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http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/jeu.php?id_proces=36965

I started making this a few days a go, and was wondering what you guys think about it.

I have no plans on making the beginning of the case, because I thought that this was a good enough beginning. It keeps some of it still a mystery, and that is kind of how I would like to keep it.
I do plan to however add more on to it
Spoiler: My Game's Spoilers
I want to make the rest of it Desiree's trial.


Constructive criticism is appreciated.
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Hey ApollozJustice, I don't have time to play your fan game right now, but I'll play it eventually. Also, I think you should post this in the Ace Attorney Online forums. Here's the link: http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/forum/v ... m.php?f=15
You'll get a wider and more active audience to play it.
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I've started playing through it, it's really good, but I have a some points:
-The background remains black instead of being a proper background
-I believe there should be a space between von Karma (instead of vonKarma, it should be written von Karma)
-Ace Attorney not ace attorney
-"Good, I didn't want to have to shout in here"
-After you present the Autopsy Report for the second time, there is no sound when Phoenix speaks
-The profiles are all empty - there's no text for them
-"You then stuffed the body..."
-"THAT'S IT!"
-Not Guilty animation doesn't play correctly
-"I knew that picking you..."
-"That would just throw suspicion.."
-"Your're right Nick!"
-Detention Center not detention center

The bits in bold are the parts you need to add in.

I do like what happens when you present an incorrect piece of evidence. It really suits the style of the games!
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Rarar is right, "von Karma" is spelled this way.
I'm not very experient with that, but checking the scripts from the original games when you refer to something originally on them could be useful and save time if you want to be accurate with details; like what's uppercased and what's not, the format of the typewriter info, and all that standard-default stuff. If you're not doing this already, that is.
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I noticed some of those, not the typos, but haven't had the time to fix them yet.
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