I made a new sprite comic and the text is a little blurry but you can still read it. It's called Phoenix Wright™: Wasted Attorney. Some comics contain spoilers here's the first one:







Enjoy!

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1) jpg format
2) bad joke
3) hastly made grafics
4) Red-on-black looking silly

I don't like it

Some tips:

1) Always use png or gif (no gif if you use paint!) to make comics. JPG ruins the image to the point of inusability.

2) Read the joke a few times through and see if it makes sence. If it doesn't, don't post it! Also, make a storyboard first. Especially if using paint. Oh, and remember that continuity is a must.

3) Always look at it and see if it can be made better. Really, there's no reason not to do it if possible. Here, you just had a black box floating for text, and the title looked very unprofessional. Work on it. Does it look nice? No?! Then change it!

4) I didn't like the choise of colors here. Try sticking close to the original. You should use the actual textboxes, that'll make it look alot better, and white instead of... dark red. Oh, and arials your font.

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Last edited by Mikker on Mon Aug 13, 2007 6:50 pm, edited 1 time in total.

neither do I it isn't funny at all

Well guess what...

I had to use MS Paint 'cause I don't have Photoshop!

So, Sorry.

Does anyone know a good sprite making program???

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Lack of photoshop isn't an excuse for lack of quality. Know your tools. Photoshop only really limits you here with the transparacy. You should be able to make everything else at the same quality.

Paint is the best sprite making program there is, dude

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Try the Gimp or Paint.NET if you need a decent free image editing program...

And personally, I didn't really like the comic.

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Naw, sorry. Didn't like it either, looks kinda nasty and the joke wasn't really funny. . .Maybe if it was drawn and the everything but the punch line was changed it would be funny.


-Rufus

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