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Okay, I got a prototype thingy of the witness up. I'm pretty happy with him except for the hair, so when I continue working on him, it will be changed. But it will still be extremely messy. And spiky.

Spoiler: Warning! Extreme hairstyle inside!
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Yeah >_> Like I said, it's only a prototype, but I thought I'd post it for you guys to see for now, since I can't be on.

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The hair will definetaly be made into something prettier, I promise 8D


Oh, and he won't have a single happy sprite :grey: No, he's not emo, it only happened to be that the victim was a friend of his :eh?:
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Awesome sprite! *thumbs up* Although, just a few things. He's a bit curvy for a guy (Witness' hips don't lie...), so push his waist out a little ^^. Also, his eyes....Maybe it's the hair, but his eyes look a bit weird o.o. But other than that, it's perfect! :3
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Just so you guys know, all animations need to be centered on a 256x192 sized background and need to be transparent so they will be compatible with Mecha Bowser's case maker.
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:D!

Do you all really like the security guard lady!? She's the first PW sprite I've ever done. I'm proud of myself~ And for other poses for Nouta...umm...exaggerated crying, like Pearl's crying animation, maybe?

And I can't see the witness's sprite D: Can you post a link, please?
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Cevian wrote:
Just so you guys know, all animations need to be centered on a 256x192 sized background and need to be transparent so they will be compatible with Mecha Bowser's case maker.

Thanks for the insight Cevian! :edgy: I'll be sure to make them the right sizes ^^


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Do you all really like the security guard lady!? She's the first PW sprite I've ever done. I'm proud of myself~ And for other poses for Nouta...umm...exaggerated crying, like Pearl's crying animation, maybe?
WOW Really?! O____O You're good! Yeah, I was thinking an angry one myself, but that works too! :D
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An angry one would work, too. :3 (But I've done Fire Emblem sprites before, too. I just needed to play around a bit to see how to make PW sprites because there's more colors in them.)
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Mast3r Riku wrote:
Awesome sprite! *thumbs up* Although, just a few things. He's a bit curvy for a guy (Witness' hips don't lie...), so push his waist out a little ^^. Also, his eyes....Maybe it's the hair, but his eyes look a bit weird o.o. But other than that, it's perfect! :3


Woops, I meant to do that, but I forgot :payne: Blame :matt: though! XD Trust me, the eyes looked even weirder without his hair :P

EDIT: I had some time left this morning, so I went and fixed it up :P He's not too curvy anymore and I changed his eyes. And edited the hair.

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The tuft of hair was kinda random, I guess. I just put it there because it looked kinda bland.

He needs a name though. I'm not good at coming up with names :sadshoe:

Well, I'm off to school, and I won't be on more today. Bye!

EDIT: De-spoilered it. I can't see images inside Spoiler tags anymore. Does anyone else have that problem? :eh?

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Like an idiot I realized just now that I could get the URL by quoting your post. :sadshoe: But I think the sprite's great! ^__^ His hair is extreme, but that makes it exciting~ I was originally going to give the victim highlights or make the ends of her hair a different color, but it'd be too complicated (in other words I'm lazy and I don't want it to be too hard if anyone ever makes a sprite of her).

...wait...the thing that wins this case is a wig, right? O__o What's with this case and hair?
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Speaking of the wig, exactly what sort of movement do you want to trigger the realization? Panya surprise animation renders the wig airborne and it falls back onto her head in the correct position? Panya pulls down her hat and the wig slides into correct position, thus looking similar to Kyouya's "HEADACHE!" animation? (It screams headache to me...)
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Timcampy-chan wrote:
...wait...the thing that wins this case is a wig, right? O__o What's with this case and hair?


Not to mention that Kyouya's in it, and we all know how awesome his hair is. :kyouya:

And the murderer should have blue hair or something, right?

You're right, it's 'Turnabout Hair'! o.O
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Arutica wrote:
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The tuft of hair was kinda random, I guess. I just put it there because it looked kinda bland.

He needs a name though. I'm not good at coming up with names :sadshoe:

EDIT: De-spoilered it. I can't see images inside Spoiler tags anymore. Does anyone else have that problem? :eh?
Yes! That's perfect! ^^ Awesome jorb thar! :will: Hmmm..a name? He needs a pun too it too...We could be lame and call him Spike! XD To me, he looks like a Spike kind of guy ^^. And the pun goes good with his hair >______> Last name? No idea XD

(OMG I have the same problem >___<! I also can't just click quote to quote more people in one message. I actually have to copy and paste the quote and stuff T-T. Anyone have that one?)

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Speaking of the wig, exactly what sort of movement do you want to trigger the realization? Panya surprise animation renders the wig airborne and it falls back onto her head in the correct position? Panya pulls down her hat and the wig slides into correct position, thus looking similar to Kyouya's "HEADACHE!" animation? (It screams headache to me...)
The airborne one would look awesome! But..I don't want to over work you ^^. Which ever one is easier, that's fine ^^

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Timcampy-chan wrote:
...wait...the thing that wins this case is a wig, right? O__o What's with this case and hair?


Not to mention that Kyouya's in it, and we all know how awesome his hair is. :kyouya:

And the murderer should have blue hair or something, right?

You're right, it's 'Turnabout Hair'! o.O
XD Well, it is animu! Crazy hairs everywhere! :godot: :redd: :damon: :phoenix: :hotti: :yuusaku: :odoroki: :kyouya: But Turnabout Hair would be an obvious giveaway (Though, if the murder was at a hairsalon....Joking XD). Speaking of which....We need a Turnabout name! :3 We need something out of the ordinary though, like Recipe for a Turnabout was (I hope a name isn't a spoiler O.o). Like...Like... LET'S ROCK, TURNABOUT! (reference to DMC! Woo!)
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Edit: I love the new GIFs! x3

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Yes! That's perfect! ^^ Awesome jorb thar! :will: Hmmm..a name? He needs a pun too it too...We could be lame and call him Spike! XD To me, he looks like a Spike kind of guy ^^. And the pun goes good with his hair >______> Last name? No idea XD


SPIEGEL! *shot*

Android 21 3/7 wrote:
Speaking of the wig, exactly what sort of movement do you want to trigger the realization? Panya surprise animation renders the wig airborne and it falls back onto her head in the correct position? Panya pulls down her hat and the wig slides into correct position, thus looking similar to Kyouya's "HEADACHE!" animation? (It screams headache to me...)

I think the second one would be easier, and it makes more sense.

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Arutica wrote:
Timcampy-chan wrote:
...wait...the thing that wins this case is a wig, right? O__o What's with this case and hair?


Not to mention that Kyouya's in it, and we all know how awesome his hair is. :kyouya:

And the murderer should have blue hair or something, right?

You're right, it's 'Turnabout Hair'! o.O
XD Well, it is animu! Crazy hairs everywhere! :godot: :redd: :damon: :phoenix: :hotti: :yuusaku: :odoroki: :kyouya: But Turnabout Hair would be an obvious giveaway (Though, if the murder was at a hairsalon....Joking XD). Speaking of which....We need a Turnabout name! :3 We need something out of the ordinary though, like Recipe for a Turnabout was (I hope a name isn't a spoiler O.o). Like...Like... LET'S ROCK, TURNABOUT! (reference to DMC! Woo!)


TO HEAVEN OR HELL LET'S OBJECT! *shot again*

Hmm...Turnabout Masquerade? That's probably too obvious. I have to think about this.
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How about... Obsessive Turnabout, it's fitting and not too revealing.
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Timcampy-chan wrote:
Edit: I love the new GIFs! x3

TO HEAVEN OR HELL LET'S OBJECT! *shot again*

Hmm...Turnabout Masquerade? That's probably too obvious. I have to think about this.

This case has to have as many DMC references as we can XD. Because DMC is awesome :3
Like...:
1) The prosecutor: "Kyouya must die...."
2)Kyouya's guitar would be the 'Nevan'
3)PIZZA!
4)The washroom is always in the back
4)And Ebony and Ivory just have to mentioned somewhere! :godot:
There's so many more I could think of XD
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Timcampy-chan wrote:
Android 21 3/7 wrote:
Speaking of the wig, exactly what sort of movement do you want to trigger the realization? Panya surprise animation renders the wig airborne and it falls back onto her head in the correct position? Panya pulls down her hat and the wig slides into correct position, thus looking similar to Kyouya's "HEADACHE!" animation? (It screams headache to me...)

I think the second one would be easier, and it makes more sense.


Actually, the first one is easier than you think. Really, how it would happen depends on who is questioning her and how they're doing it.

As for a title, how about "Turnabout Turntable"? *hit by Zenitora's moped*
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Android, you should go with the second, it's better. (I don't think this because I suggested it >>)
Because if the shock would flip it, the wig wouldn't be very messed up in the first place unless Panya goes OMGWTFJUMPACK.

Third witness name...I will get back to you on that. I might come up with something. :yuusaku:
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Arutica wrote:
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The tuft of hair was kinda random, I guess. I just put it there because it looked kinda bland.


Looks like Jio Freed. :|
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Android 21 3/7 wrote:
As for a title, how about "Turnabout Turntable"? *hit by Zenitora's moped*

Turnabout Turntable? O.o Where did Turntable come from? Unless I'm forgetting something @_@
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<< Nowhere... I just thought it'd sound cool... You know? Something music related...
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OHHHHH! Like a DJ! Now I get it! XD Damn, I'm slow >_<

Lookie who's here :3 It's our friendly neighbourhood murderer, Juliara!
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omg the animations are cute!! Can I kill Marc? Can I?? CAN I??
uhm, anyway, I see you're gonna make a case. Can you tell me teh details? Sorry, I'm just too lazy to see the previous pages =P
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Mast3r Riku wrote:
OHHHHH! Like a DJ! Now I get it! XD Damn, I'm slow >_<

Lookie who's here :3 It's our friendly neighbourhood murderer, Juliara!
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I'd hit that like Mia.

... Okay, maybe not. Actually, it's not bad. The glasses don't look like they're going to stay on her head for too long, though, and the white ribbon on her outfit looks like a cotton ball. It's still pretty good, though.

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Is that Minami's scarf thing around her neck?

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Juliara is AWESOME! <33

I also made a Court Record-style headshot sprite of Elaine Watson.

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I see dead people. *plank'd* But I think she looks a little too much like Adrian. Any suggestions on how to make her more individual? Oh, and Turnabout Turntable sounds cool, but it could fit the case better.

Random case name suggestions (a lot of these are horrible DD:):
Rockin' Turnabout
Love Love Turnabout (Garyuu Wave has a song called Love Love Guilty, right?)
To Heaven or Hell, Let's Turnabout!
Turnabout Fandom
Turnabout: Live in Concert! or Turnabout Live!
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Oooo! "Turnabout Live!" I like the sound of that!
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I like how the Juliara sprite is looking so far. I assume this is when she is in court and not being her usual tomboy self.
Props to Clicky for the avatar! =3
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Orcaizer Al wrote:
I'd hit that like Mia.

... Okay, maybe not. Actually, it's not bad. The glasses don't look like they're going to stay on her head for too long, though, and the white ribbon on her outfit looks like a cotton ball. It's still pretty good, though.

Spoiler:
Is that Minami's scarf thing around her neck?


Yeah, Her head looked really plain, so I lazily put Ema's glasses on her. I'll make them look better now.
White Ribbon? Cotton ball? Do you mean the butterfly zipper? o.o
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Nope! It's Lana's muffler! XD


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Oooo! "Turnabout Live!" I like the sound of that!
I second that! :D It's Awesome!

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I like how the Juliara sprite is looking so far. I assume this is when she is in court and not being her usual tomboy self
Yup! :D I had the image in my head for a long time, so I did it! ^^ Oh! Would you ever see her in her tomboy-ness form? o.o
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Okay, this was hard, but totally worth it :3 It's a work in progress, but tell me what you think so far (Espically you, Urby o.o)
ImageIt's Judial! :D

EDIT: Sorry about the double post, I never noticed no one else posted >_<
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Okay, this was hard, but totally worth it :3 It's a work in progress, but tell me what you think so far (Espically you, Urby o.o)
ImageIt's Judial! :D

EDIT: Sorry about the double post, I never noticed no one else posted >_<


I saw that and screamed
"OMG! IT'S GENIS SAGE! <3"

But it's not. ;_; It's awesome though. Great hair. I especially love your first sheet. I don't think I have the patience to sheet a sprite style this large. >_>
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I saw that and screamed
"OMG! IT'S GENIS SAGE! <3"

But it's not. ;_; It's awesome though. Great hair. I especially love your first sheet. I don't think I have the patience to sheet a sprite style this large. >_>

XDD I was thinking the same thing when I was making it! If I just changed the clothes a bit, it could be Genis XD.

Thanks though! ^^ I didn't think I could have made the whole sheet either...but I did @_@
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gzomg you did it <33333 ~

Hearts. Millions (And Millions! [/King Drake]) of hearts ~

You've done a really, really great job on the hair. (Hosnap, are Judial and Genis related!? WATCH HER THROW FIREBALLS k done now)
However, right now she looks like she's doing the 'Princess Di' eyes (...I think that's what they're called?) It looks like her head is tilted downwards and she's looking up.
I think you can make this look a little better by letting a little bit more of her face show on the side. (Either move the hair hugging her face to the side, or get rid of a little bit).
Her shirt has some line kinks in it too, but that's an easy fix.

She also looks a little tall...perhaps because she's older. :yogi:


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Urby wrote:
gzomg you did it <33333 ~

Hearts. Millions (And Millions! [/King Drake]) of hearts ~

You've done a really, really great job on the hair. (Hosnap, are Judial and Genis related!? WATCH HER THROW FIREBALLS k done now)
However, right now she looks like she's doing the 'Princess Di' eyes (...I think that's what they're called?) It looks like her head is tilted downwards and she's looking up.
I think you can make this look a little better by letting a little bit more of her face show on the side. (Either move the hair hugging her face to the side, or get rid of a little bit).
Her shirt has some line kinks in it too, but that's an easy fix.

She also looks a little tall...perhaps because she's older. :yogi:


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:D Yay! Heartsssssssss!
I was mostly going for the hair, trying to get it right. Because that's the most imporant part....somewhat. Now that I look at it, yes, she is doing that looking up thing. I'll be sure to fix it! ^^ And being tall is easy to fix.....Making someone taller on the other hand...O.o
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Oooh, the Judial sprite is very nice! ^__^

(And I'm rooting for Nouta in the OC contest. I think he's in 3rd place right now...? Whatever place he's in, go Otaku-kun~!)
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Wow! I can't believe he's there ^^'! I didn't think he was that good o.o I hope he does good! Go Nouta! *little Nouta flag and big foam finger* My little sprite, growing up so fast...*whipes tear* I'm rooting for him too! But don't think I'm begging for votes o__o Go vote for the one you want! ^o^

(Damn, I want that prize! XD)
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I voted for him :3

Also, about my witness, I need help with some poses idea. I made the talking frames, and his nervous pose should really be some kind of hair drop. And I figured he'd be hiding stuff in his hair >_>

Oh, and he needs a name :P
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You should name him after a hair product. As for poses, one could be hidden evidence popping out of his hair...

Oh! What if Panya stole evidence then stuck it in his hair?! XD
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Schwarz Kopf XDDD

But yeah, I had thought about hidden evidence popping out of his hair, not sure what, though.

How is Panya supposed to hide evidence in his hair? I doubt she'd reach :P
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What about Lor Eale (L'oreal)? XD

He could have been sitting down, or maybe he randomly fell asleep somewhere...I don't know, it was just a thought. ^^;;
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Poses? He needs an angry one, not super pissed, but just a little mad. (Nouta needs one too, which I forgot about o.o What if someone disses Kyouya? D< He's gotta defend his position)

A name? Hmm...Well, what's his personality like? Or does he have a quirk about him? Usually, the names go off of things like that. To me, he looks like a Spike :3. I know that's lame, but it kind of works o.o. Another name I'm thinking of is Win Regine. Okay, your probably asking where it came from. There's a song called "This is the Dream of Win and Regine" which is about these two people in love, just wanting to be left alone. It's a good song, and I just kind of thought that the same thing was happening between Him and the victim. She would be getting publicity (because of her association with Garyuu), and they couldn't really be together a lot. It would be really sad......

or maybe I'm just thinking to much into this.......Win Regine also sounds awesome XD
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That could work. Or we can have two references and call him Win [insert some kind of reference here] :P Defineately needs to be music based though.

Maybe this case could have a flashback session to the night of the concert and you play as the Aide? :P That way I could make some happy sprites for him, since he was a pretty cheerful guy before the murder :P
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Music based names? HOOOOOAAAAARGGGH 8U


I think his last name should be some form of Rubato. (This is a tempo mark meaning 'robbed' - certain notes are extended at the cost of others.)
Because his friend was stolen from him, foreva :<

And his first could be a hair joke. But it's all up to youse guys! :garyuu:
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