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Romeo wrote:
I think they are good, but then again i don't think they are your own...If you just copied these then I really don't think that anyone can criticise them, however if you made them up then go ahead! Sorry if you did make them up but it just doesn't seem like you did...
Hang on- that's not a fair thing to say unless you're sure that it's a copy. Just cause it's on refill doesn't mean they copied :( I'm sorry to call you out, but without an original image to prove it, then it's a little baseless, right? Just like in Ace Attorney?
One thing I WILL say is that if it does go into the crit thread that I have a minimum standard of art posted there. You'll need to rotate your art to the correct way up, and to make the art *presentable*. What I mean by this is that your art is dominated by the shadowing of the paper, so it's very difficult to see the image. To me, it shows a lack of pride in your work, and it'll be the first think I'll crit you on cause it's SO much more important than content.
If you have a scanner, then scan them instead, and try to get rid of the refill lines. IF you don't, iron the picture flat, and photograph it in natural sunlight (not direct sunlight) and try to keep your camera as still as possible. Refill is never good to draw on cause the lines are in colour, and are more noticeable than the actual image so try to remove them. IF you do all of this, I'll happily critique you. If you are copying off someone else's lineart, then please provide your reference so I can base my critique on only the lineart quality, and not the image itself. I don't mind if you copy- it's a good way of learning. Just admit it when you post and all it's all good.
Side note- this Fanart thread is for Phoenix Wright art- not other fandoms. I crit all art in the crit thread though.