1. You will quickly notice that the whole reason for the utilization of second person POV was to hide the fact that I don't know how to properly use descriptive language.
2. Also, second person POV.
3. Does psychotherapy not exist in this world? Is Lana really going to leave her sister to deal with her trauma by letting her sit in her room and mope, possibly letting the brain's natural fondness for self blame take over?
4. A court summons is a court summons. You can't say it's only a half.
5. Nothing in the game actually says that Ema was called to the witness stand after being questioned by Goodman. I just kinda went with that idea because the flashback shows her standing in a courtroom, which was probably only done so no one would have to draw the questioning room.
6. There's also no establishment of where the defendant's chair is located in the main series. AAI says it's right in front of the judge's bench, though you never actually see a defendant sit there.
7. This takes place in 2015. What teenager still gets their news from television?
8. For that matter, why is she looking at news at all? Usually after a traumatic event, those involved tend to stay away from any reminders of the event, including news reports. Ghost Trick got that one right.
9. The setup for the last scene is a ripoff from another fic that I would post a link to and tell you to read instead, but it's been taken down.
10. "Demon Prosecutor Edgeworth tries to comfort young girl because he's reminded of DL-6" cliche.
11. "Powerless." Roll credits.
12. Everyone just kinda forgot that Pess existed. Was he completely silent while those two shared a moment?
13. I regret including that last line.