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Dates With Dollie *TAT SPOILERS*Topic%20Title

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Hey people just thought I'd write a fanfiction. This is a short story about Feenie's first date with Dahlia(i.e. Iris) and is told from her point of view.
=D I hope you enjoy it. If you do, I could write more.
Here goes....

Iris: (I'm really nervous... But I'm glad too. If I can get this guy to give "that" back, nothing will happen. Ahh! There he is! He hasn't noticed me yet... Now that I see him close up... he's quite cute. *blush* Oh no! He's noticed me! Why are my hands sweating...?)
Phoenix: Uh... H-hey, Dollie!
Iris: (He looks nervous too... Phew) F-feenie... Hello!
Phoenix: Well, will we go?
Iris: Where are we going?
Phoenix: A walk in the park of course! Have you forgotten already, Dollie?
Iris: (Dahlia could have told me ALL the details...) N-no! I'm just, it's just... I'm a bit nervous.
Phoenix: There's no time to be nervous! We're young and lovey-dovey! W-well, I am anyway...
Iris: Um... Yes! (I'm still nervous though...)
Iris: Umm... Feenie?
Phoenix Yes?
Iris: That pendant... Can I Have it back now?
Phoenix: D-do you... Not like me anymore? *Cries*
Iris: N-no! (He's so sensitive!) It-its just....
Phoenix: Well if you still like me then you can't have it. It's a symbol of our love! I'm going to show it to everyone!
Iris: (No... Don't do that! Dahlia would never forgive me! I guess I'll try again...)


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And the rest, as they say, is history.

Well, did you like?
Re: Dates With Dollie *TAT SPOILERS*Topic%20Title
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Four is Death

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Um... sorry, but most people don't generally accept script form round here. ^^;
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I dont care... it seems more Phoenix Wright with script.
Otherwise it is unreal.
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I like it, but... eh, see above.
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