Court Records

Hey guys! I'm just posting here to show you guys some sprites that I have been working on and would like to know your opinions. My entry to the dessert themed Comp on AAO Requests:
ApolloRocks: Strawbs2Bananas: dellenXlawyer Timecraked Updates:
Added new sprite sheet and updated front wolfgangs sheet. Will get to posting the animated sprites hopefully soon. 3/12/2014 UK date and time at 1:38am

A marked improvement-- These sprites are a LOT easier on the eyes. However, they're still all too static and flat. They don't have much in the way of life or animation; just a few moved arms here and there and slight expression changes. I think it'd be worth experimenting with some more animated characters to create more dynamic movements and designs. The poses are all basically the same, so a bit of variety, even something as simple as a slight turn, would do wonders for livening up the character.

Of this batch, I'd say Witnesses 1 & 2 are your most interesting designs. They're still pretty clear frankensprites, but they have the most interesting designs that beg a lot of questions, such as "who is this guy? Why is he wearing that? Is he gonna be friend or foe?" Stuff like that.

Sprites I suggest checking out for "motion" and "pose", would be characters like Ron DeLite, Klavier Gavin, Kristoph Gavin (who's all about conveying his personality from behind a single pose), and pretty much anyone from AAI and AAI2.

Good luck!

Thanks! Witness 1 and 2 were both designs I quickly sketched out on the bus on my way to collage to do games, media and animation. After the first trimester I will be in lessons on sprite animations so that would help, also thanks on the tips. look forward to hearing from you and others later.
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Just a quick update, the sprite sheets have been updated.

I'm not a big expert on sprites, so I only can give you my optinion on this. I think the witness-sprites look very interesting, they clearly spread out this interesting-feeling. As for the other sprites, they seem a bit boring to me, rather flat and without any interest. This is only my optinion though! I think the witnesses are the only good sprites made, but the others look great too!

Ok, Updated the title post with two new sprite sheets, one containing 5 charactrs that I will be working ok sometime when Im not working on other projects. Tell me what you think as I am always liking feedback.

Hey guys, just uploaded a new sprite sheet and updated one, all updates and posts shall be in the OP.

Backburner26 wrote:Hey guys! I'm just posting here to show you guys some sprites that I have been working on and would like to know your opinions.

Spoiler: prison chief

Spoiler: Executioner bloke

Spoiler: Witness 1

Spoiler: Witness 2

Spoiler: Front wolfgang

Spoiler: Sum old man defendant

Spoiler: New characters that I am working on:

Spoiler: George Mutee

*He has no talking animations because he is medically mute, Meaning when he talks no noise will form.*

Spoiler: Francis Planque

Updates:
Added new sprite sheet and updated front wolfgangs sheet. Will get to posting the animated sprites hopefully soon. 3/12/2014 UK date and time at 1:38am

Spoiler: 17/11/2014 Uk format, 10:22am

*Added two new sprite sheets, one of up coming characters i'm making. Posted *

Spoiler: Update 9/11/2014 UK time.

*All sprite sheets updated exept from "sum old man defendant". Posted 9/11/2014 22:37pm. Date and time in UK format.*
Updates: Added more poses and tilts to the sprites including updating alot of the shading, I hope they look ok.

Liked the Francis Planque concept, also the fact he has a hook for hand, kinda cool detail.

Thanks bro, Your sprites look great too!

Re done the sprites for CJ.
Here:

Updated the OP

Hey guys, I would just like to announce that I am now doing requests, either request them on the request page or this post and Ill see what I can do.

Updated the requests part of my sprites to add the new sprites for ApolloRocks

Hey guys, just finished animating some of my sheets, ill be posting more as the night goes on. here ya go. Ill also be updating the OP too.

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Naruhodo spritesheet, Used Mijimaru's Naruhodo sprite as a base, He gave permission.

will be adding to it.

Here are the animations.
Great work!

I just cleaned up some lines a little.

Added them to the album. (And I added his defense band to the animation too.

Thanks! They look great!

ok, updating the naruhodo sprite sheet, Mij, do you think you could clean up the sprite a little? Im not too good at tracing whole bodies.

You did the desks-lam one too!
I'd started that one and left it for today to finish XD

The hair and the collar looks great!
I have some tips. If your program can do this, hold the shift key, and just click at each point and it will draw a straight line between them. This can help neaten up lines.
Also try to touch sprites up once you think they're done. This way you can see the image as a whole, and get better at learning what parts you find harder to detail.

Actually this is not a desk slam sprite it's hand on desk sprite since it doesnt show the desk being slammed

So I got bored and decided to make an older wolfgang, what do you think?

Backburner26 wrote:So I got bored and decided to make an older wolfgang, what do you think?

i think the hair must have changed its color since he aged, i think a fantastic 4 kinda hair like the top is the same and the bottom is white-ish.

lx1.ica wrote:

Backburner26 wrote:So I got bored and decided to make an older wolfgang, what do you think?

i think the hair must have changed its color since he aged, i think a fantastic 4 kinda hair like the top is the same and the bottom is white-ish.

Spoiler:

Hair can be dyed, so I don't think that's the best indicator for age.

I think it looks good! Maybe a bit more light on the face, there's too much shadow (wrinkles are kinda hard to shade though )

I decided to add a bit more shading, I hope that improved it a little.

Yup, there's a noticeable difference!
Now his face looks much better!

I dont know weather anyone noticed but I fixed the shading on his body too, Personally i thought it made his chest look too far down.

The face and the tweaked shading are much better !
But I have a problem with the outlines of the suit : They're brighter than they should be. Also, the shading around the tie seems pillow-shaded and therefore weird. You should fix these, that kind of details really makes sprites look "clean" ^^

Ok i darkened up the outlines and fixed up the tie, any better?

is that a scar?

looks good. Although, I'm not a fan of your wolfgang sprites, it still looks good.

lx1.ica wrote:is that a scar?

Yeah it is, its from one of his previous cases in Germany when he was attacked during an investigation of a German restaurant.

Hey guys, just posting 2 minis I made for wolfgang. The one with the black t shirt is his work/court attire and the red t shirt is his casual attire.


Also I updated the front wolfgang sprite sheet. EDIT:
Here is a sprite sheet I have been adding to every hour and then. The origional sprite used was created by Nocturnal_Swinger so credit goes to her for the sprite.

The sprite seems nice but if u used lamiror's poses it would have been better

I'll probably do that later on when I get to the point where I HAVE to work on it, as most of the sprites I post on this thread im using for a fan game.

also I made a Wolfgang smiley. I'm just finding all these old files that I have.

I changed the angry pose a tad bit. hopefully it looks ok.

You used edgeworths face? Maybe

Mileswright wrote:You used edgeworths face? Maybe

I think he did

Hey backburner, thx for making the oldman defendant sheet, I referenced it to draw one of my in-process sprites.

No probs, I mainly used von karmas head and miles's body

Hey guys, I made a co counsil sprite for wolfgang. I mainly used the AAI sprites then de-colourised them.