. I have no poroblem with and it could even benifit. fapman wrote:
I'm calling The Judge's lines for Unnamed Part 30...and Sawhit/Sal Manella's lines for Unnamed Part 28.
The deed is- Oh wait... You've already sent the clips. Talk about VA-Express.
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OMG
SEE !!!!!! ALL OF YOUR STUFF IS FUNNY XD
WHEN YOU PLAY THEM ALL AT ONCE IT SACRY X3
SEE !!!!!! ALL OF YOUR STUFF IS FUNNY XD
WHEN YOU PLAY THEM ALL AT ONCE IT SACRY X3
Long time, no see.
Thanks again and I guess the scare factor makes it Phoenix Wrong afterall.
Deefunx wrote:
Ahhh! It burns D: ILLEGAL EVIDENCE! D:
*Penalized*
Heh, sounds like penis
It does, doesnt it?
Ahahahahaha
*acro tears*
>.>
*Penalized* Heh, sounds like penis It does, doesnt it? Ahahahahaha *acro tears*>.>
You made it!
And yeah, we've personally dicussed about this and you don't really care about this...
...You were sort of brain-storming.
DarzieP wrote:
Originality friend. That's what this projects about. The over nine thousand thing has been done to death, I'm afraid.
Well he did mean it as the same style. But yeah, I personally find the Over Nine Thousand joke to be most stale.
RonStarwind wrote:
Yes... yes I was, Anyways could I take Phoenix for unamed part 30?
No one can deny the nightmare... I meant the deed is done.
T3h_Waffleman wrote:
Odoroki in 31 prz.
The deed is done.
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RevFirst wrote:
This part bearly progresses at all but today's update is made to improve on it.
Still, I've used this time to plan out what happens next and already setted up the upcoming graphics.
The fractals are made by Deefunx.
The echo idea is by Jintor.
The script is also updated... I just hope you people can send them in soon.
Spoiler: Emo von Karma (Incomplete ~ 2nd Update)
Still, I've used this time to plan out what happens next and already setted up the upcoming graphics.
The fractals are made by Deefunx.
The echo idea is by Jintor.
The script is also updated... I just hope you people can send them in soon.
Hmmm... the echo isn't bad, but it's slightly too fast right now. Maybe he should be slamming his fist again? Not sure... sort of like...
Ruined! *SLAM* Ruined! *SLAM!* RUINED! *SLAM!* RUINED! (goes into shock pose with drums) (Black and white thing).
Still something wrong. Can't put my finger on it. Maybe the 'Ruined!' bits should sound fade out a little more, I don't know. Think it's dependant on the speed, though - the amount of 'Ruined!'s feels too fast, too many. The effect is pretty good though, but it'd be improved I feel if he wasn't simply standing still when you zoom in. Or is a moving animation while you zoom harder? He should at least do something, I think...
/EDIT: Can i reserve Phoenix, Section 31. Please? //EDIT And Edgeworth, section 27?
I'll send as soon as possible.
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RevFirst wrote:
: O rly?Anyways, thanks and be sure to send in those clips as soon as you can...
If you feel like your part isn't presented the way you want it then post yours. Just copy it from the script and decide what should be altered and/or deleted.
I tried again with those lines and it didn't turn out good. It seems that my microphone is taking it's last breath. I also tried to use my mp3-player, but the quality wasn't that good. It was better than my microphone, but it included too much other sounds as well (allthough it was totally silent
). I would try it with another mp3-player of mine, but sadly it said goodbye today and broke out. So, I don't think I'm ever going to get those lines recorded. Therefore someone else can do them.Now, this is what I ment with the script:
Spoiler: Your script and my additions
I bolded what I added so it would be easier to spot.
What I mean is that when you add those lines there, it seems like Phoenix is trying to trick Godot to say only his catchphrase (just like in the old cow-milk-thing(check later part of my post)). If you take those lines off, I have no reason to belive Godot would actually say that line when Phoenix is asking his last question.
Spoiler: Cow-Milk-Thing
Sorry if you find this offending, because I didn't intend it that way. I just wrote what I think would be better. And now when I think of it, that conversation between
and could work in Phoenix Wrong. Don't you think the same?
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Nego wrote:
Now, this is what I ment with the script:
I bolded what I added so it would be easier to spot.
What I mean is that when you add those lines there, it seems like Phoenix is trying to trick Godot to say only his catchphrase (just like in the old cow-milk-thing(check later part of my post)). If you take those lines off, I have no reason to belive Godot would actually say that line when Phoenix is asking his last question.
Spoiler: Your script and my additions
I bolded what I added so it would be easier to spot.
What I mean is that when you add those lines there, it seems like Phoenix is trying to trick Godot to say only his catchphrase (just like in the old cow-milk-thing(check later part of my post)). If you take those lines off, I have no reason to belive Godot would actually say that line when Phoenix is asking his last question.
YES!! I will definetly add that when I'm doing the lines for that part, I might also put in a couple of my own
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'Cause I'm Godot, bitch!
I yell "OBJECTION!" in the court sometimes!
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Nego wrote:
Now, this is what I ment with the script..
There's a reason why the script was cut down. Smaller parts are easier to do. Less back and forth camera sweeping and all that jazz. And that we're just trying to use the basic joke.
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DarzieP wrote:
Nego wrote:
Now, this is what I ment with the script..
There's a reason why the script was cut down. Smaller parts are easier to do. Less back and forth camera sweeping and all that jazz. And that we're just trying to use the basic joke. Thats my rule.
*shot*
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DarzieP wrote:
Nego wrote:
Now, this is what I ment with the script..
There's a reason why the script was cut down. Smaller parts are easier to do. Less back and forth camera sweeping and all that jazz. And that we're just trying to use the basic joke.
Oh well then I guess I won't be doing that then
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I've had things to do but hope should shine tomorrow and I've still updated the script.
While the wait, check out my crappy comics: viewtopic.php?f=15&t=1540
And fapman: Sorry, the microphone on my MP3 player suck ass.
LySs wrote:
Alrighty Rev, I sent my recordings to you. If you don't choose any of them it's quite alright
I've got them. Aww! So well done... So hard to choose!
I'll decide in the next update.
Jintor wrote:
Hmmm... the echo isn't bad, but it's slightly too fast right now. Maybe he should be slamming his fist again? Not sure... sort of like...
Ruined! *SLAM* Ruined! *SLAM!* RUINED! *SLAM!* RUINED! (goes into shock pose with drums) (Black and white thing).
Still something wrong. Can't put my finger on it. Maybe the 'Ruined!' bits should sound fade out a little more, I don't know. Think it's dependant on the speed, though - the amount of 'Ruined!'s feels too fast, too many. The effect is pretty good though, but it'd be improved I feel if he wasn't simply standing still when you zoom in. Or is a moving animation while you zoom harder? He should at least do something, I think...
/EDIT: Can i reserve Phoenix, Section 31. Please? //EDIT And Edgeworth, section 27?
I'll send as soon as possible.
Ruined! *SLAM* Ruined! *SLAM!* RUINED! *SLAM!* RUINED! (goes into shock pose with drums) (Black and white thing).
Still something wrong. Can't put my finger on it. Maybe the 'Ruined!' bits should sound fade out a little more, I don't know. Think it's dependant on the speed, though - the amount of 'Ruined!'s feels too fast, too many. The effect is pretty good though, but it'd be improved I feel if he wasn't simply standing still when you zoom in. Or is a moving animation while you zoom harder? He should at least do something, I think...
/EDIT: Can i reserve Phoenix, Section 31. Please? //EDIT And Edgeworth, section 27?
I'll send as soon as possible.
...
Could you summerise that please? I'll experiment with the zoom-in thing but DarzieP and myself were really baffled about what you really want.
Anyways, I've reserved the lines for you.
Nego wrote:
Now, this is what I ment with the script:
I bolded what I added so it would be easier to spot.
What I mean is that when you add those lines there, it seems like Phoenix is trying to trick Godot to say only his catchphrase (just like in the old cow-milk-thing(check later part of my post)). If you take those lines off, I have no reason to belive Godot would actually say that line when Phoenix is asking his last question.
Sorry if you find this offending, because I didn't intend it that way. I just wrote what I think would be better. And now when I think of it, that conversation between and could work in Phoenix Wrong. Don't you think the same?
Spoiler: Your script and my additions
I bolded what I added so it would be easier to spot.
What I mean is that when you add those lines there, it seems like Phoenix is trying to trick Godot to say only his catchphrase (just like in the old cow-milk-thing(check later part of my post)). If you take those lines off, I have no reason to belive Godot would actually say that line when Phoenix is asking his last question.
Spoiler: Cow-Milk-Thing
Sorry if you find this offending, because I didn't intend it that way. I just wrote what I think would be better. And now when I think of it, that conversation between
and could work in Phoenix Wrong. Don't you think the same?DarzieP has made a good point about this, the camera sweeping back and forth could get tiresome. No offence but that part may need to be compressed a bit. If you won't, I'll do so myself on the next update. Also, the Phoenix and Maya conversation is too familiar to this part already so it's not required I guess.
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YES!! I will definetly add that when I'm doing the lines for that part, I might also put in a couple of my own
RonStarwind wrote:
Oh well then I guess I won't be doing that then
You still should send them in, those lines aren't the problematic ones.
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If no one has reserved Godot, I wish to do so.
'Cause I'm Godot, bitch!
'Cause I'm Godot, bitch!The deed is done!
Deefunx wrote:
Rev, any comments on the podcast? >.> Any voices suit?
So you're the younger one, right? If so, I don't see how it could with the likes of Phoenix and Edgeworth but I could be wrong. Just send in any clips of lines that you feel confident about.
fapman wrote:
...I guess I'm gonna call Phoenix's lines for Unnamed Part 31...unless somebody else called them before me. is that alright?
Jintor has but you should still definitely send them in. Your remarkable timing always helps.
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1) Too many "Ruined!" echoes or
2) All the "Ruined!" echoes go on for too long, or
3) The first couple are too loud.
Apologies for my rambling style, but i tend to plot out how i think... as i think. It gets confusing. :P
Thanks for the lines, I'll record after violin.
/EDIT Fapman can have Unnamed 31, i make a crap Phoenix. :(
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RevFirst wrote:
DarzieP has made a good point about this, the camera sweeping back and forth could get tiresome. No offence but that part may need to be compressed a bit. If you won't, I'll do so myself on the next update. Also, the Phoenix and Maya conversation is too familiar to this part already so it's not required I guess.
All right then. I understand that well. I'm counting on you to make it work great.
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RevFirst wrote:
And fapman: Sorry, the microphone on my MP3 player suck ass.
Aw, crap. Ah well, does somebody else have a better idea for a hidden Blooper reel?
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fapman wrote:
Aw, crap. Ah well, does somebody else have a better idea for a hidden Blooper reel?
Phoenix and co. sitting on a couch watching a crappy sitcom or something and Phoenix suddenly starts to burst out laughing uncontrollably, then falls off the couch and starts rolling on the floor for a good minute XD
*shrug* Meh, It was funny in my head.
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ACE NINJA PHOENIX WRITE
*In ninja outfit* *Throws several kunai at Miles*
*Also in ninja jammies* *Throws shurikan at Phoenix**Kunai and shurikan are about to hit their marks*
*leaps out of nowhere* OVERRULED!!!! *Throws a giant cheesy-looking ball of exagerated DBZ lightning at Phoenix and Edgy*
OH SHIT!(note) Try to make the Judge sound really cheesy and loud like the IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAND!!! line. ;)
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Burning Rain wrote:
This spawned today at school talking to my friend Keon.
ACE NINJA PHOENIX WRITE
*In ninja outfit* *Throws several kunai at Miles*
*Also in ninja jammies* *Throws shurikan at Phoenix*
*Kunai and shurikan are about to hit their marks*
*leaps out of nowhere* OVERRULED!!!! *Throws a giant cheesy-looking ball of exagerated DBZ lightning at Phoenix and Edgy*
OH SHIT!
(note) Try to make the Judge sound really cheesy and loud like the IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAND!!! line. ;)
ACE NINJA PHOENIX WRITE
*In ninja outfit* *Throws several kunai at Miles* *Also in ninja jammies* *Throws shurikan at Phoenix**Kunai and shurikan are about to hit their marks*
*leaps out of nowhere* OVERRULED!!!! *Throws a giant cheesy-looking ball of exagerated DBZ lightning at Phoenix and Edgy* OH SHIT!(note) Try to make the Judge sound really cheesy and loud like the IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAND!!! line. ;)
Too much grafical effect and too little dialuge effort. Don't put too much weight on Rev....
heres anothe forum based joke.
*sniffs coffe* : Mmmmm, The Smell of Coffee. Like a Bittersweet Holyness... within a bottomless cup. *drinks* : And the delicious flavour! A taste beyond imagination! Like the essence of souls! Heavenly! *drinks again* : Hey, Godot! : Yeah? *drinks deeply* : I just PISSED in your coffe! : MmPH! *PFFFT* *Spits coffe* : And I have more "bittersweet holyness" where that came from, baby! : ...... can I have a refill?
Re: Phoenix Wrong: Next Gen.
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Burning Rain wrote:
This spawned today at school talking to my friend Keon.
ACE NINJA PHOENIX WRITE
*In ninja outfit* *Throws several kunai at Miles*
*Also in ninja jammies* *Throws shurikan at Phoenix*
*Kunai and shurikan are about to hit their marks*
*leaps out of nowhere* OVERRULED!!!! *Throws a giant cheesy-looking ball of exagerated DBZ lightning at Phoenix and Edgy*
OH SHIT!
(note) Try to make the Judge sound really cheesy and loud like the IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAND!!! line. ;)
ACE NINJA PHOENIX WRITE
*In ninja outfit* *Throws several kunai at Miles* *Also in ninja jammies* *Throws shurikan at Phoenix**Kunai and shurikan are about to hit their marks*
*leaps out of nowhere* OVERRULED!!!! *Throws a giant cheesy-looking ball of exagerated DBZ lightning at Phoenix and Edgy* OH SHIT!(note) Try to make the Judge sound really cheesy and loud like the IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAND!!! line. ;)
I made an idea like that once. Except it was Phoenix vs. Godot. XD
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Mikker wrote:
*sniffs coffe* : Mmmmm, The Smell of Coffee. Like a Bittersweet Holyness... within a bottomless cup. *drinks* : And the delicious flavour! A taste beyond imagination! Like the essence of souls! Heavenly! *drinks again* : Hey, Godot! : Yeah? *drinks deeply* : I just PISSED in your coffe! : MmPH! *PFFFT* *Spits coffe* : And I have more "bittersweet holyness" where that came from, baby! : ...... can I have a refill?But didn't you like refuse jokes that were forum jokes?
fuck
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DarzieP wrote:
Mikker wrote:
*sniffs coffe* : Mmmmm, The Smell of Coffee. Like a Bittersweet Holyness... within a bottomless cup. *drinks* : And the delicious flavour! A taste beyond imagination! Like the essence of souls! Heavenly! *drinks again* : Hey, Godot! : Yeah? *drinks deeply* : I just PISSED in your coffe! : MmPH! *PFFFT* *Spits coffe* : And I have more "bittersweet holyness" where that came from, baby! : ...... can I have a refill?But didn't you like refuse jokes that were forum jokes?
Well.... I consider it quite usable for people who doesn't know about Phoenix Wright. That it is based on a forum joke doesn't really matter.... Much. The desu one was only for people who had read the boards... didn't make sence otherwise. It's true that this joke makes more sence if one has played GS3, but I don't consider it less fun if you havn't.
I'm not sure
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Phoenix Wrong: UPDATE!
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I'm back and I'm updating the part as I post. The next update will prove this.
Till then, I should reply to your posts and update the script not (so I can focus more on the part afterwards.) so I have.
(It gets harder every time... Oh well.)I'll make judgements in the script (VA Rina-chan vs Android 21 3/7 and LySs) soon.
And Chinese Infantry's sound pack is hilarious!
Jintor wrote:
Basically... when the camera zooms in on Von Karma and it's echoing "RUINED!" He isn't doing anything. That and there are either
1) Too many "Ruined!" echoes or
2) All the "Ruined!" echoes go on for too long, or
3) The first couple are too loud.
Apologies for my rambling style, but i tend to plot out how i think... as i think. It gets confusing. :P
Thanks for the lines, I'll record after violin.
1) Too many "Ruined!" echoes or
2) All the "Ruined!" echoes go on for too long, or
3) The first couple are too loud.
Apologies for my rambling style, but i tend to plot out how i think... as i think. It gets confusing. :P
Thanks for the lines, I'll record after violin.
Manfred is meant to remain idle for the music and sequence to capture the viewers. Otherwise, he would be doing some random animation during this if it was up to you. Do you have any clear suggestion of what Manfred should be doing at the time? The echoes are meant to remain in that length unless it would seem sort of boring. Trust me I've tried it. The only problem I'll admit facing is 3) and I'll need to rebalance this out on the next update.
Nego wrote:
All right then. I understand that well. I'm counting on you to make it work great.
Spoiler:
I just came up with a risky idea... The script should stay the same and Godot should be edited one way or another each turn. For example, do you remember that "#1 Prosecutor” on his mug in the last part. That should change for some random humor and maybe some different poses (slightly more ridiculous than the last in each turn) wouldn't hurt. This is just a thought so feel free to slap me if it sucks.
fapman wrote:
Aw, crap. Ah well, does somebody else have a better idea for a hidden Blooper reel?
I have another risky idea. It should have Phoenix getting pissed at me, just like this classic short.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Duck_Amuck
Phoenix should react to me bothering him (like colouring his hair green).
I'll get into details about this but like Nego, feel free to slap me if the idea sucks.
LySs wrote:
Phoenix and co. sitting on a couch watching a crappy sitcom or something and Phoenix suddenly starts to burst out laughing uncontrollably, then falls off the couch and starts rolling on the floor for a good minute XD
*shrug* Meh, It was funny in my head.
Yep, you're a Phoenix/Maya supporter alright.
Sadly, that would more work than what it's worth.
There's nothing too exciting about this one, sorry. (This is coming from a guy who made the Edgeworth = Master Bates joke.
)Jyuni wrote:
Sent in my lines, sorry for the wait.
Thanks and I should be the one who's sorry; I've yet to update the bloody part!
Burning Rain wrote:
This spawned today at school talking to my friend Keon.
ACE NINJA PHOENIX WRITE
*In ninja outfit* *Throws several kunai at Miles*
*Also in ninja jammies* *Throws shurikan at Phoenix*
*Kunai and shurikan are about to hit their marks*
*leaps out of nowhere* OVERRULED!!!! *Throws a giant cheesy-looking ball of exagerated DBZ lightning at Phoenix and Edgy*
OH SHIT!
(note) Try to make the Judge sound really cheesy and loud like the IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAND!!! line. ;)
ACE NINJA PHOENIX WRITE
*In ninja outfit* *Throws several kunai at Miles* *Also in ninja jammies* *Throws shurikan at Phoenix**Kunai and shurikan are about to hit their marks*
*leaps out of nowhere* OVERRULED!!!! *Throws a giant cheesy-looking ball of exagerated DBZ lightning at Phoenix and Edgy* OH SHIT!(note) Try to make the Judge sound really cheesy and loud like the IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAND!!! line. ;)
LOL That's a good one but the ninja out is a bit much. The cheesyness and weapons are fine but the Judge should throw his gavel like an idiot. Will this work?
Mikker wrote:
Too much grafical effect and too little dialuge effort. Don't put too much weight on Rev....
heres anothe forum based joke.
*sniffs coffe* : Mmmmm, The Smell of Coffee.
Like a Bittersweet Holyness... within a bottomless cup.
*drinks* : And the delicious flavour! A taste beyond imagination! Like the essence of souls! Heavenly! *drinks again*
: Hey, Godot!
: Yeah? *drinks deeply*
: I just PISSED in your coffe!
: MmPH! *PFFFT* *Spits coffe*
: And I have more "bittersweet holyness" where that came from, baby!
: ...... can I have a refill?
heres anothe forum based joke.
*sniffs coffe* : Mmmmm, The Smell of Coffee. Like a Bittersweet Holyness... within a bottomless cup. *drinks* : And the delicious flavour! A taste beyond imagination! Like the essence of souls! Heavenly! *drinks again* : Hey, Godot! : Yeah? *drinks deeply* : I just PISSED in your coffe! : MmPH! *PFFFT* *Spits coffe* : And I have more "bittersweet holyness" where that came from, baby! : ...... can I have a refill?Thanks for taking care of me and... LOL That's hilarious! Still, I've seen something like this in a Phoenix Wrong flash with the Austin Powers quotes ("It's a bit nutty") and this (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W_FEvS2Bl5s). Still, this joke is great and I'll decide if this should be added.
DarzieP and Mikker wrote:
*insert fight*
Heres some interesting facts you two have brought up yourselves:
-The Desu joke are only those who visited Court Records on April Fools.
-Inside jokes won't work in the long run, no matter how funny.
-Any joke in this site are allowed but they have to be 1)Funny and understandable and 2)Fresh humor.
The end. *shot*
Here's one that Wizard Anon recommends:
Wizard Anon wrote:
Mr. Nick, I'm bored! I'm busy. Go write to Santa or whatever 8-year-olds do nowadays. Okay. (writes) Dear Santa, Please send me a baby brother. Signed, PearlyA few days later...
Mr. Nick, Santa wrote me back! What did he say? He said, "Send me your mother." What does that mean? 
I love but will it work in this project? You decide!
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RevFirst wrote:
I'm very sorry for the lack of updates. I was extremely busy but now...
I'm back and I'm updating the part as I post. The next update will prove this.
Till then, I should reply to your posts and update the script not (so I can focus more on the part afterwards.) so I have.
(It gets harder every time... Oh well.)
I'll make judgements in the script (VA Rina-chan vs Android 21 3/7 and LySs) soon.
I'm back and I'm updating the part as I post. The next update will prove this.
Till then, I should reply to your posts and update the script not (so I can focus more on the part afterwards.) so I have.
(It gets harder every time... Oh well.)I'll make judgements in the script (VA Rina-chan vs Android 21 3/7 and LySs) soon.
D: Do you accept bribes? I'm just kidding. I know my voice acting needs work. I need more practice.
I always practice when my sister steals my computer. It makes her leave sooner!
My art thread!
My sprite thread! Calando in progress
Phoenix Wright and co.:Ace Mythbusters! Myth 2 finished
First AA fanfic: Childhood Turnabout (finished)
And my devart site
My billboard signature! *gets pelted with tomatoes*
My sprite thread! Calando in progress
Phoenix Wright and co.:Ace Mythbusters! Myth 2 finished
First AA fanfic: Childhood Turnabout (finished)
And my devart site
My billboard signature! *gets pelted with tomatoes*
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RevFirst wrote:
Yep, you're a Phoenix/Maya supporter alright.
W-What makes you think that?? *shify eyes*RevFirst wrote:
Here's one that Wizard Anon recommends:
Mr. Nick, I'm bored!
I'm busy. Go write to Santa or whatever 8-year-olds do nowadays.
Okay. (writes) Dear Santa, Please send me a baby brother. Signed, Pearly
A few days later...
Mr. Nick, Santa wrote me back!
What did he say?
He said, "Send me your mother." What does that mean?
I love but will it work in this project? You decide!
Wizard Anon wrote:
Mr. Nick, I'm bored! I'm busy. Go write to Santa or whatever 8-year-olds do nowadays. Okay. (writes) Dear Santa, Please send me a baby brother. Signed, PearlyA few days later...
Mr. Nick, Santa wrote me back! What did he say? He said, "Send me your mother." What does that mean? I love but will it work in this project? You decide!
I loved that one! Definitely do it!
That and I'd really love to do Pearl's lines if this part is added :D
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