First Attempt: Art of FAIL.

Sat Jul 19, 2008 8:54 pm

Nazne

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If anyone can identify everyone in the picture, I'll draw them something that doesn't look like I barfed colored pencil all over it. (I can actually draw. Just...not this picture.)

A note: The kid in the middle is not Light Yagami. I don't suck at canon drawing that badly.

This is my first attempt at drawing Edgeworth, and I know his bangs are way out of hand. Klavier also seems to have a touch of the FABULOUS going on; I blame 2-3. Normally my female characters look male, not the other way around. ._.

Honest criticism would be appreciated.

-Nazne

Kireigoto o tsukitoosu koto, itsuka makoto e kawaru
Katakuna ni shinjitsuzuketai, it's just my faith, the absolute truth~
Nagareru toki no naka matataku, setsunateki kirameki o
Kono you no kioku ni kizamu tame, arukitsuzukeru BELIEVER~

Re: First Attempt: Art of FAIL.

Sat Jul 19, 2008 9:25 pm

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Let's see... hmm....

Top right right: Klavier (GAH!)
Top right left: Edgey!! ^_^ (Squee!)
Top left left: Byakuya! (Yay Arctic summer!)
Middle left left: Mustang (Hughes is better :payne:

)
Bottom left: Gary (Get the chess pieces! (Don't ask))
Bottom right: That guy from Megaman NT... I don't know his name, so I won't comment.

No idea who the other ones are :( (and i was so close, too!)

It's really good! The only things:
1. Mustang looks like a sadistic killer... (his eyes, at least)
2. Edgey's bangs are kind of... mutated... O.O
3. Klavier's hair is too yellow :S

I also think Gary's necklace is kinda long, but that's really really minor.

Credit to Evolina for the sig+avatar!

Re: First Attempt: Art of FAIL.

Sun Jul 20, 2008 12:02 am

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Ooh, I really like it! ^_^ Even though I don't know all of the characters in it. ^_^;;

You're right though, Klavier is looking a little fabulous. XD Ah well. I think it's cute. ^_^ And Edgey... squee!! Even if his bangs have taken on a life of their own. XD

I like that Roy's in there. ^_^ Even if he is looking a bit on the evillll side.

Thanks to .•°٭blinq٭°•. for the lovely sig. ♥

"Note to Self: Don't get in crouton's way when it comes to Edgeworth. She WILL bite." - PhoenixFire

Re: First Attempt: Art of FAIL.

Sun Jul 20, 2008 1:19 am

Nazne

Objection. Witness is ugly.

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@Bad Player: I was too lazy to check up on how to draw Gary, so I sorta made do. ^^;; And I'll remember that Klavi's platinum-blond in future.
@crouton: Thanks. XD This is actually a comprendium of all the people I've fallen in love with so far, so it's kinda random.

I need to practice my Edgeworth and Klavier then. I didn't mean for Roy to turn out evil-looking either, but it's hard to draw anything properly detailed at that angle, and then my coloring wasn't too great on his face, so...yah.

-Nazne

Kireigoto o tsukitoosu koto, itsuka makoto e kawaru
Katakuna ni shinjitsuzuketai, it's just my faith, the absolute truth~
Nagareru toki no naka matataku, setsunateki kirameki o
Kono you no kioku ni kizamu tame, arukitsuzukeru BELIEVER~

Re: First Attempt: Art of FAIL.

Sun Jul 20, 2008 1:27 am

Limey

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I think you're a great artist! I can never draw with traditional media without messing up beyond belief. You captured the poses greatly, even Klavier's fabulousness!

Also...

Nazne wrote:

"This is actually a comprendium of all the people I've fallen in love with so far, so it's kinda random."

You should be glad you aren't me. You'd need at least 22 pages for that.

LOL GAIZ

Re: First Attempt: Art of FAIL.

Sun Jul 20, 2008 1:29 am

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That is very pretty. I hope to see more soon. :)

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Re: First Attempt: Art of FAIL.

Sun Jul 20, 2008 1:33 am

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O.O This is awesome. I recognize all but three of these guys.

>.> You asked for crit, so I hope you don't mind. Some of the clothes are missing a few folds, especially Gary's. Blue Hair's right shoulder is higher than it should be. Edgey's cravat is a little narrow at the top. Perspective not quite right on Roy's leg. You might want to check the anatomy with White/Black Hair. Some of their eyes aren't symmetrical. Cushions fold a certain way. Other than that, really good wow the way you draw hoodies is awesome. Plz don't call yourself fail.

Klavier has a way of turning out fabulous. It's part of his charm. xD

Re: First Attempt: Art of FAIL.

Sun Jul 20, 2008 1:45 am

Nazne

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@Limey: o_o;;; I'd have to live a long time to fill up that many pages...my infatuations usually take years to get over. /o/
@Mia: Sankyuu. :D

@Violet: I dun mind at all, and really appreciate the crit. :o I do need to practice drawing folds in clothing; it's a problem I've had for years, not being able to make clothes look 3-D enough by visualizing how the folds work. Same goes for cushions...and everything else, probably. Anatomically, white/black hair dude does look screwed up...I'll need to check my angles in future. I'll keep shoulder positioning in mind also. As for the eyes, I think that could be an issue with my angle of drawing; I look at the paper from a bit too far to the right, and sometimes my perspective translates to skewed symmetry. I'll try to pay more attention to the details. ^^;

Klavier on Guitar: I should've used a reference for the guitar here, but...

-Nazne

Kireigoto o tsukitoosu koto, itsuka makoto e kawaru
Katakuna ni shinjitsuzuketai, it's just my faith, the absolute truth~
Nagareru toki no naka matataku, setsunateki kirameki o
Kono you no kioku ni kizamu tame, arukitsuzukeru BELIEVER~

Re: First Attempt: Art of FAIL.

Sun Jul 20, 2008 4:47 am

Violet

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Thanks, I'm always nervous about giving crit... :oops:

Yeah, clothing folds are hard! especially without reference. Have you tried modelling for you pictures yourself? Like, with a large mirror? I find that's extremely helpful with anatomy. Also, if you look at a picture backwards (i.e. turning the paper backwards and looking at it against the light) it's a lot easier to notice mistakes. For eyes, guidelines also help when you're drawing the head. Eheh, I'll stop pretending to be an expert now.

Klavi on Guitar: Rotate his right foot to the front a bit? It's at a twisted angle. Try making the pose yourself in front of a mirror and see if it's natural. Also, work on hands, they're tricky. Otherwise, great! You improvised that guitar? Wow. i love the G symbol at the end.

Re: First Attempt: Art of FAIL.

Sun Jul 20, 2008 12:00 pm

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(Yeah, I'm not an artist, so I can't make all those comments on anatomy and stuff that everyone else can ^^' )

But I think that Klavier pic is really good! :D The only thing is I think his hair...pointy...ponytail...thing (what do you call that?!) is a bit off.

And I agree with Violet that the G symbol at the end is amazing :edgy:

I hate Klavier with a passion, but the G symbol is still amazing.

Credit to Evolina for the sig+avatar!