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Re: PW: Remnants of the Past - THE Next PW game, now recruiting!Topic%20Title
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I appreciate the comments. I just looked at it again, and it does seem a bit too good to be true:D

What I mean to put was it'll be like you're playing the next PW game, but I didn't have space to put all that :godot: I'm going to think of something different, and I'll put it up.

Thanks everyone!


Also, the first 3 cases all have screenshots on the GyakutenWiki site, check it out!

And, I'm looking for someone who can edit a single picture well. Please help if possible!
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papermario13689 wrote:
And, I'm looking for someone who can edit a single picture well. Please help if possible!


That would depend on what you mean, there. :maya:
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Do you remember the picture of the burning car in Reunion, and Turnabout? (PW2)

I need Mimi edited out of the picture, and a tiny sized Ema Skye silhouette behind the car.

Please help, only if possible. Thanks!
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Well, I certainly like the idea. If the cases don't play too much like old ones (by that I mean they play like fresh cases but with nostalgia here and there) then I think it's something to really go for.

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Well put! I'll be sure to work on that.
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Re: PW: Remnants of the Past - Epic Fangame! (Screenshots ready)Topic%20Title
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This sounds epic and awesome. I eagerly await the day when I can play it. :D

I wish I could help, but I'm no good at spriting, and I have no experience with PWLib.
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No problem:D PWLib and spriting are difficult for anybody :godot:

Anyways, thanks for the kind words, I'll be working hard to make sure the game is unbelievably great!
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This looks awesome :O

I can't wait for this.
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Thanks:D

I've actually started the first case, I'm thinking of beta testing and releasing a demo. Hope everyone will like it!
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Man, this seems like a huge bottle of awsomesauce.

I'll be awaiting the finished product. :maya:
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Thanks for the support:)

You can actually look forward to a demo as well, it'll be take a bit, but I'll release the first case as a demo, so nobody has to wait a billion years for the game to come out:D
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First, I would like to thank PaperMario really quick. Thanks for the PM I might not have seen this if it wasn't for it. :)

Anyways, what I'd like to say is if you would like some help I can do quite a bit of web design if you plan on going big with this project. Unfrotunatly, I'm not a game designer so I can't help. However, I will be checking on this game to see how you're doing. This seems promising.
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Wow, thanks for the...um..thanks:P

Anyways, web design?! That's completely brilliant! I never thought of advertising that way:D

If you want to help out, that'd be so amazing! I could send you screenshots as I make them, and links to my GyakutenWiki page as well. Anyways, please reply here with what you can help with.

Thanks so much again!
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Well, I'll be honest it may take me a few weeks to get it ready since I'm busy with real life things. However, I could probably make a decent site. If you already have a host in mind please tell me. I usually go with freewebs and then use the full HTML editor. But, I wouldn't reccomend it for a full game.
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Aw, shoot. I myself am not a web designer, so I really don't know any servers. If you have a suggestion, feel free to use what you'd like. And don't worry about the delay in making the site. I don't really have too much other than the screenshots and the fact that the game is coming out:P
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All right, now if I may ask. How will people be able to play it? Is it a rom hack, a game making program game, a ds game or what?

Also, for the site what pages would you like?
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It will be made through PWLib 1.1, a game making program created by KSA_Tech.

For pages, at the moment, I would like a main page telling news as it's released, and a screenshots page as well(I can send pics).

I cannot thank you enough for helping!
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Hmm... I got a mysterious PM telling me to come and post here if I was curious about the game.
Well, my job is done! I'll be back again.

Cool idea, by the way, I can't wait to play! *ninjaInsho vanish*
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Thanks for the interest! Check back, cause a demo will be released in the near future!
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This does look very interesting, I thank you for informing me of this super neat-o project :D!
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No problem, thanks for taking interest:D

I promise all of you, I will have a beta tested demo ready in the near future! Please look forward to it!
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Just out of curiousity will this be a over time game. As in cases will be added periodically or just a singal game?
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I'm sorry, I don't fully understand your question.

However, I will tell you as much as possible, hopefully the answer to your question is here.

The game will be just like a normal PW game, you will only be able to play the first case at the beginning, and when you beat it, you will earn the next case, and so on. Also, every case you beat will have a custom picture reward on the case selection screen just like the real game. The game will be released once with 5 cases available.
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so if this game is between JFA and T&T then how come there is a picture of maya in vitamin square, which didnt show up until T&T?
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Take a good look at case 5, friend. :godot:

The timeline of this game goes to the Bridge to the Turnabout case in T&T.

Sorry for the misunderstanding, I meant that it's between the beginning of JFA and the end of T&T. Once again, sorry for the poor explanation.
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I'd say

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He means, will you release the cases seperately over time, like episodes.
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oh ok. that also explains my question of why godot was prosecutor
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Glad the misunderstanding is resolved :phoenix:

I certainly hope you've checked out the GyakutenWiki site, we've got the full story, and screenshots!
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okay sorry but i still have a few questions that i cant interpret the answer from WIki site.
so are these corrupted memories of phoenix's? because the pearl and iris thing and and franzy in jail?
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I wouldn't say "corrupted" per se, but Phoenix in this game, is presumed to have completed these cases before. However, thanks to his most famous cases like Rise from the Ashes and Bridge to the Turnabout, he has forgotten these cases over time.(This is Phoenix 2 years after AJ)

He goes to the Mason System to get these memories back, but "someone" causes the malfunction, causing Phoenix to go into the past. Franziska is presumed to have gone to jail after JFA.

However, the corrupt thing does occur in case 5, because of the Pearl-Iris switch. And Phoenix must find who did it.
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okay i think i understand everything now.
thanks for making this
i hope it gets completed.
i dont know if u said u needed any help or anything... but i might be able to do something
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No probs :godot:

The list of things I need are on the first comment in this thread. If you cannot help with any of those, feel free to either keep checking back for updates on things I need, or to later sign up as a beta tester for the first case demo.

Thanks again!
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I like what i see thus far. Keep up the good work.
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I'm not sure how I can help. The only skills I have are with writing and editing text, so if you want someone to proof read and edit your game script or wiki I can do that. Although, I would need you to send me installments in small chunks because I can only do so much work at a time (real life and all).

I did see some awkward sentece structure in your wiki, so I guess consider this my audition.

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"Of his multiple cases, only a select few are remembered by the masses, while the other disintegrate into the past."


other should be others

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In order to restore his lost memories, the Mason System is once again started up. However, when the system malfunctions, Phoenix is thrust into the past, and while getting no memories back, he must once again prove all his clients innocent...or be stuck in the past, forever.


A little awkward, I would rephrase it= In order to restore his lost memories the Mason System is reactivated. However, the system malfunctions and Phoenix is thrust into the past. Having gained none of his memories back, now Phoenix must once again prove all his clients innocent. . .or be stuck in the past forever.

It's not a perfect fix yet, but I only spent about five minutes on it. I can do better with more time and more thought. Just keep in mind that people won't want to play your game or take it seriously if it is riddled with typos and logical errors. You don't want to be the next Phoenix Drive.

Good luck with your game either way. I really look forward to playing this.

Fixed the problems Prosecutor Manella pointed out.
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No, he's not memory-less, he hasn't gained back memories from the past.
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Prosecutor Manella wrote:
No, he's not memory-less, he hasn't gained back memories from the past.


Thanks, I corrected it. When I read through the first time I misintepreted the attempt to gain memories back as complete memory loss. Should probably go get some sleep before I misinterpret more information.
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Wow, this sounds amazing!
I can't wait to see it!
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well this looks like it's gonna be quite fun if i can think of a way to help out i'll let you know
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Thanks to all for your supportive comments!

Lunaria42: I took your advice and played with the words a little bit. However, the main reason that the words are so...vague, shall we say, is because I want the full story to be told. Your fix seemed to omit a few important words.(I still liked the fix though)

Anyways, I fixed it up a tiny bit, and thanks for the typo error(my keyboard is wireless, so if I'm not close enough to the receiver, a letter occasionally gets omitted.


Prosecutor Manella: Thanks for straightening out the situation a bit. Also, how is sprite editing coming? No rush, I just wanted to know where you were.


Annalise S: Thanks! A beta tested demo of the first case will be released as soon as I'm done, so keep checking back!


BHX: Thanks for the supportive comment! Anyways, the things I need help on are on the first post of this thread. If nothing there is in your talent area, feel free to PM me with something else you're good at. I already have a web designer helping me with a web page:D
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You just have to be wary of awkward sentence structure. I did notice several places in the Wiki article that needed to be re-worded, but nothing was too hard to understand. However, it could flow better. When things flow smoothly, people tend to take you seriously. Or at least more so than if it sounds choppy or too wordy.

Another thing to look out for is making your characters sound different. Remember that certain characters have a manner in which they speak and set of vocabulary they use. The re-used characters shouldn't be a problem since you can look at the game scripts to get an idea of these things. However, make sure you think about the types of words and phrasing your OCs might use, otherwise they could all end up sounding the same.

Of course, if you don't want my help I'm not going to force anything on you. I'm content to spend my free time in other activities.

Good luck on your project and I can't wait to see the game.

Edit: I saw that you edited that paragraph. It's a good start, but your last sentence is a run on with comma splices. I would suggest breaking it into two seperate sentences. Your meaning will still be the same, it will just be grammatically correct.
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