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Roc Wright - A Tale of Turnabouts [DEMO RELEASED]
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5 years after former attorney Phoenix Wright lost his badge, a new defense attorney named Roc Wright pops up, and unknown even to himself, he's the brother of a very skilled and famous attorney...
Profiles:
Name: Roc Wright
Age: 21
Occupation: Lawyer
A young lawyer, who, unknown to himself, is the brother of one of the best attorneys there ever was; Phoenix Wright.
Name: René Basset
Age: ??
Occupation: Prosecutor
René used to live in France, but for unknown reasons he moved to the US. Some people say that he was really good in France, but... he's not very trusted.
<- provisory profile picName: Agatha Mythe
Age: 27
Occupation: Prosecutor
???????
Profiles for Case 1: A Tale of Turnabouts
Spoiler: Case 1 OCs
Game on PyWright.
Demos on AAO.
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Cases:
1 - A Tale of Turnabouts
Status:
Case halfway finished.
Synopsis:
Spoiler: Case 1
Everything featured in this demo, such as music, sprites and even the script are subject to change until the full case's release.
2 - ?
3 - ?
4 - ?
5 - ?
Screenshots:
(Old version) Case 1:
Spoiler:
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I'll keep an eye on you.
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Auraion wrote:
This thread has so many coincidences with RK:AA
I'll keep an eye on you.
I'll keep an eye on you.
Seconded. Auraion was telling me how you plan to have the same third case as him :S
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Lokao0 wrote:
After 10 years that Phoenix Lost his badge, a new defense attorney appears named Roc Wright, the unknow Phoenix's brother. The jurist system don't exist anymore because Mr. Wright disappeared.
Ok... same timeline... well TW:AA has it, so I guess it's ok... No more jurist system?...
Auraion wrote:
Takes place 10 Years after Trials & Tribulations (3 years after AJ) The begining of the story of Ryu Kenji, a young "rookie" prosecutor. Lost his memory, he was found by the fierce prosecutor Franziska Von Karma. He was trained by Von Karma to become a prodigy. The story takes place in the same country as AA games (Los Angeles, Japusa) The jurist system was taken down because Mr. Wright left, and a corrupt person took charge, making a lot of Guilty people, declared Innocent. Now Udgey has his power back! 
Also...
Lokao0 wrote:
Hopefully on LuAA
Hehe... funny I wrote the same.
Auraion wrote:
Casemaker: Hopefully on LuAA
The profiles... well, I guess I'm not the firs one to make it that way.
but...
Lokao0 wrote:
<< Need better profile picName: Franziska Von Karma
Age:29
Occupation: Retired Prosecutor
Comments: Friend of Roc Wright, but she don't see him anymore, she's busy now.
Oh, a retired prosecutor? The great Von Karma? Why is she busy if she's not a prosecutor anymore? In my game, It's because she's taking care of her family.
I know I agreed that Ryu could make a cameo, but why did you wanted to make the third case, "Turnabout Shattering" too? (That conversation was on msn)
Well, that's all I can say for now.
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I deleted some coincidences
About the "Turnabout Shattering" that's because i wanted to in one game you play as a prosecutor, and in another, play as a Defense attorney
But i don't want to make this anymore xDAnd i'm adding more infos
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Trybien wrote:
let me guess, pearls going to be the prosecutor
She's not a prosecutor, she's a defense attorney.(as Auraion stated )
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Lokao0 wrote:
Trybien wrote:
let me guess, pearls going to be the prosecutor
She's not a prosecutor, she's a defense attorney.
No, she's a spirit medium.
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Yeah. My head is confused
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adding more info (again)
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I changed some things on the topic.
I'm not sure if Auraion will want RK to make a cameo in the game, must talk with him 'bout that.
Case 1 has been changed, and is being made on AAO.
Bye D:
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Link to play: http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/jeu.php?id_proces=34689
It's on AAO, so whatever.
Please post here if you find glitches or random crap.
Also, tell me what you think of it; what's good, what's bad, what's horrible, what's whatever.
Thanks!
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Needless to say, this isn't very good. You need to start over, work out the facts of the case, get characters and their back story straightened out, (Seriously? Godot is out of jail and is rude to Phoenix after the two found an understanding with each other in the last case of T&T?) and work on the dialogue. If you're going to make a game, you need to put your heart into it. Otherwise, no one will bother to give this a second glance. I apologize if I came out as rude, but no one will bother to play if you don't take making a game seriously.
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SilentBobX wrote:
I stopped playing after some hastily written dialogue and when the Judge said "Court is in session for the trial of Mr. Kiky Oass." That's the victim, right? Why is he on trial?
Needless to say, this isn't very good. You need to start over, work out the facts of the case, get characters and their back story straightened out, (Seriously? Godot is out of jail and is rude to Phoenix after the two found an understanding with each other in the last case of T&T?) and work on the dialogue. If you're going to make a game, you need to put your heart into it. Otherwise, no one will bother to give this a second glance. I apologize if I came out as rude, but no one will bother to play if you don't take making a game seriously.
Needless to say, this isn't very good. You need to start over, work out the facts of the case, get characters and their back story straightened out, (Seriously? Godot is out of jail and is rude to Phoenix after the two found an understanding with each other in the last case of T&T?) and work on the dialogue. If you're going to make a game, you need to put your heart into it. Otherwise, no one will bother to give this a second glance. I apologize if I came out as rude, but no one will bother to play if you don't take making a game seriously.
I know that this first case is not explained correctly, and it's very short.
However, that is actually proposital.
This first case is related to the third one, which will explain thing over.
About the things you said...
I don't see Godot being rude with Phoenix. He's just talking as he always would.
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This time, (at least Case 1) will be finished!
I've updated the first post with a revamped look for Roc and some new OCs appearing in Case 1, along with a new synopsys (as the case's premise has also changed).
Please tell me what you think!
Also, expect a Case 1 Demo release (on AAO) somewhere around next week.
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A demo of the first case has been released (on AAO).
Check out the first post to try it out.
PLEASE tell me what you think of it.
If you find any bugs, report them here (even though they'll probably be already fixed by the time the full case comes out)
For those of you who had lost faith in this game due to my poor abilities when the first case was released, I'd recommend you to try this again.
IMO, I kind of evolved my writing and I think it's WAY better than it was before.
Thanks.
(And sorry for the double post.)
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I did find a number of grammar errors.
Spoiler: Grammatical Errors
There are some sprite bugs that I didn't take a screenshot of because I was too lazy. Besides that, you're doing a great job. Keep it up!
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PS: I've never talked to someone from Sau Paulo before, how's the situation concerning the Cracha Preto and similar organisations?
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BonnyMono wrote:
Well, the sprites are impressive, all right.
I did find a number of grammar errors.
There are some sprite bugs that I didn't take a screenshot of because I was too lazy. Besides that, you're doing a great job. Keep it up!
I did find a number of grammar errors.
Spoiler: Grammatical Errors
There are some sprite bugs that I didn't take a screenshot of because I was too lazy. Besides that, you're doing a great job. Keep it up!
Thanks! Most of these typos have already been fixed, both in the demo and on the final game.
Rtaos Grimm wrote:
I find it odd that you've made this trial using the AAO editor and yet you haven't put a thread on the AAO forums. Considering this is a demo though, maybe you're waiting until the full version to put a thread on two mediums? What's your motive?
PS: I've never talked to someone from Sau Paulo before, how's the situation concerning the Cracha Preto and similar organisations?
PS: I've never talked to someone from Sau Paulo before, how's the situation concerning the Cracha Preto and similar organisations?
The reason for that is because the full case will be on PyWright. I decided to make the demo on AAO so I could easily make a "test" version of what I was doing, and if people liked it, I could continue it on PyWright, as it has way more options and features than AAO.
PS: Crachá Preto? What even is that...? Never heard of it.
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Concerning Cracha Preto, you've never played Max Payne 3 then?
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