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The Alternative Turnabout. (Update: Page 11: Infamous)Topic%20Title
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Will Shorthand- Scrivener Extrodinaire

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My sprite comic:

The Alternative Turnabout.
Page 1: Wake up.
Page 2: Upside Down.
Page 3: Baby Girl.
Page 4: Big Gums.
Page 5: Lost and found.
Page 6: Curiouser.
Page 7: The Reason.
Page 8: Phoenix Wright.
Page 9: Little Gums.
Page 10: Even badgers fall.
Page 11: Infamous

OC Comics:

Funnies: Ryder and Will's little comic crusades in the world of PW.
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Dear Journal
Ryder belongs to Sammie.

Random funnies:

Daliha's Hair.

Enjoy.
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Hello, Adrian.

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Thrilling! :3 *Makes popcorn*
Is this one of those "Mia never died and Phoenix is'nt a hobo"-things? xD
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Haha, I still love Daft Punk <3

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Looks interesting so far. Duhn duhn duhhhhhhhhhhn.

You might want to download the PW font for this.
You can find it here: http://www.dafont.com/pw-extended.font
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Hello, Adrian.

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Trabztress wrote:
Looks interesting so far. Duhn duhn duhhhhhhhhhhn.

You might want to download the PW font for this.
You can find it here: http://www.dafont.com/pw-extended.font

So that's the font! O.o
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Oh wow thanks! ^^
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i think i sh** my pants

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well...im not usually interested in these kinda comics....but this one has a good premise :D ill look out for this one!
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*scribble scribble*

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I think...Phoenix has entered...


THE TWILIGHT ZONE. =000000000!

(Beware the fangirls! :butzthumbs: )
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lol nice :3
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Page two is up,

Warning minor spoilers for GS3
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Spoiler: gs3 nitpicky spoiler
uhh...wasent the doug swallow her 2nd case?

=_=' sorry im nitpicky today
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oops good point :payne:

edit: ok fixed, thanks Ike
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:P tnx i wanted to point that out i was VERRRRY nitpicky yesterday :sadshoe:
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Wow, I am confused........ :apollo-shock:

I trust that everything will be explained in later comics, right? :godot:
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You’re so small in such a big world...

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Holy crap! I can't wait to read more.
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Page three is up,

That's right ladies and Gentlemen, prepare to be astounded and thrilled by the one the only Trucy!
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Poor Phoenix....
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You’re so small in such a big world...

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Okay, now I'm really confused, which intrigues me. Must. Read. More.
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;_;....TRUCY....*sniffs*...read my title if you dont know what i mean.....
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Hmmm.... Interesting, though a few things...

- You really don't need to add a 'to be continued' panel every single page.
- The narrative perspective is totally diffirent from PW. But you may know that already.
(I'm talking about how here the thoughts aren't thoughts, but narration in the past tense.)
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Two more games coming up soon

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Excellent so far. You've got me waiting for the next one already =)
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The Fragrance of Dark Coffee...

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Good comic. I can't wait to read more!
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OBJECTION!

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:sob:

Poor, poor :minuki: ...
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Wow... If I were Phoenix, I would be really... frustrated? I think that's the word. Claustrophobic, in a way. But anyways, that was great, keep them coming, Skele!

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Oooh! I just noticed a typo on page 3! Panel 14: "Why are you just standing there starring..." It should be be staring. Starring would be like if someone was the star of something... :yuusaku:

Sorry if I sound rude :sadshoe:
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Hehe Go Armando, I was expecting more of a time machine thing but wow Nick is awesome....he doesn't even have his attorneys badge to proove he's an attorney.
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haha! no.

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wow. Really great! I can't wait for more! :yogi:
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No DSis in the courtroom please.

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Haha dawg, this is awesome XD
Poor Feenie, but then again, I'm really glad to see Mia and Diego ahah
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Ooh, a real drumroll. Nice.

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wow! The plot really keeps people on edge and just begging for the next sprite comic!
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Hey, are you going to finish/continue this? You put up those 3 pages really quickly, but now you haven't even been in the topic since page 3 was posted up.
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First off thanks everyone for reading my sprite comic, I half expected this to be branded as a typical fan based sprite comic and stuck in the Sci Fi section :yogi: maybe I havn't gotten far enough with the story yet.

Anyway thanks for the great response!

Now for replys.

Greeny wrote:
Hmmm.... Interesting, though a few things...

- You really don't need to add a 'to be continued' panel every single page.
- The narrative perspective is totally diffirent from PW. But you may know that already.
(I'm talking about how here the thoughts aren't thoughts, but narration in the past tense.)


After reading your comic I took a good look at the narative and realized what a dumb mistake that was >.> So ( be it canonical or otherwise...) all Phoenix POV Narrative will be in Green :will:

Oh and the "to be continued" is like a marker, it makes the reader interested. Also its great for cliff hangers XD

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Oooh! I just noticed a typo on page 3! Panel 14: "Why are you just standing there starring..." It should be be staring. Starring would be like if someone was the star of something... :yuusaku:

Sorry if I sound rude :sadshoe:


You don't sound rude and :ema-shock: thanks I'll fix that ^^

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Hehe Go Armando, I was expecting more of a time machine thing but wow Nick is awesome....he doesn't even have his attorneys badge to proove he's an attorney.


Hehe Time Machine are awsome :keiko: But wrong science fiction catagory... :keiko-sad:

Hahex wrote:
wow! The plot really keeps people on edge and just begging for the next sprite comic!
Bad Player wrote:
Hey, are you going to finish/continue this? You put up those 3 pages really quickly, but now you haven't even been in the topic since page 3 was posted up.


I was stuck, honestly, then christmas holidays hit like a bombshell and I didn't have any time to work on this... :sadshoe:

HOWEVER! With the help of a guiding angel :yuusaku: Sammy I was able to push my story forward.

So without further ado I present the next two pages for my sprite comic.
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Tehe, lil ol meee.
Anyway, I love page 5, but when I clicked page 4 it said
"403- Forbidden"
T.T
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I was fixing page 4, >.> lol try again.
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No DSis in the courtroom please.

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XD
I'm ninja fast.
GUMMY!
NOO!
aahah.

"I don't do that anymore, I don't care how much money you got!"
Or soemthing of the sort
That was nice.
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DONT YOU DARE IMPLY THAT MY TRUCY DARLING IS A *bleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
eeeeeeep*......you meanie....


EDIT:(dont worry i'm not THAT fanboyish)
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Nice so far.

Though one tip: Don't wait a while, then update a lot as opposed to updating one
scene at regular intervals; because that helps people to stay interested.
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Mr. Feeeeeey? What?! *confused*

Can't wait for the next part!

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Nobody messes with Big Gums :will:

I love that adaptation of Gumshoe it's like a fusion of Tigre and Gumshoe he has authority now....though I don't much like Wellington's attitude to him, how does he have control over Gumshoe.
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I'm glad we're getting out of the "ZOMG WTF IS GOING ON?!?" phase and into the actual plot.
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Affection!

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That was...erm pretty alternative yes.
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What do you see behind the mask?

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Quite intriguing. I'm eager to see how it continues!
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I am SO confused! Mr. Fey?!?!?

Can't wait for page 6! :godot:
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