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Turnabout Devil Progress Graph




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The story
Phoenix and Maya stumble across series of wierdly connected murders, who nobody wants to talk about.
What is the Black's Family doing behind the curtains of Law?
What is the connection?
Phoenix and Maya (and Pearls) are being thrown into a mystery after a nother!

Case 1
Planning:85%
Script:75%
Music:95%
Coding:0%
spriting:0%
backrounds:100%

Case 2
Script:50%
Planning:100%
Music:100%
Coding:0%
Spriting:45%
Backgrounds:100%

Case 3
Script:0%
Planning:15%
Music:100%
Coding:0%
Spriting:0%
Backgrounds:100%

Case 4
Script:0%
Planning:100%
Music:50%
Coding:0%
Spriting:6%
Backgrounds:100%



Sprites for characters in my cases (!!! :zennybw: MAJOR SPOILER ALERT :megaphone: !!!)
Spoiler:
Patrick Ears, a Prosecutor in a flashback trial.
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For Jack Black, a defendent in a flashback trial
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Desmond Black, a witness. (Unfinnished)
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Michael Oneyl
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Evidence (!!! :chopchop: MAJOR SPOILERS :zenitora: !!!)
Spoiler:
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Hm... A possible suggestion I may give is give at least some kind of a summary as to what your case might be about, if you want people to take more of an interest.
That one guy from AAO that made about a dozen cases that all kinda go off the deep end and fall apart at one point or another.
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this one snigle case, im aming to make it longer then eny of the ace attorney offical games ever. yes one case longer then one game!


Just my word of advice: Length should not be the goal here, but rather coherence. You should focus on the plot first and if it ends up being long as a result, then that's great. But don't go into a case thinking "I want to make this X hours long".

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Script: 95%


Really? Wow. I guess you've really been working on this. How many pages do you have so far?
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”Backcover text”:An Enigmatic Murder Happens At The Old Warehouse Near Wright and CO. Law Offices and Near The Gatewater Hotel. One Suspect, Three Witnese´s, And Only One Single Culprit. Is Phoenix Up To The Job? Can He Prove The Client innocent Or Not?


case 2
Script in the head: 100% :jake:
Script on the paper: 100% :gant:
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Thanks Abut the edvice by the way, you guys must understand one thing before enyone thinks that this is a waste of time, I AM A BEGINNER. This is my first case so far and so i have no expirience what so ever on making a case. Cardivore is allredy helping me by choosing the themesong for Desmond, now i need objection! Hold it, take that! Voices for him, CUSTOM ones. Sprites i might get from my old frend who is relly good artist given the pen, paper, idea. But im not sure abut a computer..... If enyone has eny ideas what brogram to use for the sprites please tell me, i need help with these so if eny allready GOOD sprite artists can then please, help.
Im only 12 years old but i think im ok for this case( if somthing bad happens i might have to split it into 3-5 parts)
I allso need a programer, i know im giving the shit to others but please. Im able to make the story, chareters, personaleties, music, publising. Im sorry abut this but there is eny one willing to give a hand, please...give! The helpers will be beta-testers when this is ready. :phoenix:
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The_Turnabout_Guy wrote:
If enyone has eny ideas what brogram to use for the sprites please tell me


I use Paintbrush and Gimp. If you can afford it, Photoshop might be a good choice too. Those other two are free though.

Also, what kind of voice were you looking for with Desmond?
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He would have two, the reason? Cant tell. A spoiler.
Somekind of elegant yet forceful shout that would be original, the other one is really deamon like, no von karma. If possible, no mix of objections to one but rather self recorded, i think there are some peapol who could do that of have done allredy, where to look for the voices? If no other option remains i must use a mixed one. :shoe:
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Ropfa and DudeWithAMask, can you guys do the objection voices for me? Or help me/ guide to do the sprites?
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What kind of guide were you thinking? Just advice on how to make them?
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Like what style should i use and how to make heads and yes i know you hate it but HANDS allso, ive got everything exept sprites and voices, everything else is planned out allredy, ans since i will do the programin, i wont need script, its in my head. Allso gimp 2 i dowlanded from their website, it had a virus on it........ But thank god i denied its acsess and deleted the files, Ropfa, im really happy to see that you are paying atenttion to my case. Thank you!

But i must ask something very selfish, could YOU do my sprites? Even if you sAy no, i will send you a list of charetrs for the first part of the turnabout, i disided to divide ot in 3 parts ratjer then just ome long, so that i can take breaks between them. Have a happy week and a lovely weather, read you soon!
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The_Turnabout_Guy wrote:
Like what style should i use and how to make heads and yes i know you hate it but HANDS allso, ive got everything exept sprites and voices, everything else is planned out allredy, ans since i will do the programin, i wont need script, its in my head. Allso gimp 2 i dowlanded from their website, it had a virus on it........ But thank god i denied its acsess and deleted the files, Ropfa, im really happy to see that you are paying atenttion to my case. Thank you!

But i must ask something very selfish, could YOU do my sprites? Even if you sAy no, i will send you a list of charetrs for the first part of the turnabout, i disided to divide ot in 3 parts ratjer then just ome long, so that i can take breaks between them. Have a happy week and a lovely weather, read you soon!


I suggest that, as a first timer, you start doing an outline of the heads and bodies of existing sprites. Just to practice. Make objects. Try to see how you can shade the objects and the skin so they look like sprites.

It is matter of practicing with what you have and not giving up.
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The_Turnabout_Guy wrote:
But i must ask something very selfish, could YOU do my sprites?


Er... Well, I have a lot on my hands already. I'd also like to see some progress on this first, since you're saying that right now everything is still just in your head.

For the sprites, just look at the official AA sprites and pay attention to the style they use. You might want to start by practicing some color-swaps and then work your way up to frankenteining (pasting one character's head onto another), and then finally full custom sprites. The more you practice, the better you're gonna get.
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Ropfa wrote:
The_Turnabout_Guy wrote:
But i must ask something very selfish, could YOU do my sprites?


Er... Well, I have a lot on my hands already. I'd also like to see some progress on this first, since you're saying that right now everything is still just in your head.

For the sprites, just look at the official AA sprites and pay attention to the style they use. You might want to start by practicing some color-swaps and then work your way up to frankenteining (pasting one character's head onto another), and then finally full custom sprites. The more you practice, the better you're gonna get.


Well I would classify frankening as more of pasting various body parts onto another sprite.
But yeah that's the general path to glory in spriting.
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Well I would classify frankening as more of pasting various body parts onto another sprite.


You're right. I was just trying to simplify it for him.
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All of you, THANK YOU!!! And Ropfa, i posted you Turnabout devil part 1 chareter list allredy, is it not enough proof of my progress? I posted all the evidence to Cardiovore allredy from part 1, soooo do you want the same thing or what? I can post you backstorys and all that but i have things i would not want to spoil for ENYONE, and that is the story of ........ Some chareters, i cant even say the names with out it being so obvious.
And last but not least, the god damn OBJECTION voices, i need at least 4 voice actors for this.....eny volenteurs?
Or where coul i get some peapol for that?!

For more details, compose me a private massage asking the question.



Ropfa, i dont need to do the script to the end. Im gonna program it so its ok to be only in my head, im 12 so thats the ONLY thing in my head right now.
Soooooo dont ask for the script (ever)......... Good night everybody!
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The_Turnabout_Guy wrote:
All of you, THANK YOU!!! And Ropfa, i posted you Turnabout devil part 1 chareter list allredy, is it not enough proof of my progress? I posted all the evidence to Cardiovore allredy from part 1, soooo do you want the same thing or what? I can post you backstorys and all that but i have things i would not want to spoil for ENYONE, and that is the story of ........ Some chareters, i cant even say the names with out it being so obvious.
And last but not least, the god damn OBJECTION voices, i need at least 4 voice actors for this.....eny volenteurs?
Or where coul i get some peapol for that?!

For more details, compose me a private massage asking the question.



Ropfa, i dont need to do the script to the end. Im gonna program it so its ok to be only in my head, im 12 so thats the ONLY thing in my head right now.
Soooooo dont ask for the script (ever)......... Good night everybody!


The thing is with scripts is that you should have people proof read it (which means having it written down) so that you can have things like spelling, grammer, pacing, ETC checked so that you can clean it up and up the quality.

Also a character list is not proof of progress, it is simply proof that you have chosen your cast.
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Hi! I must say that it will take a long time for me to do this, im sorry if i was misleading in my prosent graph,
Plot:100%
coding:0%
sprites:5% (practising)
Voices:15-35%
chareter desing:100%
Music:20-40%
scripts for all cases:0% (deleted the old files by accsident)
Scripts in my head: case 1:85% case 2:100% case:3 100% case 4: 25%.
I was not going to make a winston payne case but since Ropfa made one and it totaly kicked some serius ass, im gonna try to do one, thekey word being try.

I decided that im gonna do my own sprites (some really poor ones) be cause i just suck at Frankestaining the sprites, so i belive that i can do it for the most part, i must ask that someone would volenteur for shading, im bad at it too.



I desided to publish the names of the cases in here and some info.
Spoooooiler allllerrrt!

The timeline that this happens in is Right after T&T

Case 1 : Turnabout Fall
A murder happens in a skyscraper and the victim is killed by being pushed trought a window.
Prosecutor:Winston Payne (a.k.a Mr.Rokie Killer)
Defence attoreny: Phoenix Wright
Assistant:Maya
Defendent:???
Victim: Frank Alson.

I have'nt given much thought to this case, mostly to case 2.


There is gonna be a flachback trial on this one.
Case 2 Turnabout of the Enigma
Prosecutor:(to Ropfa who got the list of chareters, i changed some of these.) (half japanese prosecutor with a black suit & a black hair, a little yellowish skin. Trying to invent a pun-name)
Defense attoreny:Phoenix Wright
Assictant:Maya & Mia (ghost)
Victim:Patrick Ears
Defendent:Stan Steel
Flachback defense attoreny: Desmond Black (i will most likely give my voice to him)
Flachback prosecutor: Patrick Ears.
Flachback defendent: Jack Black
Flashback victim: Tom Green
I want to keep you in the black abut the story of case 2 and 3.
Script in the head:100%
voices:45%
spriting:0%
Music:98 1/2%

Case 3 Return of the Devil
All im gonna say is "Prison Break."


Case 4 Rise of the dead
All im gonna say is "Imposter."



This is an massive update, it will take about 1 1/2y until this is finnished, if get some help other than Ropfas and Cardis support and suggestions.
im gonna look for more music, voices, coders and such.
I hope this can tell something about my progress, case 2&3 and 4 will remain quite the secret because it took me a long time to plan them out and im not gonna give those to enyone whos not willing to help, (given some to Cardi and Ropfa allredy).

I hope you reader have a great summer!
Thanks for reading!
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Hi, again.
I must say i made some progress with case 4 for now, heres the prosent graph.

Story:85%
script and monologue:0% (in head):50%
music:10%
voices:10%
spriting ideas:65%

and i will offically start working on the script of cases 1,2&3 and 4.

Now to the main idea of mine, should i post the scripts here or not?
Or should i sent them privatly?
Well, i think in abut a week or three i will be done with case 1:s script and evidece list.
Case 2 would take about a month or so. It is the biggest case after all.
Case 3 is still under the thinkinghat but case 4 on the other will probably take more than
1 1/2-2 months, it has a wery complex story and i need some time to work it out in my head and then see what it looks on paper.
If you want the raw idea of some of the cases or so, plase ask me to send you a private massage.
Tommorow will be a busy day, i will have some time to the case however.
Im bad atwriting in english (im finnish) so plase exept the poorly choosen volcabulary of mine :)
If possible, id like to have a link to coding instructions if possible and a list of nesseceary codes. Like how to add the name to the name box.
Oh and one last thing, is enyone willing to help me with this, needing help with: beta testers, script readers, peapol who can shade sprites.






Credits to peapol who have inspired and helped me to this point:

"Mentor" and inspirator:Cardiovore.
Saluk: The man/god who created PyWright.
Ropfa: making of CoI and inspiering me and giving me hope&strenght to push on.
Fuandon:Found PyWright because of him.
Detective Equius: general edvice on spriting and on the things i asked/said.
DudeWithAMask:For making me think that i will need to tell and give parts of the script and story to peapol or they will abandon me.
Ping:for making TS.
Ropfa(again): for wanting me to make a Winston Payne case.


First case that i played and still love:Turnabout Scapegoat.


Have a good summer!
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Starting the case 1 script today, its gonna take its time now so im gonna update
A prosent graph here! Yeeey! :redd:
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Er...

I don't think very many people are going to be inspired to play your game if you tell them who all the killers are before it even comes out. >_______>
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Got too exited and all, i was trying the spoiler thing for the first time and im gonna edit them out now, i think youre the only one who read those.
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The case 1: Turnabout Fall prosent graph
Story:100%
Script:75%
coding:0%
sprites:0%

:phoenix: :udgy: :maya: :pearl: :godot: :edgy: :payne:

If you want the script, just ask for it, or should I post it here, wich?(most of it is ready) :godot:
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Post it.
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It si now 11pages long with some random spelling errors and i still need to get some parts straight, but if that is what you want then ok, i will in few minutes.
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Mostly offical cast of case 2 is coming after some names and looks have been confirmed.



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Case 2 Prosent Graph
I must remind that i will change these for sure later.

Cast:95%
Music:99%
Voice actors:90% (Coming voice actor(s) for future cases: Ropfa, Case 4 Jack Black.)
Spriting:40% (im doing about 80% of them myself i think)
Story:100%
Script:100%

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Ladies and Gents, I present to you.... the CASE 1 SCRIPT 75%!!!





Spoiler:
Case 1 Turnabout Fall


Intro
(shows a dark room with two peapol standing faceing each other, desk is on the right and a large window in the backround.)
???:It´s over, i have no more buisness with you.
???:WHAT?! You can´t do this to me!
???: I can, and I will.'
???:NO! I wont let you ruin me! I won´t!!!
???:What are you...! Hey STOP IT! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
”Thump!” ”crash!” (The victim falls trought the window and hits the ground below making a noise, cut back to the skyscraper.)
???:.........what...have..I...done?!
???:I need a scapegoat, but who.....! (bling)
???:She will do just fine....for now.





September 1 09:00 Defendent lobby Nro.1

Phoenix:(I really would ne in a need of a vacation right now.)
???:NIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!
Phoenix:AAARGHHHH!!!! Maya, you scared the life out of me!
Maya:Well, im not finnished yet.
Maya:GOOOOOOOOD MOOOORRRRNNNNIIIINNNNGGGG!
Phoenix:YEKS! Well, enyway. Where is Ms...... what was it?
Maya:Hawthorne?
Phoenix:No! Defenetly not! Lets see here....
(a woman with bloodred hair and clothing appears)
???:Hello Mr.Wright! Hope youre in a good spirit!
Phoenix:(After that good morning welcome I deffenetly am)
Phoenix:Yes I am ”glares a Maya” Ms.???
Sonya:Red, Sonya Red.
Phoenix: Ah yes i allmost forgot, how are you?
Sonya:I´ve been better, and you said th...
Phoenix: Im Fine!
Sonya:Right, of course you are. Now are you shure youre up to this?
You only took my case yeasturday?
Phoenix:That was more than enough for us. Im sure we get the Not Guilty.
Sonya:(Smiles) Me too, thank you again Mr.Wright!
Phoenix:Could you tell me little bit about youre relationship to the victim?
Sonya:Yes, of course! Let´s see.. I was his secretary and cleaner.
Phoenix:Both?! (I would think someone like the victim would have more money to hire a cleaner!)
Sonya:He is not the best boss but i still would not wish eny harm on him, now or never.
Phoenix:OK, but I must ask, Did you kill him?
Sonya:No, I did not kill him Mr.Wright.
Phoenix:Just needed to ask. (No pshyce-locks, she is telling the truth.)
Phoenix:What about youre self?
Sonya:Me? Im just normal everyday working civilian. Nothing more, nothing less.
Phoenix:Allright, thank you Ms.Red.
Sonya:Please, call me Sonya!
Guard:It´s time to enter the court room now.
Maya:Ok, lets go Nick!


September 1 10.00 Court Room Nro:1

”crowd talks”
”gavel!”
Judge:Court is now ready for the trial of Ms.Red, is the Defence ready?
Phoenix: Yes, the defence is ready youre honor.
Judge:Very well, and the Prosecution?
???:Most deffenetly.
Payne:Youre honor!
Judge:Ahhh, yes of course.
”gavel!”
Judge:Now, Could the Prosecution tell court more abut this crime.
Payne:Ok, Yeasturday at 11.00pm the victim, Mr.Tony Bausa, a leader at a , Bausacorp that makes domestic appliance and electronics, was killed.
Judge:Yes, I know them! Our Yogo machine is made by them!
Phoenix:(Good to know.)
Payne:Yes, he was killed in matter of a horrible way.
Judge:Oh, what was that?
Payne: He was dropped from a twelve story skyscraper, the victim died instantly of course.
”Hold it!”
Phoenix:Why do you say so?
Payne:He´s neck was snapped and his head..
”Hold It!”
Phoenix:No nee d for the glory details, just give me the aotopsey report!
Payne:OK, #aotopsey report added to court record#
Judge:This is indeed a horrible crime!
Payne:Yes, and our defendent Ms.Red is to blame from his death!
”OBJECTION!”
Phoenix:Conjuries! You have not yet even proven her guilt!
Payne:Heh heh heh heh hee, but the evidence and witness testimonys will do it for me well enough.
”Gavel!”
Judge:Now would the prosecution call it´s first witness?
Payne:Yes, the Prosecution calls Detective Gumshoe to the stand.
(screen goes black for 1s and comes back with Gumshoe panting)
Gumshoe:Hello everyone!
Payne: Now could you plase tell us about the murder Detective.

#Witness Testimony#

The murder

At 11.00pm last night, at the Bausacorps HQ the victim was killed by pushing down from the twelveth story building.


He was about to have a meeting with someone


Ms.Red went and killed him


We got evidence and a witness that prove our case


Face it, our case is flawless as a diamond!




Judge:”blinking with his eyes wide” well now, that certanly is a sloid case.
Gumshoe:”Smiling” Sure is!
Judge:Mr.Wright, youre Cross examination (Penalty:10)
Phoenix:Yes youre honor!




The Corss Examination

The murder
(presenting wrong evidence will do following
”Objection!”
Phoenix:This evidence contordicts the evidence!
Payne:No
Judge:It
Maya:Does
Judge:Nooooot! 10% penalty)
At 11.00pm last night, at the Bausacorps HQ the victim was killed by pushing down from the twelveth story building.

”Hold it!”

Phoenix:How do you know the time when he was pushed?
Gumshoe:Easy pal! When the window broke on the 12th floor the alarm went off, alarming the police to the scense and the data from the security
system tell´s us the time it was set off!
Phoenix:Well, ok. Plase continue youre testimony.
#the Sucurity system data added to the court record#


He was about to have a meeting with someone

”Hold it!”

Phoenix:With who?

”Objection!”

Payne:We will get to him later, he´s the witness to the crime.
Judge:Oh, in that case, plase continue.

”Hold it!”
Phoenix:Im not done yet, what was their meeting going to be about?

”Objection!”

Payne:The Witness will tell it at his own testimony!
Judge:Continue Detective.






Ms.Red went and killed him

”Hold it!”

Phoenix:How you know that?
Gumshoe:Easy, her mug.
Phoenix:Her... mug???”question sound”
Gumshoe:Yeah pal! Her mug, she allways drinks coffe torvards the evening, i would too if I had the money for it.”looking sad and scrathes his head”
Phoenix:Enything else?
Gumshoe::Yep pal, she allways leaves the mug to her desk after drinking one and then she cleans it up later, she does this everyday her co-workers said.
Phoenix:How long before she cleans the mug usualy?
Gumshoe:2-5min juding by what the co-workers told about it.
She likes to do things quickly out of the way they say pal.
Phoenix:So this is the only thing that puts her on the scense of the crime?
Gumshoe:Nope pal! The witness allso does.
Phoenix:(right allsmot forgot about it)
#mug added to the court record#


We got evidence and a witness that prove our case



”Hold it!”



Phoenix:What are these?
Gumshoe:The mug, witness, oppertunity, motive..

”Hold it!”

Phoenix:”sweating” She... had a motie?!
Gumshoe:Damn right pal, she was fired the same day, she was packing her stuff and was about to go home and at the moment when boss came and said youre fired, then she just killed him.
Phoenix: ”smirk”Sooo.... it was not a pre-meditaited!

”Objection!”

Payne:The fact that was it a murder or a kill does not matter, she killed him thats all that matters right now.

Phoenix:”sweating” True...true....




Face it, our case is flawless as a diamond!


”Hold it!”


Phoenix:Detective, how many diamonds do you know that are flat?
Gumshoe:Well, none....


”Objection!”
Payne:Does the Prosecution need to say how irrelevant this line of questoning is?
Judge:No
Maya:No
Phoenix:”sweating” No....


(only if you have´nt pressed everything and go to the end of all statements)
Phoenix: This is hard now Maya.
Maya:Totally!


”Gavel!”
Judge:Well, it seems that the Prosecutiona case is indeed Flawless, Im ready to announce my verdict!

”shows the entire court room”
”Objection!”

Phoenix: Sorry but I cant´t let you do that your´re honor.
Judge:And why not? ”angry”The Proscution has given me pleanty of reason!
Phoenix:Such as?
Judge:Motive and the mug and..... AH!
Phoenix: Yes youre honor! Only two peaces of info incriminate her!
”blue sprite backround” The Prosecution is laking evidnece! We need to hear the witness or you cant´t convict her!
Payne:HAAAH!”Small breakdown”A..a-allright, the Prosecution is ok with this, 5min recses is in order youre honor.
Judge:Indeed, I think I drank too much Yomo, ”disappears” the court is adjourned, wheres the WC?

To be continued! ”screen”


September 1 11.13 Defendant lobby Nro.1
Phoenix:Ms.Red, is it true? You were fired?
Sonya:Yes..I was...fired that day.
Sonya:But it was before”ornage text” the crime it self happend!
Phoenix:b-before?!
Sonya:Yes, it happend about 10min before the murder.
Phoenix:10min.. that would mean that the only person in that room wtih Mr.Bausa was the witn
Guard:Court will resume in 10s, 1..2..3..4..5..6

”Hold It!”

Phoenix:Not so fast! We´re going!




September 1 11.18 Court Room Nro.1
”gavel!”
Judge:Court is back in session, Mr.Payne?
Payne:Yes?
Judge:Summon you´re witness.
Payne:Aaah yes. The Prosecution summons the witness to the santd
???:Hmmmmyesyeshmmmfeelsmellsgood....
Payne:Name And Occupation.
???:who...me...hmmyesIlikethathairhmmyesyesyes....
Payne:....Name and occupation?
???:soyou ´meanmehmmyesyesofcoursehmmm......!
YESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”kabooom!” ”graymaynes theme starts to play”
Phoenix:GRAAAAAHK!”yelling face” What was that all about?!
???:I´ve got it! The name of it will be ”Paynes unstobabel hair lifter!!!”
Payne:WHAAAAT?
Phoenix:What´s going on?!
???:Im sorry that I have not introdused myself yet.
???:Walter Geel, Head of the LiftHairLTD
Payne:What was that with my name in it?
Geel:Oh, that´s my new gel brand, I name them after Prosecutors, there is the Godots Coffemanianic monsterlifter!!! or
Klavier´s besonders zärtlich gel!!!
Judge:Can I have some too?
Phoenix:(Why would you need it!?)
Payne:But now, to the poin shall we? Youre testimony about the moment of the crime!
Geel:Okey Dokey Lokey!











Witness Testimony

The fatal moment


I was about to go to a meeting with Mr.Bausa

I enterd the room and saw Mr.Bausa talking to Ms.Red


Ms.Red stod up like my srtogest gel and pushed him trought the window!




Judge:Oh my, it look that Mr.Payne might win for ones!
You´re Cross-Examination Mr.Wright.




Cross-Examination


The fatal moment

I was about to go to a meeting with Mr.Bausa

”Hold it!”

Phoenix:About what?
Geel:My new Line of products to his comapny of course!
Judge:Did you pass?
Geel:No, she killed him before i talked to Mr.Bausa.
Judge:How sad,"eyes closed" continue.

I enterd the room and saw Mr.Bausa talking to Ms.Red
”Hold it!”
Phoenix:Did you hear what they were saying to each other?
Geel: Yes, something along the lines: YOU´RE FIERD!!!!!!!!”KABOM!"
Phoenix:”sweting” Ok.. moving on.
Phoenix:Was there enyting suspicius or out of the place object in the room?
Geel:No.
Phoenix:You´re honor, id like this to be added to the testimony.


Ms.Red ran like my srtogest gel and pushed him trought the window!


”Hold it!”

Phoenix:Where was she standing?
Geel:Right next to her desk.
Phoenix:Moving on..

There was absolutley nothing out of the ordinary or enything strange in the
room.

”Hold it!”

Phoenix:You sure?
Geel:Yes


(only if you have´nt pressed everything and go to the end of all statements)
Phoenix:What do you think?
Maya:It smells bad, his hair... it smells like...like..
Phoenix:What?
Maya:You´re hair!
Phoenix:......

SOLUTION:Present the Mug to the last statement.


”Objection!”
Phoenix:You cant possibly be telling the truth.
Geel:What? Why?
Phoenix:Because if you would have seen the room, you would remember this! ”shows a mug thats blood red coverd in harts”
Geel:!!! ”Hair lifts up a little”
Geel:Oh that, of course, I remember... it´s the victims mug.
Judge:Oh, well then. Does this solve the error?
Phoenix:No, it does not.
Phoenix:Seeing how this is the DEFENDENTS MUG!
Geel:!!!
Judge:Oh yes, I remember now!
Phoenix:And this brigs me to my next conclusion!
Phoenix:You´re lying in you´re testimony! The question is: why?
Gell:”Sweating and putting more gel to his hair”



Im writing more soon! :karma: :phoenix: :udgy: :maya: :pearl: :godot: :shoe: :jake: :sadshoe: :chinami: :minuki: :odoroki: :javado: :edgy: :payne: :will: :larry: :gant: :meekins: :yogi: :lana:

Dont get some part, feel free to ask! :keiko:





some parts will be changed do to the errors and sutch.
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Again, what program should I use to make sprites, no gimp, photoshop, mspaint, paint, paintbrush and nothing that i must pay from.
Im really stressed with this, i think that one of my detectives might be done and published in next 2 weeks in Ropfa gives few premissions to me.
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The_Turnabout_Guy wrote:
Again, what program should I use to make sprites, no gimp, photoshop, mspaint, paint, paintbrush and nothing that i must pay from.
Im really stressed with this, i think that one of my detectives might be done and published in next 2 weeks in Ropfa gives few premissions to me.


Gimp, Paintbrush, and MS Paint are all free and completely usable programs. What do you have against them?
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On our computer, ms paints bit-map lags and wont appear, i cheked and it didnt work properly.
Gimp1/2 as i said before, has/had a virus of something in it, it wanted to upload a bunch of wierd programs to the computer, i denied the acsess of the other programs and was able to only ypload gimp 2, it had NOTHING in it in the files, only a file wich said its name, nothing more.
Paintbrush:i could not find it.
Photoshop:only ones i found i would have to pay 0.99€ to use.
I use devianart now, making sckeatches with it and trying to make sprites, does it have a bitmap, i cant find one...
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Paint.net?
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The_Turnabout_Guy wrote:
Gimp1/2 as i said before, has/had a virus of something in it, it wanted to upload a bunch of wierd programs to the computer, i denied the acsess of the other programs and was able to only ypload gimp 2, it had NOTHING in it in the files, only a file wich said its name, nothing more.


It was probably trying to install itself. >_>

I've never heard about Gimp giving anyone a virus before. It's one of the more popular art programs.
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Dosent paint.net cost? It says something about "studio white" 28.00€.


And does gimp or devianart have a bit maps, i need one despreatly.


Im trying to contact my old buddy who is a picasso in drawing, if he can i will ask him to do the black's family.
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Paint.net is free? Don't go to the site paint.net, search it on google.
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Well, i just uploaded Gimp2.8 and it installed well but it is a freaking maze, i have no clue how to use it. It is an impossible puzzle. All i was eable to do was to make a paprica on one of the screens, i dont even know how to freaking draw with it.
Paint.net looks ok but i try not to upload too meny softwares, if gimp proves to ne too complicated to use i move on to paint.net or devianart.
Does enyone know a drawing soft that has a bitmap and os easy to do sprites with and meld them together, and where do i get the AA offical sprites? I need gavin, godot, armando, mia, puoenix, may! Pearl, payne, edgeworth, apollo and the list goes on...... Klavier, ema, judge.
And how do i get the freaking backrounds? How do i animate the movement to coding, who can teach me coding, spriting, voice acting, and drawing for the title cards and the case screens?!
This is now 70% of my life, then comes school and basketball.
Now how am i gonna do all this?!
In summer holidays i will finnish at least one case, that is for sure! :acro:
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And case 1 will not most likely be a knockout case, it is just added for tutorial-like case and because i love humiliating payne.
Case 2, turnabout of the enigma. Will be the one with kick in it, it will be the case i most focuse on. Case 4 is the other. (With cases 1,3 being mostly fillers and not too important to the storyline.)
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The_Turnabout_Guy wrote:
where do i get the AA offical sprites?


http://www.court-records.net/Media.htm
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Darth Wiader, can i easily move them from there to a other surface that i can change them on? Like two at ones so i can meld them together.
And how do i meldn them. And what program to use? Is it possible on eny of the following:
Devianart.com
Mspaint
Gimp 2.8
Paint.net
Paintbrush
Photoshop (free)


Those i know and im only counting on GIMP right now. Do to hte fact that it is so offical looking.
I got to say, i have no clue what so ever how to use it. I cant even draw, but i can move a paprika picture to a nother screen! It counts as something, right?


(to everyone) i need right now for my case (1)
Something to use to melt sprites and re-shape/color. (Darth Wiader)
Coding guide (Ropfa)
Spriting guide (Kwando)
Someone to teach me how to make sprites from scratch (Ropfa)
A program that has the ability to melt sprites, a bit-map, simple and easy to use tools for it and something to add the special effects.
This list is long and headache giving to me and meny others, so can someone give these.

And the names in the end are to peapol who i think can do it.
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I can't sprite. I just know what tools others use to do that. xP
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K!................. Well, what do you suggest?
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