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James Talbot Ace Attorney!Topic%20Title
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Edgeworth the red noesed prosecutor

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okay this is my first sprite comic, set 5 years befor JFA, this is the prolog, this introduses a number of new charicters, one mentionable being prosecuter Abbie Hirst, who becomes James' rival.
Re: James Talbot Ace Attorney!Topic%20Title
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Where are the message boxes? And name tags? This sprite comic is severely unorganized. Please have a look at the currently locked thread "How to make your own sprite comic" by Lind_L_Taylor (I think his/her/it's name is that...).

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ack forgot them! dont worry il make sure its fixed next time and i'l probably end up redoing this, and thanks i'l look at that
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And there is heaps of spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. For example: memory's should be memories. Please fix these when you re do the comic. Also, what is the point of this? It seems Phoenix was poisoned but...why?

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well, it will reveal why he was poisened at the end of this case
and thanks for the help ^^

anyway, i have done some profiles of 2 main charicters
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here was an early concept, dont think il be turning that hair blonde again.
btw another misc fact, the teddy she csrrys is her good look charm called Tyler.Named after the real Abbie's boyfreind.

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this is James Talbot, Ace Attorney. he is a rookie called into his first case when PW is poisend (don't worry, he's still alive, dont ask me how.)
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