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I think we're at the 1-5 point in time...
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EDIT: I fixed that typo that was pointed out earlier. Don't ever be afraid to let me know about them, guys! I don't want anything that might distract from the story. It's all I got.
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Also poor Chris, it'll be another couple of years before he can appreciate those tapes, and by then his sister will probably be hiding them better.
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Just wait until you meet adult Chris in Rick Valentine. =^.^=
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The timeline is a tad confusing, since Maya's present, and she doesn't show between 1-4 and 2-2, but screw the timeline, I have
Oh, kudos on your comic as well! Been reading for a while but never actually said anything, so I a word of encouragement is due. Great work!
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And, ooh, cool, so the Rick Valentine comic is around the same time as GS4, huh? I'm gonna have to hold off on reading it until I get to play the game, then :P Maybe GS4 will be out by the time you've got some Rick Valentine comics ready. From the little preview, it should be another awesome comic like this one.
Yay for updates! If reader interest is what you need to keep going, you've got plenty of it here <3
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... Would make sence...)
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Love it, love it, love it!
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Kekeke, make Edgey feel the wrath of a ten-year old with a perverted mind. XD
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*Takes out Popcorn* This is hilariaus! I'm really looking forward to the next
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Also, three cheers for spellcheck who made this post at least readable.
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All the Sprites are Recolors or Recolors with Limbs Swapped out, with no real Editing At all.
The Plot isn't very Original, The Partner is a Spirit Medium, Blahblahblah Murder Cases Blahblahblah, and the Text is often Jumbled and Messed up, Its filled with Plotholes and Some of the Actions don't seem very structured at all, Why Does Gloria White have a Breakdown about being accused of murder After just one Question which didn't even accuse her, And nobody's Supposed to be declared Guilty or not Guilty unless Its Proven beyond Reasonable Doubt, but the Main character just seems to be able to tell the Judge "My Client is Guilty" and he Goes "Alright! I find the Defendant Guilty!"
The only thing this has Going is that it has a Plot and isn't just trying to be Funny but is actually ATTEMPTING to be good.
You should Probably refine Your "Custom" Sprites to a little more then a Blond Haired Mia or En Garde's Head on a Random Body with Pearls Necklace.
And when it comes to plot, try and make sure things make sense, Think how things work in the games, Before you can prove Anybody Guilty you need EVIDENCE.
But Grant doesn't seem to get any Trouble from anybody at all, She's Practically a Mary sue.
This is all I really have to say.
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I'm just awesomely random like that
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After reading this, I think you know exactly what you're doing, and I'm not going to defend you anymore. You, sir, are a jerk.
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...And I apologize to the readers of this thread as well. I didn't mean to further blemish this page with my ugly rant. I hope you'll forgive me. And I did read some of the comic and think it's quite amusing. :P
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Jeshi, you seem to have formed your opinions of my work after having only read the first story. As with most pilots the story is a little stale, and the court case could have been much better. However, I like to think my work has gotten better through the chapters and I hope you're willing to read a bit more to form a full opinion.
As far as my art. I've never tried to project myself as a true artist. I, to my misfortune, cannot really draw, and am truly doing my best to provide a fun story for PW fans to read while they wait for that next game.
I'm terribly sorry that my efforts have not met your standards and I will certainly take your words into consideration.
And no fear, Jeshi. I didn't take your post to be the least bit offensive. Everyone has the right to express their opinions and some things just can't be said as politely as others.
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My problem is coming up with a story. If I could think up a story I would try my hand at another comic. (I did make a Christmas comic/sig.)
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My problem is coming up with a story. If I could think up a story I would try my hand at another comic. (I did make a Christmas comic/sig.)
You should try for it! Maybe try taking a PW moment and change it around to a blooper? I'm sure people would LOVE that ^__^
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LOL! That was... LOL! The look on Edgy's face! XD LOL!
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Do you guys think I should throw a rating or disclaimer up on that comic?
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Oh maaaaaaaaan. Tea! Tea!! For Christsake TEA!!! Chris is killing me. XD
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And he's stopping mid sentence. He was going to say 'I think you said that wrong.' I was a little worried that I had him cut off too soon and no one would know where I was going with it. I'll get on fixing those when I get a chance.
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Do you guys think I should throw a rating or disclaimer up on that comic?
It would probably be a good idea.
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Ah, no I didn't mean the stopping in mid-sentence. I meant that the "your" was supposed to be "you" but I wasn't too sure since it was half a sentence.
The way I usually denote stopping mid-sentence is to use a hyphen. For example, if I were to- er, nevermind.
See? Eh? Pretty great too if you want to stop in the middle of a word. Just cut off at the syllab- ack, no, scratch that.
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ALL HAIL SEN!
Can I start a fan club?
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Oh, a typo! My bad. My head is still very much fogged. I mostly just didn't want to make you guys wait too long for another page.
And he isn't really stopping so much as trailing off as he realizes that's probably exactly how Chris meant it.
EDIT: Wait, did you mean a Marilyn Grant fan club? Or a 'the safe word is tea' fan club?
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