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You have a point there with the head, although I'm not sure if the head is too big or the arms are too small. Hm ... *confused*
It's the arms. The elbows need to go down to the belly button :) They're about 2 heads in length from the shoulder to the elbow :) I'll point all this out in my red line crit after easter though- I promise ^^ The head is fine sizewise
<edit> Slightly less than 2 heads sorry- more like a head and a half. The arms in the pic are the length of the head though so they need to be a bit longer for normal proportions. Of corse these proportions can be warped to taste
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I wish i could draw that good.
and what does that NSFW mean?
and "PETA parody: the sea kitten" link goes to an image called just hangin out.
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"NSFW" means "not safe for work" because of nudity or related things.
And thanks for pointing the mishappen link out, I fixed it.
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"NSFW" means "not safe for work" because of nudity or related things.
And thanks for pointing the mishappen link out, I fixed it.
what does not safe for work mean? how can it be not safe for work?
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"NSFW" means "not safe for work" because of nudity or related things.
And thanks for pointing the mishappen link out, I fixed it.
what does not safe for work mean? how can it be not safe for work?
If it's nudy like, the boss might look over the shoulder and go "WRITTEN WARNING!! NO LOOKING AT PRONZ IN WORK TIEM!!" or similar if a teacher saw. Essentially , it's forewarning that its naughty and certain mixed company may be offended ;)
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OK- My illegible crit cause I drew all over it for fun >.> Too late now
Side 1-
[*] Hands need to be bigger. A hand open goes from the chin to the forehead, and the palm goes about to the nose. I'm not too good at hands thoguh.
[*] Elbow on a relaxed arm goes down to the belly button (1.5 heads long)
[*] The beach ball idealy should be bigger, or a volley ball shape
[*] He needs hair all around his head on this angle, otherwise, he looks partially bald
[*] Mia still clings to his ass in all situations
[*] Diego bleeds sexy
[*] He puts milk in sexy Kittehs coffees... but we all knew that ;)
Side 2-
[*] The hight of the body can be measured by the head (from chin to the top of the head)- it's 8 heads high. the second head length is the nipple line, next is the belly button, next the groin, I like to give 2 heads for a nice thigh (women should be 1.5 >.> 2 is nice for girls too), and 2 for the shin + foot
[*] Remember balance. Imagine a string hanging from where his neck connects to his head straight down, and that's gravity. Position half the body on each side of the line and he's balanced (Remembering that if something leans out further, it gains weight)
[*] Lucky kitteh is lucky
[*] Nipple lines are FTW.
Um. That's all from me. For an unabridged reference, I learnt to draw from Jack Hamm's - drawing the head and figure. It's a REALLY good book, but it IS in 1960s styled art cause well- it was first made back then. Why is it still in print? CAUSE IT IS THE BEST REFERENCE BOOK FOR BEGINNERS EVAH
Um... My 2 cents...
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Thank you so much again for being so helpful and for taking your time. It seems that you like something about my stuff, otherwise you won't put such effort into constructively critizing me ;P
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It's no problem hon. Just be wary that the art style in it is old school, but once you get past that and focus of the techniques, then you'll find its REALLY excellent to learn from. I've looked at LOTS of tutorials on art, and that book has all the stuff they have but more explained. It deters alot of people though cause the art style is old. It's not expensive though, and once you have the ground work this book provides, it's all up hill ;) I wish you luck with it, and I'm very glad my advice is not layed to waste ^^ So many times people disregard my critiques.
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And don't worry, as long as critique is useful and constructive, I'm more than willing to listen to it. Disregarding is no option, it doesn't bring any kind of progess. I'll do my best to improve!
PS: Updated with a genderswap pic. Beware, it's a nude, and therefor not safe for work!
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And don't worry, as long as critique is useful and constructive, I'm more than willing to listen to it. Disregarding is no option, it doesn't bring any kind of progess. I'll do my best to improve!
PS: Updated with a genderswap pic. Beware, it's a nude, and therefor not safe for work!
I loled so hard
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And am I the only one thinking that Godette is strangely hot? (Not trying to praise my own work here)
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NOONE!! Except maybe Chuck Norris. He's only slightly more manlier though ;)
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Great job though, also ^ no one is more manly that Chuck Norris. No one.
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has in it's title godot but should have godette in it's title. otherwise i think it's misleading.but still: great work
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Not really- Most people know what rule 34 is (there is pronz of everything) and maybe 35, but not that one. Or atleast they'd know of that occurring, but not what rule it is. Calling him Godette doesn't clarify it enough either. I think calling him female Godot is the most clear way of labeling it in a site full of non 4chan people :) On a Meme site, sure, Rule 63 is enough ^^ That's IMHO
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Not really- Most people know what rule 34 is (there is pronz of everything) and maybe 35, but not that one. Or atleast they'd know of that occurring, but not what rule it is. Calling him Godette doesn't clarify it enough either. I think calling him female Godot is the most clear way of labeling it in a site full of non 4chan people :) On a Meme site, sure, Rule 63 is enough ^^ That's IMHO
I just edited it anyway. Just to make sure that everybody gets it.
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the art on this topic: did you made it on your pc/laptop or did you make it on paper and scan it in/on to your pc/laptop?
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the art on this topic: did you made it on your pc/laptop or did you make it on paper and scan it in/on to your pc/laptop?
Questions aren't stupid as long as they help you learning.
Since I don't own a graphic tablet and suck at drawing with my mouse, every drawing you can see here is a scan.
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bt i also suck at drawing with a mouse.
but i did see a special thing with wich you can draw on a pc just like with paper.
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I think all your work is really great
but i did see a special thing with wich you can draw on a pc just like with paper.
You t\alking about a graphics tablet, right???
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I think all your work is really great
but i did see a special thing with wich you can draw on a pc just like with paper.
You t\alking about a graphics tablet, right???
i have no idea how it's called so i think you're right. i only saw a picture on the blog of an artist
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I love all the comics you draw (I'd name my favs but there are too many!) They're so funny and you're a seriously good drawer!
Keep it up!
P.S-I looked at the Godette picture and I wasn't suprised by the nudity as you had NSFW writen by it (a phrase I now associate with nudity). I don't actually know what the term stands for though, can someone translate?
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Thank you very much for your praise, it's running down my throat like ice cream!
It seems like most people like my comics best - I should see if I have the inspiration to draw another one soon.
And as I stated earlier on this topic, "NSFW" means "not safe for work", or as Arkillian described it:
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