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I've got the lyrics here.
I was just wondering what people thought of them.
It's a very dark song aout War.
No tune, yet. My friend's working on that.writing
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Anyway I kind of like the lyrics, they really are descriptive of what some people believe war to be. (I have my own veiws of war and they are slightly different.
I'm not really sure what kind of critisism you're looking for... so I won't say much more. However, keep up the writing, Not everybody can write well!
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Most of the song is sung, but the parts in stars are sung.
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Most of the song is sung, but the parts in stars are sung.
That just confused me more.
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Either way, nice job.
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Most of the song is sung, but the parts in stars are sung.
That just confused me more.
I think Topaz meant that the bits in the stars are spoken.
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Most of the song is sung, but the parts in stars are sung.
That just confused me more.
I think Topaz meant that the bits in the stars are spoken.
Aaahhh! Sorry if I confused you. My brain wasn't working properly that day.
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If this song had a tune, I'd be more inclined to offer an opinion.
As for being dark and depressing. So far, so good.
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This will possibly get very hysterical. Please answer him TC.
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