Nudal's World of Sprites! (Update: Lectric Bayse)
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Hello Court Records! In case you don't know me, my name is Nudalman, (or just Nudal), and I saw that spriting was very popular, so I decided to try my hand at it, and found that I enjoyed it, which is why I created this topic. I sprite quite often, so you can always expect more soon!
Spoiler: Update Log:
Requests
I have decided that I believe I am good enough to take requests. However, there are certain rules:- I will only take up a maximum of three requests at any time (isn't that overused?
)- I have the right to decline any request for any personal reason
- I also have the right to take as long as I want with any request
And now, the request queue:
1. MonochromeMurders
2. Empty
3. Empty
Original Characters
Spoiler: Rudi Grau
Spoiler: Veri Distraught
Spoiler: Gui Tarre
Spoiler: Analiesse Grau
Spoiler: Devon Trommel
Spoiler: Andrew Flint
Spoiler: Me!
Spoiler: "The Receptionist"
Character Edits
Spoiler: Maggey Bryde?
Spoiler: Don't click if you want to retain your dignity. Period.
Spoiler: Someone Didn't Use The Wright Wardrobe Episode 1
Spoiler: Someone Didn't Use The Wright Wardrobe Episode 2
Tutorial
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Archive
Spoiler: Rudi Grau, Version 1
Spoiler: Analiesse WIP
I know that I'm not the best spriter in the world, so criticism (or just a comment) would be really helpful!
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I'm not too good with the criticism but the animation is a bit... I dunno.. sort of slow.
Also, the way you've done it is a blink then talk then blink then talk. To get them to blink and talk like the game sprites, just open up an animation in GIMP and go through the frames.
Apart from 2 white pixels on the sides of the hair though, the actual sprite is great IMO =D
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.:looby:. wrote:
This is brilliant for a first sprite!
I'm not too good with the criticism but the animation is a bit... I dunno.. sort of slow.
Also, the way you've done it is a blink then talk then blink then talk. To get them to blink and talk like the game sprites, just open up an animation in GIMP and go through the frames.
Apart from 2 white pixels on the sides of the hair though, the actual sprite is great IMO =D
I'm not too good with the criticism but the animation is a bit... I dunno.. sort of slow.
Also, the way you've done it is a blink then talk then blink then talk. To get them to blink and talk like the game sprites, just open up an animation in GIMP and go through the frames.
Apart from 2 white pixels on the sides of the hair though, the actual sprite is great IMO =D
Thank you! About the animation, I will probably create a new animation, as this is my first time using GIMP.
He was also pretty hard to make, because the mouth and blinks are made completely from scratch, as well as the left arm.
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Also, the upper lens on his glasses coincides with his eyebrows, you might want to change the color of his eyebrows, and finally the wrinkles on his face are very sharp, and you might want to dull those down a bit. Other then that, it's a great animation, and I hope the fangame is as well 
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GantStare wrote:
Just Great, A few tips; There are a few pixels on the sides of his head you might want to shave off, their really apparent Also, the upper lens on his glasses coincides with his eyebrows, you might want to change the color of his eyebrows, and finally the wrinkles on his face are very sharp, and you might want to dull those down a bit. Other then that, it's a great animation, and I hope the fangame is as well
Also, the upper lens on his glasses coincides with his eyebrows, you might want to change the color of his eyebrows, and finally the wrinkles on his face are very sharp, and you might want to dull those down a bit. Other then that, it's a great animation, and I hope the fangame is as well Thanks! Will try to fix when I have the time! I'm glad you liked it!
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Spoiler: Angry Rudi!
Spoiler: Rudi Without the Weird Pixels
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One tiny thing: Just kind of soften up the shading. (I need to work on that too.)
Keep it up!
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sparkleranger78 wrote:
I think these are really awesome!
One tiny thing: Just kind of soften up the shading. (I need to work on that too.)
Keep it up!
One tiny thing: Just kind of soften up the shading. (I need to work on that too.)
Keep it up!
Thanks! Will try!
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I can't say much to the animation because this is something I still have to get my hands on but about you sprite work...it's damn good! I have much respect for people who can create sprites from zero on, and you did a fantastic job
Just two small points I want to say...1. "Angry Rudi"'s hand pose looks a bit strange...I know drawing hands is something awful (for me actually) but well...
2. Those red lines and dots in his face, are these scars or scratches ? or maybe wrinkles because I can't really tell
Anyway, for you first attempt like I said in my first sentence this is a wonderful piece of work and I hope to see more in future
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Just two small points I want to say...1. "Angry Rudi"'s hand pose looks a bit strange...I know drawing hands is something awful (for me actually) but well...
2. Those red lines and dots in his face, are these scars or scratches ? or maybe wrinkles because I can't really tell
Anyway, for you first attempt like I said in my first sentence this is a wonderful piece of work and I hope to see more in future
1.Which hand?
2. They are supposed to be wrinkles...
Any way , thanks for the nice comments, I'll be uploading a new character and Rudi's last emotion soon, so stay put!
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nudalman wrote:
1.Which hand?
2. They are supposed to be wrinkles...
Any way , thanks for the nice comments, I'll be uploading a new character and Rudi's last emotion soon, so stay pit!
2. They are supposed to be wrinkles...
Any way , thanks for the nice comments, I'll be uploading a new character and Rudi's last emotion soon, so stay pit!
I think it's the right hand, more precise the forefinger or pointing finger looks a bit strange but well that's just my impression...
Hmm for the wrinkles maybe you should make them a bit softer, to fit more to the skin of the face
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Magic Monkey wrote:
nudalman wrote:
1.Which hand?
2. They are supposed to be wrinkles...
Any way , thanks for the nice comments, I'll be uploading a new character and Rudi's last emotion soon, so stay put!
2. They are supposed to be wrinkles...
Any way , thanks for the nice comments, I'll be uploading a new character and Rudi's last emotion soon, so stay put!
I think it's the right hand, more precise the forefinger or pointing finger looks a bit strange but well that's just my impression...
Hmm for the wrinkles maybe you should make them a bit softer, to fit more to the skin of the face
Will try! Thanks!
And time for a new sprite... Veri Distraught!
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Anyways, I have an update.
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...Hopefully someday... xD
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I used Hotti's eyes as a base and then edited them.
Do you like it? (Your opinion is important to me, your sprites are awesome!)
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Aside from the eyes and the red outlines on the jacket though, it's pretty good.
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What do you mean by the eyes look wrong? (ex. too big, too white?)
I'd better fix the outlines...
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I can't describe what I mean >.<
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There's a strange line under his pupils.
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nudalman wrote:
Spoiler: Veri Distraught
Spoiler: Gui Tarre
Wow, your new works are great!
I personally adore Gui Tarre, however about his eyes I have to agree with Zinle and looby they look a bit strange around the iris...Veris outlines of the jacket could be more darker and I would suggest to add a bit more shade to the hair at the moment it looks more like a hood in my opinion 
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Hope he is better!
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looks good to me 
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The shading of that jacket is great, keep that up and your sprites will be much improved.
I don't know if it's just me, but Veri's hair looks a little flat to me. Just the forehead part, that is.
I look forward to seeing more of your sprites, keep it up!
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Part of the reason the shading's better is because I didn't shade it :)
Anyways, I've been working on a new sprite, Analiesse Grau. She isn't animated yet, so I created three colour schemes. Just a question, which one do you like the best?
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Personal preferance but i think the Red Analiesse looks the best out of the 3!
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I can't decide between the blue and the red one, but the green is to pale for my taste, but that's just my opinion Spoiler: nonconstructive comment do not read
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Stay tuned for I will soon be uploading a bench sprite of Analiesse! *insert epic music here*
Personally, I like the red one the best as well, so the first colour to reach three votes will be final.
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Something is bothering me about the eyes though, sorry DX I don't know if they're too big or too close together or what... but that's probably just me!
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Edit: Hmmm... Maybe it's because of the white line underneath her eyes?
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Okay, expect a new sprite tomorrow, it is past my bedtime, so I don't have time to upload.
Also, I wanted to enter the OC contest this year with one of my sprites. Which one do you guys think I should enter? (Whichever one I enter, I will make more poses, etc.)
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GantStare wrote:
The Analiesse WIP sprite seems a bit small for ratio, what's it's base? (Great Sprite though)
First off, thanks :)
And next, I also noticed she was small, not sure why. The body is an outline of Ini, is that what you mean?
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nudalman wrote:
GantStare wrote:
The Analiesse WIP sprite seems a bit small for ratio, what's it's base? (Great Sprite though)
First off, thanks :)
And next, I also noticed she was small, not sure why. The body is an outline of Ini, is that what you mean?
It probably is, I just looked at the Ini sheet and noticed that's not regular size either
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GantStare wrote:
nudalman wrote:
GantStare wrote:
The Analiesse WIP sprite seems a bit small for ratio, what's it's base? (Great Sprite though)
First off, thanks :)
And next, I also noticed she was small, not sure why. The body is an outline of Ini, is that what you mean?
It probably is, I just looked at the Ini sheet and noticed that's not regular size either
What do you mean, not regular size either?
You mean that Ini is small?
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Well, glad you liked it :)
Anyways, which character do you think I should enter in the OC contest?
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nudalman wrote:
Oh, I see.
Well, glad you liked it :)
Anyways, which character do you think I should enter in the OC contest.
Well, glad you liked it :)
Anyways, which character do you think I should enter in the OC contest.
....*YOU FOOL*, My entire web browser was on 50% magnification. Sprite looks fine now. Anyways, you should either enter Rudi Grau or Analiesse WIP. Both are very well done. When is the OC Contest coming up? I'll probably enter.
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nudalman wrote:
Coming up in January I think... Anyways, there is an announcement
Thanks, I'll be sure to follow your work 
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