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Hey, PxM! Yeah, I'm back, and I've actually got a LOOOOT of slogans that I made in my time off of the forums... so I'll have to post them eventually! Heh!
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Heh. My sig is OOOOLD! I have to contact Elriel soon for a new one, I'd think... *Checks for a good slogan to use*
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Here are some a randomly them together (some may be spoliers, so I put em in this thing anyway):

Spoiler:
:will: Silver Samurai by day, crazy bed-head when he's not acting.
:jake: Jake Marshal, Emo Texas Ranger, Chuck Norris approved.
:payne: When you have hair troubbles, get Payne.
:meekins: The offical GS Rock Lee look-alike.
:grey: House, only with a knowlage of medical ethics.
:grossburg: The offical preperation "H" spokesman.
:maggy: Feeling lucky? Then go on a date with this one.
:damon: To convict a murderer, you must become a murderer.
:godot: Dunken doughnuts fears me!
:yogi: Noodles are yummy, but revenge is so much sweeter.
:udgy: A fine exaple of what good a hedge clipper could fix.
:pearl: The official mini mouse look-alike.
:keiko: When microsoft can't do it, Bluescreens inc can, dispite the name.
:phoenix: The offical lawyer of the Justice League.
:edgeworth: Forging ahead with forged evidence.
:franny: When foolishly foolish fools are at your door, use whip, foolishly foolish fool repellant.
:shoe: Meow meow meow moew meow! Meow mix! Meow meow meow!
:sawit: The offical paperboy of the Republican.
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These seem more like Advertisements...
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*glomps the topic*

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:franny: Perfection is an eternal struggle.

:grossburg: With age comes lemons.

:uramidn: Sex and death.

:hobohodo: Behold the Magic Hobo!

:keiko: Don't be blue. That's our job.

:udgy: A tabula-rasa is easiest to write on.

:moe-laugh: The comedian is often the best observer.

:chef: Flair to replace skill.

:olga-quick: Appearances are everything.

:gant: I am the Law.
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I need more GS4 ones! *starts thinking*
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Will these do?

Spoiler: GS4, because I feel like it
:hobohodo: Lies can be used to expose the truth as well as conceal it.

:sassy: All things are mechanical. You just need to find their parts.

:Brush-Sniff: The relentless annoy as much as they impress.

:Temsai: An iron fist tends to crush all it holds.

:payne-stroke: A bright crest can only scare predators, not cut them.

:odoroki: Fight for your name, or become part of another's.

:pft: Style can only get you so far.

:kyouya-pull: Flair can conceal something darker.

:olga-quick: Those who play the game risk losing everything.

And my favorite, because it's a tear-jerker:

:minuki: How much can you lose before you break?

Lisa Basil: Very Blue :keiko:

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I made a sliiiiiightly similar one to Olga's, for April, but it relied more on LOOKS than the game itself...
Spoiler: 4-1 spoilers
and she never exactly LOSES on the game, she's a pro dealer...

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Wrestlemania wrote:
I made a sliiiiiightly similar one to Olga's, for April, but it relied more on LOOKS than the game itself...
Spoiler: 4-1 spoilers
and she never exactly LOSES on the game, she's a pro dealer...


Spoiler: 4-1
But she gets involved in the scam to make Phoenix looks like a cheater. And that results in Shadi hitting her in the head with a grape-juice bottle in a way that could have easily killed her, and nearly gets her wrongfully convicted for killing Shadi. Hence 'playing the game' and 'risking losing everything'

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Bossmuff wrote:
Wrestlemania wrote:
I made a sliiiiiightly similar one to Olga's, for April, but it relied more on LOOKS than the game itself...
Spoiler: 4-1 spoilers
and she never exactly LOSES on the game, she's a pro dealer...


Spoiler: 4-1
But she gets involved in the scam to make Phoenix looks like a cheater. And that results in Shadi hitting her in the head with a grape-juice bottle in a way that could have easily killed her, and nearly gets her wrongfully convicted for killing Shadi. Hence 'playing the game' and 'risking losing everything'


Perhaps... Allow me to clarify my stance on EACH of them now. My replies to each lie UNDER each, after the word "Note":

Wrestlemania made notes on each of the slogans of Bossmuff, who wrote:
Spoiler: GS4, because I feel like it
. :hobohodo: Lies can be used to expose the truth as well as conceal it.

Note: This one in particular isn't exactly "clear"... For most slogans, they have to have clear meanings, and be easy to relate to... Technically, he never LIED in 4-1, even when it came to the "evidence" he presented... he DOES say "It's mine" at the start, does he not?

:sassy: All things are mechanical. You just need to find their parts.

Note: I prefer "The passion in one's heart can overcome any worldly obstacle"... Yours sounds a bit more suitable to Lisa Basil, oddly (Since then it's not a slogan...).

:Brush-Sniff: The relentless annoy as much as they impress.

Note: ... Alright, you got me there, but can you honestly see BRUSHEL believing in that? Not to berate your example (Since they're really good!) but most of the slogans I make tend to be something I can imagine the character they're designed for, believing in it as well... Perhaps it should be something more like "Those who never quit will always see success, among an ocean of failed attempts" ......... end quote. *shot*

:Temsai: An iron fist tends to crush all it holds.

Note: ... Wait, what? I don't even get this one, honestly... could you perhaps clarify your reasoning?

:payne-stroke: A bright crest can only scare predators, not cut them.

Note: I LOVE the meaning behind this one! The only problem is, he doesn't exactly scare ANYONE with his tactics... heck, the witnesses tend to be more threatening to Apollo than he is, exp., when Payne talks about the murder weapon for the last time... Anyways, one that is quite similar and, perhaps, more suitable, would be "You can always change the look of anything to make it appear better, but it will always be the same as it ever was before."... It's a but too "broad" with my terminology, but you get the point, right? :gymshoe:

:odoroki: Fight for your name, or become part of another's.

Note: The first part is GREAT for him, but "or become part of another's" sounds more like it's saying "Fight for what you believe in, or adopt another's beliefs!" which is pretty contradictory, in a way... I can't think of any alternative though...

:pft: Style can only get you so far.

Note: Wait, this would go with a LOT of characters! Edgeworth, von Karma (both), Godot, Redd, Gant, etc. ... Also, it sounds a bit similar to my April May one as WELL... though hers had more to do with "looks" than "style"...

:kyouya-pull: Flair can conceal something darker.

Note: This sounds like my original idea for Moe the Clown, but it's very suitable for Klavier... the only problem is, most Prosecutors share this one, such as Godot, Edgeworth, or Manfred... is there anything you can think of to make this more personal for Klavier himself?

:olga-quick: Those who play the game risk losing everything.

Note: Wait, didn't Phoenix... never mind, I'll end up with a headache if I try going down that road...

And my favorite, because it's a tear-jerker:

:minuki: How much can you lose before you break?

Note: Anyone with a "Breakdown" can be considered able to use this one... But Trucy... hmm... I honestly don't see it a whole lot, since she loses some things, sure, but she also gains a lot of things as well, doesn't she?


So that's my opinion on each of yours. Regardless of my stance, each of them, I find, are suitable to the characters you gave them each to, to some degree... with the lone exception of Magnifi, of course... I may seem cruel, but the more explanitory I am, the more you can tell I have faith in your abilities, and admire your skill in the craft... Very nicely done, ese!
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Wrestlemania wrote:
Perhaps... Allow me to clarify my stance on EACH of them now. My replies to each lie UNDER each, after the word "Note":

Wrestlemania made notes on each of the slogans of Bossmuff, who wrote:
Spoiler: GS4, because I feel like it
. :hobohodo: Lies can be used to expose the truth as well as conceal it.

Note: This one in particular isn't exactly "clear"... For most slogans, they have to have clear meanings, and be easy to relate to... Technically, he never LIED in 4-1, even when it came to the "evidence" he presented... he DOES say "It's mine" at the start, does he not?

:sassy: All things are mechanical. You just need to find their parts.

Note: I prefer "The passion in one's heart can overcome any worldly obstacle"... Yours sounds a bit more suitable to Lisa Basil, oddly (Since then it's not a slogan...).

:Brush-Sniff: The relentless annoy as much as they impress.

Note: ... Alright, you got me there, but can you honestly see BRUSHEL believing in that? Not to berate your example (Since they're really good!) but most of the slogans I make tend to be something I can imagine the character they're designed for, believing in it as well... Perhaps it should be something more like "Those who never quit will always see success, among an ocean of failed attempts" ......... end quote. *shot*

:Temsai: An iron fist tends to crush all it holds.

Note: ... Wait, what? I don't even get this one, honestly... could you perhaps clarify your reasoning?

:payne-stroke: A bright crest can only scare predators, not cut them.

Note: I LOVE the meaning behind this one! The only problem is, he doesn't exactly scare ANYONE with his tactics... heck, the witnesses tend to be more threatening to Apollo than he is, exp., when Payne talks about the murder weapon for the last time... Anyways, one that is quite similar and, perhaps, more suitable, would be "You can always change the look of anything to make it appear better, but it will always be the same as it ever was before."... It's a but too "broad" with my terminology, but you get the point, right? :gymshoe:

:odoroki: Fight for your name, or become part of another's.

Note: The first part is GREAT for him, but "or become part of another's" sounds more like it's saying "Fight for what you believe in, or adopt another's beliefs!" which is pretty contradictory, in a way... I can't think of any alternative though...

:pft: Style can only get you so far.

Note: Wait, this would go with a LOT of characters! Edgeworth, von Karma (both), Godot, Redd, Gant, etc. ... Also, it sounds a bit similar to my April May one as WELL... though hers had more to do with "looks" than "style"...

:kyouya-pull: Flair can conceal something darker.

Note: This sounds like my original idea for Moe the Clown, but it's very suitable for Klavier... the only problem is, most Prosecutors share this one, such as Godot, Edgeworth, or Manfred... is there anything you can think of to make this more personal for Klavier himself?

:olga-quick: Those who play the game risk losing everything.

Note: Wait, didn't Phoenix... never mind, I'll end up with a headache if I try going down that road...

And my favorite, because it's a tear-jerker:

:minuki: How much can you lose before you break?

Note: Anyone with a "Breakdown" can be considered able to use this one... But Trucy... hmm... I honestly don't see it a whole lot, since she loses some things, sure, but she also gains a lot of things as well, doesn't she?


So that's my opinion on each of yours. Regardless of my stance, each of them, I find, are suitable to the characters you gave them each to, to some degree... with the lone exception of Magnifi, of course... I may seem cruel, but the more explanitory I am, the more you can tell I have faith in your abilities, and admire your skill in the craft... Very nicely done, ese!


Someone is paying attention to me! That means I don't have to start posting horrifying pictures! :damon:

Thanks for the critiques. I don't particularly mind if you don't agree or have opinions on my stuff, and it's always fun to debate them. As such, I have my own responses:

Spoiler: Response next to the character it regards
:hobohodo: 'Lies' is a strong word. Perhaps 'deception' would be better, but it doesn't have as much of a sharp contradiction to it. I think using 'lie' in a slightly exaggerated sense works, as the evidence itself is a lie even if Phoenix weaved around lying himself.

I don't really think they have to be entirely forward in their statement. Some ambiguity is fine, particularly to make the slogan more thought-provoking.

:sassy: I did this one because of Ema's belief in science, and that all things can be understood by observing the the components. Scientific observation is about looking at the parts to find the whole, and Ema does that through forensic investigation. She seems to see crime as a 'mechanism' with parts leading to other parts.

Lisa doesn't really say anything that makes the statement applicable to her, in my mind. Her motif is that she looks like an android and is about customer service, and that doesn't 'finding the parts' to me. The first part might work.

:Brush-Sniff: I thought of the slogans as also being something people attribute to the character, rather than only something the sloganized believes.

Yours works for him, though, and I like it.

:Temsai: This one was really abstract. My logic was that Magnifi kept rigid control on Zak and Valant through his blackmail and mind-games, and that this eventually resulted in both being destroyed. It's a bit indirect, but I prefer to be abstract and I think it's clear enough.

:payne-stroke: I see. However, Payne attempts to appear the tough, vetern lawyer as part of his tactics, without the ability to back it up. Once again, it's a bit more abstract than you may think is suitable for a slogan. I think it's fine, because Payne does present points and seems to be an antagonist, though it becomes quickly apparant that it's all for show.

:odoroki: The second half is meant to be contradictory. In one sense, it suggests that if he doesn't fight to make a name for himself as a lawyer, he's doomed to just become 'Kristoph's protege' or 'Phoenix's protege'. In another sense, it draws light to how he's trying to emulate Phoenix (he idolized him initially and still does in a way, and attempts to emulate his courtroom presence, such as the "Objection!") and may need to make his own style to become truly great.

:pft: Since Kristoph is heavily based around style, it becomes a key point for him. He's also quite competant, so the style isn't just his only strong point - people might underestimate him for that.

:kyouya-pull: Well, it's exceptionally true for Klavier, because he seems so together and seems to be the most honest prosecutor. This hides his guilt over the one case, which we don't get an impression of until the issue comes up.

Perhaps: "The showman always makes the face that fits the act." Which also works for Moe, though Moe was more open about his feelings than Klavier.

:olga-quick: I stand by this one and my initial argument for it. It also works because she attempted to put Phoenix in a losing position, when he (unknowingly) gambled by accepting the challenge. However, she ended up taking an gamble with the ploy, failed, and nearly died and nearly was convicted for it.

You could add "even if they don't know they're playing." or "even if you don't know the stakes." to the end, especially since she didn't know how much of a gamble she was taking with the plan.

:minuki: Trucy always struck me as a lot more fragile and her gains a lot more tenuous than people think. She's lost both parents, one seven years after he had abandoned her and vanished and confirmed without room for doubt, and the other members of her troupe. She expresses genuine fear over losing Phoenix, and doesn't seem to really open up to Apollo as much as she could (or to anyone else, not even Phoenix). I get the impression she honestly is unsure of whether her new family will disappear as well, and she's developed enough of attachment to Phoenix that him vanishing from her life, especially abruptly, would be devastating. She's perservered through her loss, but its unclear if she'll be able to sustain that if further loss happens (like if Thalassa actually dying, or Phoenix dying or disappearing). I could see Trucy thinking this herself, as she has the fear of future loss and hides that fear.

I did another one for her early on, which was along the lines of "For the performer, the smile doesn't have to be real". This isn't verbatim, but I like this better than what I remember I used. I think the one I used here was better, though, because it was more pointed.

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