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Chapter 1 - The Unknown Turnabout
A little girl is found dead at the foot of a cliff, but her body suffered such injuries that it is not identified. A clumsy witness, a shabby prosecutor and a sharp attorney may lead to a "Not Guilty". Then who did really kill her?
NEW!
#0 - Prologue
Day 1 - Trial
#1 - Introductions
#2 - Yep, That's The Defendant.
#3 - The Trial
#4 - Decisive Evidence?
#5 - Please, Anyone but HIM!
#6 - THE Testimony
#7 - Cross-Examination A
#8 - Cross-Examination B
#9 - Cross-Examination C
#10 - Contradiction! A
#11 - Contradiction! B
#12 - Testimony 2: The Killer
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Ups
, thanks dude, you're right, I was kinda distracted there, but it's like you said. Corrected!
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EDIT: But jesus christ your text. Oh my god that text is so neat and tidy. Lovin' ittttt.
SMASHING DAY FOR A BARBEQUE.
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THEY TALK WITH THEIR MOUTHS CLOSED!! *gasp*
Nah, most comics make that mistake too. Not that I've made a comic XD
seriously, its no big deal. Just somethin' to think about next time, thats all
But great so far! I wanna see franzys sis in action!
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You were right, I took my time and retraced some edges and face features and they look slightly better now. I corrected only the sprites so the comic will show the changes from page 3 onwards.
Thanks! But it was quite easy. It is a 10px white Verdana, on a 25% transparent black rectangle. The box with the name uses size 8 (or 7, I can't remember now)
THEY TALK WITH THEIR MOUTHS CLOSED!! *gasp*
Nah, most comics make that mistake too. Not that I've made a comic XD
seriously, its no big deal. Just somethin' to think about next time, thats all
But great so far! I wanna see franzys sis in action!
You know, it ocurred to me, but after I've done the pages. I don't think that it looks that bad, but it would add a touch of reality. I'll consider it when I keep doing my pages.
Thanks for your intrest! Unfortunately, the first prosecutor is Payne, although... How much could it take to beat him?
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More to come!
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Anyway, it's catching my eye so far, so keep up the good work!
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Enjoy!
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I thought about it, I really did. But, it's just that... After losing to three rookies and only winning a case against a phony attorney, I think his confidence and arrogance should have faded away. I dunno, I just see it that way.
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I thought about it, I really did. But, it's just that... After losing to three rookies and only winning a case against a phony attorney, I think his confidence and arrogance should have faded away. I dunno, I just see it that way.
“Bros before hos, man.”
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Yes, you are right. Now that I think about it I should've sent you a PM apart from the credit. At the time I thought the credits were enough. Sorry '^.^
EDIT: I just uploaded pages 7 and 8, part of the Cross-Examination. The rest is coming soon!
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2nd EDIT: Added page 10! More to come
Still waiting some comments, people!!!
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(how do you translate that?)
They don't :c
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(how do you translate that?)
Umm... "You rule, dude"? XD I can't think of anything else
Anyway thanks for your intrest, I'm glad you're liking it so far
(Ah, me encontré justo con DOS compañeros Argentinos en el MISMO THREAD! y toda la cosa)
Jaja parece que había más de los que pensaba!
(Haha, it seems there were more that I expected!)
I quite like the idea so far. Just one thing: What is wrong with Blake's head? You should fix that, it seems like his neck is stuck looking backwards.
I know what you mean. His positions are a bit weird. It's like he looks at everything sideways. I was aware of that when I made the sprite, and I didn't think it looked bad. Although I admit many people may find it very bad-looking, and I would have preferred a normal look, but it takes a lot of work to change: I'd have to redo the head completely, and I'm not that good with Paint. I hope it doesn't draw your intrest away, anyhow.
EDIT: Page 12 is up
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(Ah, me encontré justo con DOS compañeros Argentinos en el MISMO THREAD! y toda la cosa)
On Topic:
I quite like the idea so far. Just one thing: What is wrong with Blake's head? You should fix that, it seems like his neck is stuck looking backwards.
Jajaja lo siento jamas leí eso.
(lol sorry, i never read that.)
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good thread.
see ya later.
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maybe you should use an attorney sprites head or something for him.... It might make it more appeling.
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Oh, makes sense, is this getting locked or is it going to die?
*que cool mod quote*
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Just close it and stop necromancing it.
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