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I am looking for some serious casewriters. Not scripters, writers. And they have to be serious and commited.

I have a short case, and two medium cases,.

I will give a detailed summary of what the case is to be about, who to appear, witness, Prosecute and such. I just need writers to fill itin, and make the plot twists.

I myself am working on the 4th and 5th case.

There is a GyakutenWiki page, if you are interested.

http://www.gyakutenwiki.net/w/Phoenix_Wright:_World_Of_Justice

Please note I have been working on this for months, and will not abandon this project at any point, and am trying to do something big.

P.S. In-Game rewards for those who apply and succeed.

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I'll help, if possible.
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So, which do you want?

A short Case,

A Medium case,

Or a Long case?

P.S. I'll help with the Long Case.
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I'll probably be best off with a short case.
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PM coming your way.
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what do you understand as "medium case"?
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By writing this, you mean devising the case, correct? Not scripting the entire case out.... Hm, lemme try and be more specific :yuusaku:

Do you want:
A. An entire scripted case (self-explanatory)
B. An outlined case. It will basically be the general outline, detailing what happens in each phase. Ex: Phoenix meets his client in the defense lobby. The client is scared, but Phoenix assures her that everything will be fine as long as everything she's told him is the truth. The client then begins, and Payne gives his opening statement. Payne tries to get the trial ended quickly, and calls his "desicive" witness, a man who claims he saw the defendant murder the victim. The man gives a testimony saying he saw her stab the victim with a knife and run, and in the cross-examination Phoenix catches him because he says that the defendant used her left hand to stab the victim with the knife, but her right hand's prints are on the knife. Payne suggests that she wiped the knife, and then got the other fingerprints on the knife, but Phoenix points out that in the testimony she immediately drops the knife and runs, meaning she couldn't have done that." (Only with names and stuff ^^')
C. A case synopsis. Basically what happened with the murder, and a basic outline of the case. Ex (this is for 1-2, since I'm too lazy to think of my own case). Mia had become a lawyer to find out more about DL-6 and the two men who "exposed" her mother, Redd and Grossberg. She begins finding out about Redd's extensive blackmail, and so Redd murders her. He had his secretary, April, set up a wiretap in Mia's office a week before, and planted her in a nearby building, the Gatewater Hotel, to become a witness. Mia's sister, Maya, is the first to arrive on the scene, and becomes the main suspect. Redd blackmails all the attorneys in town so that they don't take her case, so Phoenix takes the case himself. The main piece of evidence against Maya is a receipt with "Maya" written on it in Mia's blood. In his initial investigation, Phoenix finds April's wiretap. In court, Phoenix goes against Edgeworth, an undefeated "demon" prosecutor. Phoenix quickly makes short work of April's phony testimony saying she saw Maya kill Mia and proves she tapped Mia's phone. The court calls the Gatewater Hotel's bellboy as a witness, who testifies that April was indeed in her room at the time of the murder, and that April checked in with another man. Phoenix proclaims this man may be connected to the murder, and the judge postpones the trial a day." and then it continues for the 2nd investigation and court phase.
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Aww.. Dude. I would so want to do that! :maya:
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Heh, that final case seems crazy xD


Random little sprite comic I made up for it:

:edgeworth: : Because you're an edgless,
:franny: : ...foolishly foolish fool,
:godot: : ...Trite,
:kyouya: : THAT ROCKS!! :D
:godot: : ...
:franny: : ...
:edgeworth: : ...

Ending v1:
:godot: : This is why nobody likes you.

Ending v2:
:godot: : Hey, Manella? Can we have a 6th case? I think it should be called... Turnabout Everyone Gets to Kill Klavier

Ending v3:
:kyouya: :ka-whip: : FOOL!


Although perhaps it should be 'worthless' instead of 'edgeless'? I think that word fits a bit better...
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Bad Player wrote:
Ending v2:
:godot: : Hey, Manella? Can we have a 6th case? I think it should be called... Turnabout Everyone Gets to Kill Klavier


PPPLLLEEEASSEE, Manella? :larry:
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Bad Player wrote:
By writing this, you mean devising the case, correct? Not scripting the entire case out.... Hm, lemme try and be more specific :yuusaku:

Do you want:
A. An entire scripted case (self-explanatory)
B. An outlined case. It will basically be the general outline, detailing what happens in each phase. Ex: Phoenix meets his client in the defense lobby. The client is scared, but Phoenix assures her that everything will be fine as long as everything she's told him is the truth. The client then begins, and Payne gives his opening statement. Payne tries to get the trial ended quickly, and calls his "desicive" witness, a man who claims he saw the defendant murder the victim. The man gives a testimony saying he saw her stab the victim with a knife and run, and in the cross-examination Phoenix catches him because he says that the defendant used her left hand to stab the victim with the knife, but her right hand's prints are on the knife. Payne suggests that she wiped the knife, and then got the other fingerprints on the knife, but Phoenix points out that in the testimony she immediately drops the knife and runs, meaning she couldn't have done that." (Only with names and stuff ^^')
C. A case synopsis. Basically what happened with the murder, and a basic outline of the case. Ex (this is for 1-2, since I'm too lazy to think of my own case). Mia had become a lawyer to find out more about DL-6 and the two men who "exposed" her mother, Redd and Grossberg. She begins finding out about Redd's extensive blackmail, and so Redd murders her. He had his secretary, April, set up a wiretap in Mia's office a week before, and planted her in a nearby building, the Gatewater Hotel, to become a witness. Mia's sister, Maya, is the first to arrive on the scene, and becomes the main suspect. Redd blackmails all the attorneys in town so that they don't take her case, so Phoenix takes the case himself. The main piece of evidence against Maya is a receipt with "Maya" written on it in Mia's blood. In his initial investigation, Phoenix finds April's wiretap. In court, Phoenix goes against Edgeworth, an undefeated "demon" prosecutor. Phoenix quickly makes short work of April's phony testimony saying she saw Maya kill Mia and proves she tapped Mia's phone. The court calls the Gatewater Hotel's bellboy as a witness, who testifies that April was indeed in her room at the time of the murder, and that April checked in with another man. Phoenix proclaims this man may be connected to the murder, and the judge postpones the trial a day." and then it continues for the 2nd investigation and court phase.


A.

I PM you with B and C, anyway.

Medium case means about the length of 1-3, 2-2, 4-2, that sort.

And fine, I shall add a bonus case.

Turnabout Everyone Gets To Kill Klavier shall be in!

You can choose whether or not to do what people say when you examine something not important.

This is also true for non-important Hold Its, Presents and such kind. I only need the absolutely required texts.

Nice to have a fellow Brit on the team Dramatica.Oh, and I used Edgeless to suggest Edgeworth, so Worthless...

WAIT

EDGEWORTH

EDGE + WORTH

I'LL PUT EDGELESS, WORTHLESS
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Worthless = Kristoph.
Using my old infamous avatar as evidence: http://www.peachifruit.com/hiimdaisy/worthless.png
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Edgeless, Worthless = Edgestoph. :edgy:
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No, this is Kristoph:

Spoiler: 4-4
Edgeless, worthless, foolishly foolish fool, TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

('cause he says Wright like that in his freakout xD)



anyway, I'd like to give this a shot.... My order of preference would be case 6 4 (most prefered), case 2, case 3


*begins to wait patiently for the PM*
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Bad Player wrote:
No, this is Kristoph:

Spoiler: 4-4
Edgeless, worthless, foolishly foolish fool, TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

('cause he says Wright like that in his freakout xD)


xD
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Yes, but would he say that over the phone?

Oh yeah, at the end of my game, he goes:

Spoiler: 4.4
JUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSTIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICCCCCCCCCCCCEEEEEEEEEE
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Prosecutor Manella wrote:
Yes, but would he say that over the phone?


Yes, because he doesn't have any repeated phrases, identifyable speech quirks, or name-derived words that can be used to identify him. :garyuu:


*and is STILL waiting for the pm :chinami: *
lol jking, take your time
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What about Klavier?

Herr Trite?
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Tch. We already established no Klavier:
Bad Player wrote:
:edgeworth: : Because you're an edgless,
:franny: : ...foolishly foolish fool,
:godot: : ...Trite,
:kyouya: : THAT ROCKS!! :D
:godot: : ...
:franny: : ...
:edgeworth: : ...

Ending v1:
:godot: : This is why nobody likes you.

Ending v2:
:godot: : Hey, Manella? Can we have a 6th case? I think it should be called... Turnabout Everyone Gets to Kill Klavier

Ending v3:
:kyouya: :ka-whip: : FOOL!

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The extra case should be EBA/OTO based. Win by tapping to the beats of Guilty Love, then Klavier gets beat up. Don't win, and he still gets beat up.
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EPIC

Alright, BAd Player, PM coming your way.
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