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As to not fill the screen with this big picture file, please click here to see it directly. Leave feedback please, I am open to suggestions.
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Rookie Killer I: Maya Fey - Townie (Hit Night 2) : ???
Last edited by Ghaleon von Karma on Sun May 11, 2008 1:39 am, edited 1 time in total.
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By the way...Yay! Another von Karma fan!! (we're rising up to take control! ...don't mind me...just a tad bit crazy!)
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Don't mind at all... can't be a von Karma fan if you aren't just a little nutty
. Thanks for the feedback!
CR Mafia VI: Vanilla - Townie (Hit Night 7) : WIN
Rookie Killer I: Maya Fey - Townie (Hit Night 2) : ???
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Don't mind at all... can't be a von Karma fan if you aren't just a little nutty
. Thanks for the feedback!Haha, no problem! You're right. We all need to be a little crazy!
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This is a great edit/re-coloring. My only suggestion would be regarding his "normal" look, the one in the top row. I've noticed in my own work with VK that his forehead is waaaay too short to look remotely functional. It doesn't take that much work to raise it, and I'd suggest doing that to correct the problem that was there in the first place. Then again, I'm picky as all get out, so that may not bug *anyone* but me. :/
Good job!
Sprites for VKCA
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This is a great edit/re-coloring. My only suggestion would be regarding his "normal" look, the one in the top row. I've noticed in my own work with VK that his forehead is waaaay too short to look remotely functional. It doesn't take that much work to raise it, and I'd suggest doing that to correct the problem that was there in the first place. Then again, I'm picky as all get out, so that may not bug *anyone* but me. :/
Good job!
I think it just might be a perspective look, since his forehead looks fine with the other sprites. That's just my opinion. Thanks for the feedback though, glad you like it
CR Mafia VI: Vanilla - Townie (Hit Night 7) : WIN
Rookie Killer I: Maya Fey - Townie (Hit Night 2) : ???
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Thank you, I do plan to work harder on future edits and creations. Didn't know there was an OC contest. Perhaps I will keep this in mind for future reference and submit one when I become better at this. ^.^
CR Mafia VI: Vanilla - Townie (Hit Night 7) : WIN
Rookie Killer I: Maya Fey - Townie (Hit Night 2) : ???
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Thank you for comment and for asking, and yes you may use him
Comedic comic huh? I was thinking about doing some sprite comic. Hmmm...I want to see what you make when you are done, if you don't mind. It sounds exciting for someone to already wishing to use him so soon.
CR Mafia VI: Vanilla - Townie (Hit Night 7) : WIN
Rookie Killer I: Maya Fey - Townie (Hit Night 2) : ???
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example:
Ghaleon: I've got you now, takazato! It'll be my hand that defeats you!
Keisuke: .... That coming from someone's name that sounds like Galleon. Bring it.
Ghaleon: ...
Keisuke: It's ridge racer.
Or something like that. Either way, your VK looks awesome. I personally look forward to adding him. Link to my manga is in the sig. In the Lucario to be more precise.
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example:
Ghaleon: I've got you now, takazato! It'll be my hand that defeats you!
Keisuke: .... That coming from someone's name that sounds like Galleon. Bring it.
Ghaleon: ...
Keisuke: It's ridge racer.
Or something like that. Either way, your VK looks awesome. I personally look forward to adding him. Link to my manga is in the sig. In the Lucario to be more precise.
Actually, that sounds very much what I wanted him to be, evil and funny. I saw the first five pages already and I cannot wait to see what you have planned in the overall scheme of things to come. Again, thank you for the distinct honor.
CR Mafia VI: Vanilla - Townie (Hit Night 7) : WIN
Rookie Killer I: Maya Fey - Townie (Hit Night 2) : ???
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