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...a bit more. At first glance, she looks identical to Maggey, sans glasses. Also, you forgot to shade under her bangs!
Her chest is kind of lacking in detail, too... As the defendant she'll probably have the least amount of screen time, but that doesn't mean you can get sloppy with the sprite. You're better than that!
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...a bit more. At first glance, she looks identical to Maggey, sans glasses. Also, you forgot to shade under her bangs!
Her chest is kind of lacking in detail, too... As the defendant she'll probably have the least amount of screen time, but that doesn't mean you can get sloppy with the sprite. You're better than that!Actually All of my Frieda Sprites are Maggey Sans Glasses with a new outfit, It's just more noticeable in this pose. (Fun Fact: her design is actually based on Dahlia's Unused Concept Art.)
I'm really not good at face editing, especially the eyes--which are the most noticeable connection back to Maggey. (It does not help that, as I have just discovered, I saved OVER My layered version of this sprite.) Eh, I'll see what I can do.
The shading under her bangs thing though, That I can defnitely fix.
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I made the eyes a bit beadier, moved up the nose/mouth and put shading under the bangs. (Hurray!)
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Okay, I'm working on it.
But! While you wait, I just finished my crime scene photo and I need some advice.
1. I think it needs to be more photo-y and less screenshot-y, But I don't have any good idea about how to do it. Suggestions?
2. Color, or Black and White?
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Overall, I'd say it probably works better in black and white!
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1. I think it needs to be more photo-y and less screenshot-y, But I don't have any good idea about how to do it. Suggestions?
2. Color, or Black and White?
Use this as a template.
Don't remove the white outlines, just the green part
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Overall, I'd say it probably works better in black and white!
Okay, I think I got that all sorted.
And Yes, His scarf is the murder weapon.
Also, Just for some Fun! AJ Timeline MIKE MEEKINS!
He's a Park Ranger.
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(Hmm... Park Ranger Mike gave me a good idea.)
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He'd scare away the poor bunnies!
On a serious note though, this is more great work! Hope you can keep this up 'cause I'm really enjoying it!
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In brief explanation: There is a section of my 5th case which takes place as an AAI style investigation in an Orphanage. It involves orphans, who I've been drawing in my free time. And I went ahead and sprited my favorite design.
BEHOLD! Orphan #4!
Ain't she adorable?
Now, this is my first time trying to do an AAI sprite and also my first time trying to make my own eyes, so criticism would be lovely.
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In brief explanation: There is a section of my 5th case which takes place as an AAI style investigation in an Orphanage. It involves orphans, who I've been drawing in my free time. And I went ahead and sprited my favorite design.
BEHOLD! Orphan #4!
Ain't she adorable?
Now, this is my first time trying to do an AAI sprite and also my first time trying to make my own eyes, so criticism would be lovely.
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In brief explanation: There is a section of my 5th case which takes place as an AAI style investigation in an Orphanage. It involves orphans, who I've been drawing in my free time. And I went ahead and sprited my favorite design.
BEHOLD! Orphan #4!
Ain't she adorable?
Now, this is my first time trying to do an AAI sprite and also my first time trying to make my own eyes, so criticism would be lovely.
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In brief explanation: There is a section of my 5th case which takes place as an AAI style investigation in an Orphanage. It involves orphans, who I've been drawing in my free time. And I went ahead and sprited my favorite design.
BEHOLD! Orphan #4!
Ain't she adorable?
Now, this is my first time trying to do an AAI sprite and also my first time trying to make my own eyes, so criticism would be lovely.
Oh, and it's a fantastic and adorable sprite.
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Okay, so like this would be better?
Also, for my personal reference and your bafflement: Super Space Cat Ninjas
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Yeah, I know what you mean.
Also~! I finished the second of the Orphans, although this one didn't turn out quite as well. Clearly he suffered both from having a female base and from the more complex pose. Can any of you guys pick out what's bugging me about him?
Orphan # 5 Has a plan.
He's supposed to be looking off to the side, in AAI style, but it came out more as a looking at the audience.
EDIT: I darkened his outlines. Side-by-side for comparison. Did it help?
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I'll likely to have to re-do the sprite When I get further along and have more practice on eyes. But thanks for the advice.
I've also been doing some experimentation with a very specific pose I need for Frieda (along with drawing faces). She doesn't look quite like her other sprites since she's more custom, but I think I'm starting to develop a style. How do you think it turned out?
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Well, I've never tried to do one before. But Talking and blinking wouldn't be too complicated. The motion of her hand would be much more of an issue.
But while I ponder that I fixed Sly's Face. I mean Orphan 5. Yeah.
Also, Just for fun:
Why are you all saying "Objection!" all the time?
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This second update can be ascribed to procrastination on my History PowerPoint.
ANYWAY.
HF mentioning animation got me thinking and I thought I'd take a look at how it was done since I'd never tried it before. Skip forward about an hour and VIOLA!
A BLINKING Orphan.
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Well, I've never tried to do one before. But Talking and blinking wouldn't be too complicated. The motion of her hand would be much more of an issue.
But while I ponder that I fixed Sly's Face. I mean Orphan 5. Yeah.
Also, Just for fun:
Why are you all saying "Objection!" all the time?
Hm... he looks so sly. He looks like one incredible creature, his eyes now look like more he's really coming up with something. Also, I really liked the baloon, pretty funny XD. Good job there, my friend.
This second update can be ascribed to procrastination on my History PowerPoint.
ANYWAY.
HF mentioning animation got me thinking and I thought I'd take a look at how it was done since I'd never tried it before. Skip forward about an hour and VIOLA!
A BLINKING Orphan.
Hum... Quite simple, yet nice. It makes me happy to know that you' ve considered to take my suggestion and begin animating sprites.
(Next sprite: Orphan Apollo?)
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