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Re: Nekonohimes request finished!~Romeos Art and CaricaturesTopic%20Title
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No problem xD

Anyway, to close off the day, golden luxrays request is finished.

Spoiler: HERSELF
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Quite simple, but nevertheless I think it's well made. Didnt take too long to do. I'd say the hardest part is the start. once you've begun you're into it.
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Re: Romeos Art and Caricatures~Golden Luxrays request finished!~Topic%20Title
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Yay! I love what you did with Mr. Hat and Trucy. xD
I love how Godot looks, and Pearls is cute!
Can't wait to see more from you. :keiko:
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Romeo wrote:
Oh my, three requests in one day... I'll see what I can do. But that means requests are off until further notice guys. Three is my limit.

I guess you mean AJ Ema, sooooo yeah.


Yey, sorry. I mean AJ Ema. Sorry for not saying it!
Re: Romeos Art and Caricatures~Golden Luxrays request finished!~Topic%20Title
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Well it kinda figured seeing as it was with apollo and Klavier.

And I'm glad you liked them alynnyang! Mr. Hat was sooo difficult. He has a lot of tones of wood, and seeing as hes already heavily stylkised, I had to do it some more.
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The Hoosiers :) Just too cool.

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Romeo wrote:
No problem xD

Anyway, to close off the day, golden luxrays request is finished.

Spoiler: HERSELF
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Quite simple, but nevertheless I think it's well made. Didnt take too long to do. I'd say the hardest part is the start. once you've begun you're into it.


:3 oh thx i like it ^^ thxxx
my sprites Image(click the pic for pandas graphics~)
Re: Romeos Art and Caricatures~Golden Luxrays request finished!~Topic%20Title
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Okay so Nekonohimes and Mary Faradays requests are finished~

Spoiler: Apollo, Ema and Klavier.
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Yeah Apollo fails shutup ;;


Spoiler: Contains Rosa Kitaki
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I hope you liked it, I like it myself.


Anyway, thats all my requests done, but you can request more if you want. :)
And leave a comment, please.
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Romeo wrote:
Okay so Nekonohimes and Mary Faradays requests are finished~

Spoiler: Apollo, Ema and Klavier.
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Yeah Apollo fails shutup ;;


Spoiler: Contains Rosa Kitaki
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I hope you liked it, I like it myself.


Anyway, thats all my requests done, but you can request more if you want. :)
And leave a comment, please.


First comment :D
Yey, thanks so much, I love it :hotti:

And Rosa is also cute!
Re: Mary's and Nekos requests done~Romeos art and caricatures!Topic%20Title
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Aww Rosa's cute. I love seeing characters drawn in different styles. Thanks! :)
Re: Mary's and Nekos requests done~Romeos art and caricatures!Topic%20Title
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Thanks for the replys guys. Gumshoe will be up next.
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Re: The (not so) Wonderful World of Romeo's art!Topic%20Title
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Sorry to double post, but uhh, I have new art for y'all. It would be lovely if you commented.
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It's just a sketch, but please, I'd like opinions on her look. I really tried to capture that Ace Attorney feel with her.
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Not bad. There's some interesting anatomy errors there, but that's cool. She has an interesting pose :) Can you tell us more about her as a person?
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I know I made a lot of mistakes, but this really was the most basic of sketches. Damn, I thought I added details about her character, let me try this again...

Spoiler: Ursula Wills
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Name: Ursula Wills (Ursula comes from 'Ursa', Latin for bear, meaning she is a bold, protective character, and Wills represents her willpower and determination.)
Age: 27
Nationality: English
Personality: Ursula, to be summed up in one word, is peppy. However, much more can be said about Ursula than just that. She's bold and adventurous, often less serious than what the situation calls for. She's always up for a good laugh, and is often the person people go to if they need cheering up. But that's her less serious side. If someone she knows is in trouble, she becomes very protective of them and won't rest making sure the person in need of assistance is alright. This habit comes from her childhood, but more about that later. In a court of law, she's well-liked by many, except her boss, Victor Savage. In fact, even her boss himself told her that she only works for his offices because she's popular with customers, not the fact he likes her. Ursula, being the jokey person she is, thinks that he's joking.

History: Ursula wasn't very intelligent as a child. She flunked every test, feigned sickness for weeks on end, and was always out late up to no good. As she matured into her teen years, she became even more rebellious, and started going out to all-night parties, binge drinking until she was sick, and kept going on. Her parents started to leave her by herself for weeks at a time, letting her care for her younger brother, Alec. Of course, she didn't bother with Alec, and went out all the time.
But one day, she came back to get some of her clothes and saw a shocking sight: Alec was sitting on the kitchen floor, surrounded by papers and folders. He revealed to Ursula that he had been feigning their parents signatures for months explaining Ursula was chronically ill and bedridden, so that she wouldn't go to jail. At this point, Ursula knew what was right. She cleaned up all the mess she had made, and started going back to school. She attempted contacting her parents, but they were missing. They hadn't heard hide nor hair from them for eons. Not that it mattered. Ursula began to realise that she would have to care for Alec, and so, started working really hard. She retook all of her exams and passed with flying colours. With a new passion for helping people, she decided to take the bar exam, succeeded, and became a Lawyer age 24. Alec, who was at that time 15, had already been bumped up several years for his academic prowess. He was the smartest in his year. He took his A-Levels at 16 and passed all of them with A*'s. Since then, he has been Ursulas legal aide in court cases she now takes.

Current Job: Ursula works for 'Savage & Associates', a Lawyer firm in Manchester. Her boss is Victor Savage, whose cold, hard logic had always people wondering why he hadn't become a prosecutor. This certain Lawyer firm is a very popular one, however there are't many people working there, maybe 14 at a push. Therefore, every lawyer who works there are close with each-other. Recently, Ursula joined and has been working there happily for 6 months, however, she has noticed something strange about Victor Savage, and his fixation with a certain prosecutor, Kane Capello. Ursula decides to investigate, and before she knows it, Kane Capello is assigned prosecutor for almost all of her cases she takes. She knows theres something fishy going on around here, and decides to take her investigation one step up!

The rest would be spoilers for my fangame//comic in development. I hope to get other characters up here as well.

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Re: The (not so) Wonderful World of Romeo's art!Topic%20Title

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Without a description I was a bit at loss at what to say ^^; Sorry ^^;

So, she's bear themed, huh? It'd be nice to see more bear in her- maybe if she carried a bear, or had bear print on her clothes... perhaps some hairy trim on her outfit. Right now she has a standard lawyer outfit. This is ok- I mean, there's alot of Ace Attorney characters that don't have a hugely visual theme, but they're also not named after their theme. I think if being a bear and protective is so much part of her personality that it should shine through. Does her sprites act 'bearish'? Perhaps her hair is big and shaggy to make her seem a bit bear shaped in the head even though she' she's obviously not. I'm not sure how to combine bear and lawyer together. I'll have to make concept sketches.

I... have some other critique for her personality and back story, but that is a little out of the way of what you're asking about. If you want me to comment on it, I will. I know that it's harder to get character personality crit than it is to get art crit cause they're your 'babies'.
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Hey, I know she needs a LOT of character development. The very story right there will definetley NOT be the final version, because there are so many flaws in it >,> ... except for the bare bones, i.e; being very protective of Alec, working for Victor Savage, etc.

I guess I could make her more bear - like. This was my first rough sketch of her other than just headhsots, so I really didn't have much to go on. I think I might try doing some concept art of her with shaggier hair and maybe a smaller nose and ears like bears have.
I'm not sure what you mean by a 'hairy trim' on her outfit...but yes, I suppose I could incorporate Bears more into her clothes.

Yes, her sprites will be based on bears action. When she objects, she would roar it with her eyes closed, and I'd like to make some sprites of her pawing the air, maybe her nose as well. I guess I might have to study bear mannerisms and see how it goes.
To be honest, this is my first real Ace Attorney OC that has had this much thought put into them. I'd love any criticisms you have. Be harsh. You know I have never minded with my artwork, and although it might be a litle more harsh to get your own 'children' criticized, it's vital so i can make her a better character!
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As I said- character traits of OCs are WAY more personal than the art of them. I'm not sure why- perhaps the fear of having a Mary Sue is stronger than having too large of an arm or something. If you want me to talk personality traits, give me a PM and I have a few thoughts cause there's a few things that currently don't make sense to me right now. If you say she's under developed then that makes sense. IT may just be background stuff I'm missing. I think I have a grasp of her character though. I don't want to talk about her here cause a- this is an art thread, and b- spoilers for an upcoming game :)

I'm glad to hear her sprites are based on bear actions. That'll bring out her character alot :) The fur trim I mean is like Lang's jacket, how the collar is furry. It doesn't have to be the collar- some materials are textured with soft fur like velvet and some leathers. The other option of a bear colour scheme isn't so good cause of the colour scheme Ace attorney works at. They have alot of bright colours.

Well, since she's a hero, I'd suggest that you make her dominantly primary colours. I'm not sure why the primaries are recognised as heroic colours atleast in english speaking countries (Perhaps cause of the union jack?). This is why I changed my OC Zeth Gant's costume into a primary coloured one. Secondary colours suggest a villian, or someone that isn't what they seem. Case- Diego is in primary (red), while Godot is in secondary (green). Secondary colours happen to be opposite colours to primaries which is also why it work PARTICULARLY well with him :)

Don't get suckered into a red or blue outfit just cause others do though. Try yellow too and see if that works, but be carefull that you don't mix it too much with secondarys or it may turn into a villian yellow. Yellow is so light it can be either >.> IT'd be a great challenge to make a hero out of a colour like yellow though. I'd avoid red as her animations will be pretty scary with it (Unless you particularly wanted it.). Red is a colour for passion, but it can also easily be a representation of anger also.

The primary secondary rules aren't clean fast, but if you want a guide, they work well for lead characters in games :) Black and white also have a few rules. Try not to use black (dark gray) on your lead character. Black is a draining colour in a game, and dark blue / purple are better choices (for outfits). Mia works well with black because she ends up dying in the game- we know this, Shelly De Killer wears black cause he's an assassin... I can't think of any more characters that wear mostly black... White is also another to watch cause it can wash the character out. Obviously in cases like Iris and Sister Bikini where the outfit IRL is white you'd use it (Even then it's only the hood), but otherwise, it's a complementary colour to lighten a darker outfit. I wouldn't use it for a dominant colour otherwise.

Tell me, are you limited to recolouring and modifying previous sprites for her outfit? Or can you do outfits from scratch? There's a large variation of female suits out there to try with her. Just thought I'd ask
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Wow, I never really thought of colours in that way, but now you're saying it, it makes a lot of sense... Viola wears black, and look at her character.
I chose blue and orange for her suit, because the colours go well with each other, but I guess that can be easily changed. Originally in even earlier sketches, she had the same outfit but with a black suit and a red shirt / skirt, however that looked way too dark and 'spooky' colours for the main character, so I opted for lighter colours.

I can try yellow, I might as well, just to see where it goes. It's quite hard to get colours right. I've been designing the 'Final Boss' for the game, and he has a lot of Green and Purple on him, because those are the two colours I know people often associate with villains.

Well, I'm not really a dab hand at spriting, myself, however to the limit of my power it's mainly taking bits and pieces from other sprites and editing them slightly. I have tried to do scratch outfits in the past on another characters base body, however they always turn out really misshapen and look clunky. I was hoping to get some help on the sprites, when the time is right.
I'll PM you on details about the character...I know her story right now is sounding typical of a main character, used to be street, rose above it all...it's a side of the story that needs work.
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Coolies. I'll see if I can help there :) BTW, when you do your sprite concepts, try your best to get a solid colour with the pencils. I know you may not have the colour range required, but even something close will give you a better idea how they'll work as the sprite. Maybe scan your linearts as black and white and flood fill them in paint or something. It's hard to tell with washed out colours how they'll look.

I'll reply to your pm when I can. I'm pretty exhausted right now, but I can think of a few ideas. I have a few questions about direction for her that I'd need to ask first though cause she's trying to accomplish alot of things at once. That's all for the PMS though :) Till then ^^
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Oh- you found the liquify tool :D That one can be a powerful tool when used right *nods* If you want a tip, don't give fire black borders. I usually border mine with white if I draw it. IT's best to fade it out if your background is white :) Almost, less is more with comic art. It's best to simplify the shape unless you have a reason for bumps and creases. An absent bump is less noticeable than an incorrect one. I thought I'd meantion that cause her dress doesn't really sit right. She definitly looks pretty pleased in herself though :) Enjoying the tablet I take it?
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Arkillian wrote:
Oh- you found the liquify tool :D That one can be a powerful tool when used right *nods* If you want a tip, don't give fire black borders. I usually border mine with white if I draw it. IT's best to fade it out if your background is white :) Almost, less is more with comic art. It's best to simplify the shape unless you have a reason for bumps and creases. An absent bump is less noticeable than an incorrect one. I thought I'd meantion that cause her dress doesn't really sit right. She definitly looks pretty pleased in herself though :) Enjoying the tablet I take it?


Thanks for the tips! I really enjoyed trying out all the tools. I thought the liquefy would be a good effect for fire, and looked up a few tutorials on DeviantArt. I'll have to try white borders at some point. That seems like a better way to make it more wispy and light.

Her dress was a little hard to draw and I tried looking up some fabric tutorials and discovered an art book we have in our house with some that I tried taking some hints from.
And yes the tablet is really cool. It's a shame I haven't been able to use it much considering all the school exams right now, but I've got an idea for a drawing in my head that I'd like to try and draw and digitalize.
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Fire is a red hot gas so the gas goes straight up unless wind currents disturb it. Your liquify needs to push the flames up and in broad licks. check out some photos of flames and you'll see what I mean.

Fabric, unless its a stiff netting or something light and strong tends to hang out with gravity. I suggest going off a referance and studying how fabric falls in that by drawing it to compliment the study. Not making it up as you go. Knowing how folds work is great knowledge for understanding what you're drawing. Knowing where to put them comes from practise though, and if you practise wrong then it's apparently with clothing, It's all to do with the body underneath. Once you can draw fabric on a body then you're set :)
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