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Shono Mercy: Ace AttorneyTopic%20Title
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Hello and welcome to my brand new sprite comic, Shono Mercy: Ace attorney! It takes place about three years after Apollo justice/ GS4.

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WARNING!: All comics will contain minor spoilers from GS4. If there are any major spoilers, i'll note it next to the comic.

CREDIT!:

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Shono Mercy: Ace Attorney is property of Big Corporate Things Inc.

Thanks for Lind L. Tailor for his 'how to make a sprite comic', i used quite a lot of resources from that.
Thanks to Defencelawyer for letting me edit and use his front and aide apollo sprites.
Thanks to capcom for making such a wonderf- *Shot in head by anti-generic police*
Thanks to Dekuran for the letter in case 1.

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Shono's been an attorney for almost a year - but this is the biggest case he's handled yet. Can he really prove the innocence of a silent defendant when he has no idea what actually happened?

WARNING: Contains 4 - 1 spoilers.

Prolouge
1. Introduction

Day 1: Trial (part 1)
1. Too Early
2. Wait.....What!
3. Doomed
4. Not a good situation
5. The gallery wil refrain!
6. More Deja Vu?
7. So, any evidence?
8. Shirley Lockolm
9. Before the testimony...
10. Facts of the case (part 1)
11. Facts of the case (part 2)
12. Terrible Draught
13. Testimony Time!
14. Evidence and examination
15. I couldn't think of an 'objection' pun...
16. His name isn't Mr. Bailiff
17. Time for a recess

Day 1: First Recess

18. To the lobby-mobile!
19. The detective is here
20. Evidence? EVIDENCE!

Day 1: Trial (part 2)

21. To the court-mobile!
22. Spot the name pun
23. An efficient testimony
24. A contradiction already?
25. Explaining
26. I accuse you!
27. Pentuple damnit
28. Yikes

Day 1: Second Recess

29. Aargh, the suspense is making me mildly uncomfortable
30. Five rows? This is madness!
31. Look on the back
32. Thinking outside the cliche

Day 1: Trial (Part 3)

33. Waste of time
34. Fickle crowd
35. Learn some compassion, damnit!

Case 1 Extras

1. M-m-meekins?!


Erm...the first few updates will have small writing (not too small i hope) don't worry, the size gets better as it goes along. As for now, you'll just have to squint a bit. :payne: (sorry...)

Whaddya think? PLEASE COMMENT! :accordion-head:

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good start, I miss Payne and can hardly read the text but... :will:
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Thanks.
Er.....Sorry about that last PM.....*Looks sideways shiftily* (If you aren't defencelawyer, this line won't make any sense, so just ignore it.)

Writing size will improve.
And of course....the new prosecutor is...

Spoiler: The new prosecutor
PAYNE'S DAUGHTER! Ariel Payne.

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Freakyalex wrote:
Thanks.
Er.....Sorry about that last PM.....*Looks sideways shiftily* (If you aren't defencelawyer, this line won't make any sense, so just ignore it.)

Writing size will improve.
And of course....the new prosecutor is...

Spoiler: The new prosecutor
PAYNE'S DAUGHTER! Ariel Payne.

It's ok, it's just my inbox can only hold 50 messages, not 9002, apart from that do you think Astro will become a Procecutor? :will:
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Font.Too.Small.

Might I suggest redoing it with Yuma's Font?

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DefenceLawer wrote:
Freakyalex wrote:
Thanks.
Er.....Sorry about that last PM.....*Looks sideways shiftily* (If you aren't defencelawyer, this line won't make any sense, so just ignore it.)

Writing size will improve.
And of course....the new prosecutor is...

Spoiler: The new prosecutor
PAYNE'S DAUGHTER! Ariel Payne.

It's ok, it's just my inbox can only hold 50 messages, not 9002, apart from that do you think Astro will become a Procecutor? :will:


Astro? Do you mean Astron?
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Oyashiro-Tan wrote:
Font.Too.Small.

Might I suggest redoing it with Yuma's Font?

wow... That was weired
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@ Oyashiro-Tan: Actually, I can't redo them. I've made the font in 'the gallery will refrain' bigger, is it enough or not?
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Font and textbox issues aside, the comic and story actually looks quite promising even for my high standards!

Infact... I'm willing to offer you a contract with Big Corporate Things, Inc.!

Though... Mr. Mercy should brush his hair.
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Greeny wrote:
Font and textbox issues aside, the comic and story actually looks quite promising even for my high standards!

Infact... I'm willing to offer you a contract with Big Corporate Things, Inc.!

Though... Mr. Mercy should brush his hair.


r-really!

I'd love to join BCT. Inc!

.....And as for his hair, It's only like that because He's actually the devil Likes to uses too much hair gell, a trait picked up from his mentor, Apollo (*COUGHCOUGHPOINTYUNICORNCOUGHCOUGH*)

:odoroki:

Also, do you think the increased font size is big enough? (increased font size starts in 'The gallery will refrain' by the way.
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It seems okay. But I think your text boxes are too small.
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Shono's nickname is now Laharl.

Image:You Disgaea addict. e_o;

Though I do wonder how Polly got his scar...If it was in the tiny font chapters...Egh.Sorry. ;_; /bad eyesight

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I agree the text is too small to read, and I haven't gone through the entire thing yet. I like the pun you used a lot though; Shono Mercy. x'3
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@ Greeny: Hm....I got the text boxes from Lind, on his sprite comic resources. hmmm.
@Oyashiro-Tan: I was a little confused when i read this, but then I remembered what disagea was. hmm....Never noticed that before.....but he does look similar.
@ Nii: It gets bigger a few comics in. SHOW NO MERCY! (WOOP!)

Also,

*Don't worry, no actual spoilers*

Spoiler: Polly's Scar
I didn't say anything about it in the first few comics, it hasn't been mentioned yet. As for it's relation to the plot? Hm.....It will be revealed at a later date, trust me.

He isn't going to do a kristoph, though. yet.

Mwahahahahhaaa!!.....Only joking.

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Freakyalex wrote:
Greeny wrote:
Font and textbox issues aside, the comic and story actually looks quite promising even for my high standards!

Infact... I'm willing to offer you a contract with Big Corporate Things, Inc.!

Though... Mr. Mercy should brush his hair.


r-really!

I'd love to join BCT. Inc!

.....And as for his hair, It's only like that because He's actually the devil Likes to uses too much hair gell, a trait picked up from his mentor, Apollo (*COUGHCOUGHPOINTYUNICORNCOUGHCOUGH*)

:odoroki:

Also, do you think the increased font size is big enough? (increased font size starts in 'The gallery will refrain' by the way.

wait... you're now part of GavCO and BCT Inc? how will that work out? who would you rather work for? Gavco with HypoGant or BCT Inc where the owners name rhymes with Meany? and a bit of advise... When your in a war, decide what side your on, because you can't stand in no mans land forever. :gant: All Glory for the HypoGant
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I think GavCo is probably out of business now Lind's gone >_>

Anyhow, I'mma' linking this comic so far. The story and grammar are pretty good so far, and the graphics are fine.
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RandomJibberish wrote:
I think GavCo is probably out of business now Lind's gone >_>


Yeah, Gavco probably has no future with Lind out of the picture.... :sadshoe:

Erm....this may seem a stupid question, but.....what do I do now i've joined a company?

:yuusaku: *Is Noob*
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You haven't oficially joined BCT Inc. yet...

Whenever you're ready, I can send you a contract with terms & conditions.
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Yup, i'm ready. Send away!

......

.... :mike-salute: Sir!
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UPDATE!!!!!!

no. 6 is up!!!!! up I say! UP! :keiko:

Warning, it contains 4-1 spoilers!

....I might make an Objection-style UPDATE to put on updates. er.....maybe later.
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Brilliant page.
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Cuteness overload~

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I really like this so far :D 'Shono Mercy' has got to be one of the best names ever.

I really liked the last page, too. How incredibly in-character for dear Udgey. :udgy:
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:hair-flip: :delilah-hair:

hm.....never noticed that similarity before...

Sorry, got bored.
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Well, just a note, not that I mind the advertisement, but you don't need to add that to your sig, per se...
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Greeny wrote:
Well, just a note, not that I mind the advertisement, but you don't need to add that to your sig, per se...


Nah, I like having it in my Sig.


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Sorry, There isn't actually an update.....I just wanted to test out my 'update' banner.

....yeah, it sucks. :larry:
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I suggest you add a white border to it to get rid of the white speckles.
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sorry, still no update! ....is this one better? :eh?:

Also, looky here!

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haha!
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'so, any evidence?' is now up. Not 100% happy with this one, but....

HELP! how do i edit my topic name? I want to add, NEW UPDATE! or something onto it, but don't know how!!!
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Edit the first post, you can change the title too.
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Personally, I would recommend against it. I never add update warnings to the title, because I assume - and reasonably so - that when someone goes to a sprite comic topic, they're there to read anyways.
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RandomJibberish wrote:
Edit the first post, you can change the title too.


Thanks!

Greeny wrote:
Personally, I would recommend against it. I never add update warnings to the title, because I assume - and reasonably so - that when someone goes to a sprite comic topic, they're there to read anyways.


hm....it's a dilema.....
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Anyhow, the new comic is hilarious. Looking forward to more!
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RandomJibberish wrote:
Anyhow, the new comic is hilarious. Looking forward to more!

same here! I loved the quote'you could at least look at me) PS sorry I couldn't do apollo looking at you) :will:
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Nah, is fine.

Spoiler: Next comic
In the next comic, we'll be meeting my very own 'chief of detectives' - Shirley Lockolm. First person to guess the name pun gets a free future prediction!


:will:
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Freakyalex wrote:
Spoiler: Next comic
In the next comic, we'll be meeting my very own 'chief of detectives' - Shirley Lockolm. First person to guess the name pun gets a free future prediction!


Spoiler:
Sherlock Holmes, maybe?


Anyway, love the latest page~ Apollo's certainly changed a bit. XD
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HowObjectionable wrote:
Freakyalex wrote:
Spoiler: Next comic
In the next comic, we'll be meeting my very own 'chief of detectives' - Shirley Lockolm. First person to guess the name pun gets a free future prediction!


Spoiler:
Sherlock Holmes, maybe?


Anyway, love the latest panel~ Apollo's certainly changed a bit. XD


W-w-WHAT! HOW DID YOU KNOW! :zap:

Well, here's you FREE FORTUNE PREDICTION!

Spoiler: The prediction
Hmm.....I can see you.....you appear to be.....giving a large sack of money...to a man wearing a green suit, red shirt, cravatte, and lots of gell. Who could that be, i wonder?

Heehee :uramidn:

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Hmm...that is some amazing prediction skill you have there! Pity we have no idea who you're talking about~

About the comic...I meant to mention how much I like our dear Mr Mercy's hair. How long does that take every morning?
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usually, it takes so long he's late. FOR EVERYTHING.

So, as an experiment, he decided to start the process at 3.00pm the previous day. He managed to get to the courthouse at 5.00am ish, so......

*counting on fingers - and on a calculator! (BWAHAHAHA!)*

14. no hang on.
15. Yeah, 15 hours.

.......

That's why he thinks with his eyes closed. He's slowly falling back to sleep.
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usually, it takes so long he's late. FOR EVERYTHING.

So, as an experiment, he decided to start the process at 3.00pm the previous day. He managed to get to the courthouse at 5.00am ish, so......

*counting on fingers*

14. no hang on.
15. Yeah, 15 hours.

.......

That's why he thinks with his eyes closed. He's slowly falling back to sleep.

I didn't know you had 15 fingers? are you counting your toes or Shono's fingers as well? :will:
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DefenceLawer wrote:
Freakyalex wrote:
usually, it takes so long he's late. FOR EVERYTHING.

So, as an experiment, he decided to start the process at 3.00pm the previous day. He managed to get to the courthouse at 5.00am ish, so......

*counting on fingers*

14. no hang on.
15. Yeah, 15 hours.

.......

That's why he thinks with his eyes closed. He's slowly falling back to sleep.

I didn't know you had 15 fingers? are you counting your toes or Shono's fingers as well? :will:


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erm...........
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....damn you.

* Edits previous post*

What are you talking about? I see no room for doubt!
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