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And yes I did give Rubia the funniest lines for a reason.
Before I fall asleep during a lecture, its best i hit the sack and think.
And I will get better before your birthday Airey. Oliver gets my soul if I dont.
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Oliver gets my soul if I dont.
You act as if I haven't taken it already.
And again, if you knew it sucked, why post it?
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And I will get better before your birthday Airey. Oliver gets my soul if I dont.
Well, that gives you a good eight months!
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And again, if you knew it sucked, why post it?
Seconding the question, TBH.
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Oliver wrote:
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Oliver gets my soul if I dont.
You act as if I haven't taken it already.
And again, if you knew it sucked, why post it?
Partially because i wanted to. I also have this morbid fear of people judging my work. So I get used to bad reviews, and i get better.
Okay sleep... NOW! (Ive been saying that since 10:30 and its 1:49 now)
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WhatTheWhat wrote:
Oliver wrote:
WhatTheWhat wrote:
Oliver gets my soul if I dont.
You act as if I haven't taken it already.
And again, if you knew it sucked, why post it?
Partially because i wanted to. I also have this morbid fear of people judging my work. So I get used to bad reviews, and i get better.
Okay sleep... NOW! (Ive been saying that since 10:30 and its 1:49 now)
If you're scared of people judging your work... Then why put it on the internet (PUBLICLY) where anyone can judge it? It just kind of confuses me...
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But to be perfectly honest... I am disappointed that I was not able to blow the rooftop myself without being carried by this boy.
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But again, Rubia, are you related to my editor? You guys DO look pretty similar, and you're both Pomeranians.
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Y'know my super secret editor that no one knows abo-
Oh crap.
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Rubia Ryu the Royal wrote:
It's a process of learning. She knows she can get better if she lets her works be judged negatively, since there's something to learn from those criticisms.
But to be perfectly honest... I am disappointed that I was not able to blow the rooftop myself without being carried by this boy.
But to be perfectly honest... I am disappointed that I was not able to blow the rooftop myself without being carried by this boy.
Thank you! Someone gets my reasoning!
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WhatTheWhat wrote:
Rubia Ryu the Royal wrote:
It's a process of learning. She knows she can get better if she lets her works be judged negatively, since there's something to learn from those criticisms.
But to be perfectly honest... I am disappointed that I was not able to blow the rooftop myself without being carried by this boy.
But to be perfectly honest... I am disappointed that I was not able to blow the rooftop myself without being carried by this boy.
Thank you! Someone gets my reasoning!
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Rubia's the evil one,
Rubin's my mentor, the one fighting for the right cause against Rubia. Oh, they also edit my work, so that's nice.
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What if... They're both one and the same!
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Besides, most of us are already working on sporkings.
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Okay fine, I'll stop talking about Master Rubins.
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WhatTheWhat wrote:
Edit: Is there any way to copy from Fanfiction.net?
What I do is just switch to the mobile version of the site. Just change the "www." to "m." It's always worked for me and I don't have any scripts installed.
Anyway @WhatTheWhat, I would recommend that if you want to use any of us real sporkers in your sporking that you ask the people who you want to use first. Oliver and Rubia seemed OK with it, but no offense, to me it seemed a bit creepy. And I don't think you know any of us well enough to write us like we actually are.
Also, please get an editor. It's always a bit weird when you criticize a fic for bad grammar when your sporking doesn't have very good grammar either. Although I know that I always notice my mistakes after I publish it, haha.
Don't get discouraged though, practice=improvement!
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I didn't use enough big boy words that I heard on the internetz and I was acting too mature!
But yeah, do what Skittle said, ask permission and get to know us before putting us in a sporking.
Edit: Actually, I kinda want to try an idea similar to WhattheWhat's some time...
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Skittlemask wrote:
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Edit: Is there any way to copy from Fanfiction.net?
Anyway @WhatTheWhat, I would recommend that if you want to use any of us real sporkers in your sporking that you ask the people who you want to use first. Oliver and Rubia seemed OK with it, but no offense, to me it seemed a bit creepy. And I don't think you know any of us well enough to write us like we actually are.
I just want to add that self-inserts or OCs are actually against the rules. A bit of rule-breaking is normally harmless, but this seems like the kind of thing that could get out of hand pretty easily, and make this thread lose its purpose.
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Edit: Is there any way to copy from Fanfiction.net?
Anyway @WhatTheWhat, I would recommend that if you want to use any of us real sporkers in your sporking that you ask the people who you want to use first. Oliver and Rubia seemed OK with it, but no offense, to me it seemed a bit creepy. And I don't think you know any of us well enough to write us like we actually are.
I just want to add that self-inserts or OCs are actually against the rules. A bit of rule-breaking is normally harmless, but this seems like the kind of thing that could get out of hand pretty easily, and make this thread lose its purpose.
Yeah, that was why I was saying that for the out-of-character sporking we'd need to post it on LiveJournal or Tumblr.
Has anyone found a fic for that yet?
Also, you need a Google account to access GoogleDocs, right? Does everyone who wanted to be in this one have one? If you have a gmail, then you already have one...
Edit: I just realized that if we do it on Google Docs, then we can probably just link people to the actual document and not need to upload it anywhere else....
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Skittlemask wrote:
WhatTheWhat wrote:
Edit: Is there any way to copy from Fanfiction.net?
What I do is just switch to the mobile version of the site. Just change the "www." to "m." It's always worked for me and I don't have any scripts installed.
Anyway @WhatTheWhat, I would recommend that if you want to use any of us real sporkers in your sporking that you ask the people who you want to use first. Oliver and Rubia seemed OK with it, but no offense, to me it seemed a bit creepy. And I don't think you know any of us well enough to write us like we actually are.
Also, please get an editor. It's always a bit weird when you criticize a fic for bad grammar when your sporking doesn't have very good grammar either. Although I know that I always notice my mistakes after I publish it, haha.
Don't get discouraged though, practice=improvement!
I did say I was tired. Like exasusted, to be specific. As I said, this will really like a brainstorm/practice I did at the end of a long day. I know It sucks, I know its OOC, and I personally don't want an editor. I wa testing out an idea of mine, and I wanted to see if it was a good one, if a Halloween fic was a good idea or not, or other thigs.
Should I just take it down? I mean I get what everyone's saying, and I appreciate and opinion, but Im not really getting ANYTHING(new) from this. Trust me, if I wanted to do my best work, it would be much better than the obvious crap I put up today.
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Just leave it. It's no problem if you show your weak points when trying something new. Just make sure next time you don't do it again.
Besides, I wouldn't mind going back to it and enjoying my lines.
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WhatTheWhat wrote:
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Anyway @WhatTheWhat, I would recommend that if you want to use any of us real sporkers in your sporking that you ask the people who you want to use first. Oliver and Rubia seemed OK with it, but no offense, to me it seemed a bit creepy. And I don't think you know any of us well enough to write us like we actually are.
Also, please get an editor. It's always a bit weird when you criticize a fic for bad grammar when your sporking doesn't have very good grammar either. Although I know that I always notice my mistakes after I publish it, haha.
Also, please get an editor. It's always a bit weird when you criticize a fic for bad grammar when your sporking doesn't have very good grammar either. Although I know that I always notice my mistakes after I publish it, haha.
I did say I was tired. Like exasusted, to be specific. As I said, this will really like a brainstorm/practice I did at the end of a long day. I know It sucks, I know its OOC, and I personally don't want an editor. I wa testing out an idea of mine, and I wanted to see if it was a good one, if a Halloween fic was a good idea or not, or other thigs.
Should I just take it down? I mean I get what everyone's saying, and I appreciate and opinion, but Im not really getting ANYTHING(new) from this. Trust me, if I wanted to do my best work, it would be much better than the obvious crap I put up today.
There's no reason to take it down. You could always refer to it to see if you're getting better, and as a reminder of what not to do. My reply was mostly to tell you that it'd be wise to ask permission first, as we're real people and not fictional characters who obviously couldn't care if you poked fun at them/made them OOC.
There's no rush to get sporkings out. If you're exhausted next time, just wait for when you're awake enough to fix mistakes, that's all. That way the feedback you get would actually be helpful.
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I wasn't okay with it, I was far too OOC!
I know you were upset that she got your personality all wrong, I just meant that it didn't look like you were mad about yourself being used in her sporking, per se. I could be wrong though, I'm not going to speak for you. That's just what it seemed like from your response.
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Also, you need a Google account to access GoogleDocs, right? Does everyone who wanted to be in this one have one? If you have a gmail, then you already have one...
I do have one. As for the fic, I haven't really thought up of one yet.
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Just leave it. It's no problem if you show your weak points when trying something new. Just make sure next time you don't do it again.
Besides, I wouldn't mind going back to it and enjoying my lines.
Actually for me its easier, because I make the character personalities myself, so I can develop them easily.
With fan fiction, you're given pre-developed characters, in a chosen setting, in which you have no definite control over.
(Trust me, I SUCK at fan fiction. Tell me to write a fiction story, with MY OWN characters....)
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Rubia Ryu the Royal wrote:
Just leave it. It's no problem if you show your weak points when trying something new. Just make sure next time you don't do it again.
Besides, I wouldn't mind going back to it and enjoying my lines.
Actually for me its easier, because I make the character personalities myself, so I can develop them easily.
With fan fiction, you're given pre-developed characters, in a chosen setting, in which you have no definite control over.
(Trust me, I SUCK at fan fiction. Tell me to write a fiction story, with MY OWN characters....)
It could be argued that once you get past your own premise and concept development, the exact same rules apply to writing fanfiction and original fiction. Basically, you write fanfiction of things you made up yourself - but generally you still have an obligation to keep everything more or less consistent.
Of course you can change things up; characters can (and should) develop, and settings, premises, and plots you can change as much as you like as long as it's logical - according to whatever logic you're using for the sake of your story.
But the same thing also applies to fanfiction. You use canon as a starting point, but after that, the story is all yours. You can change everything as you go along; you can plop characters in an AU or develop them differently than they did/would in canon. You can even make OCs. So yes, you do have definite control over fanfiction, if only you take it.
Fanfiction is not restricting. Original fiction also has confines.
They're obviously not the same, but they're not really so different that any given person can be good at one but bad at the other.
(Also, this is coming from someone who writes both a lot of fanfiction - canonverse, AUs, and OC-heavy fics - and a lot of original fiction.)
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Has this one ever been finished?
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I don't think it has.
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DAMON GANT ESCAPS FROM PRISOOOOOOON part 4
Our sporkers for today are:
(Phoenix, Edgeworth, Maya and Franziska are teleported into the theater lobby.)
Phoenix: *Groaning* I thought this fic was dead…
Edgeworth: If ‘TASTE THE RAINBOW’ can come back, so can this one.
Maya: C’mon! We should at least get this over with.
Franziska: Hmph.
(The four of them move into the room as the lights fade out)
Spoiler:
(The lights flicker back on.)
Franziska: …
(Wasting no time, Franziska escapes the theater leaving Phoenix, Edgeworth, and Maya behind.)
Phoenix: Well, somebody was angry.
Edgeworth: …I can understand why she feels that way… to be pulled back to this fic so suddenly.
Phoenix: Yeah…I’m just thankful Athena wasn’t asked to spork this one, to be honest.
Maya: …Yeah, to be paired up with a Gary Stu…
Phoenix: A twelve-year old Gary Stu.
Edgeworth: Don’t remind me.
(The three leave the theater, hoping to never have to spork this fic again.)
Like we’d let that happen.
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Well, I guess I should say yet.
I kind of feel like Maya would be acting a bit more like Phoenix instead of actually suggesting they get it done...
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1) Franziska and Maya, seemed (a little) OOC to me. I'm probably the only one who feels this way though.
2) Do you have an editor? I think that would be really handy for you to get a second opinion before posting.
3) The conversation seemed...awkward at some points.
On a good note though, you write Edgeworth really well, and you did really well sporking this fic.
If you want good feedback, go find Airey and get her out from her corner. I feel like a hypocrite right now.
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Oliver wrote:
Sorry for the double post but...That...that's just....
Go get Rubia, I'd ruin this ugly beautiful thing.
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Oliver wrote:
I kind of feel like Maya would be acting a bit more like Phoenix instead of actually suggesting they get it done...
Now that I've seen the revised version (I suppose, didn't see the draft that was posted), Maya is alright here. This kind of fic is not her style of silly; it's just awkward everywhere, so it makes sense she'd rather "get it over with".
cuteyounggirlplus wrote:
I finished editing! Please give me some feedback. I don't think my sporkings are going so well and I don't know what to do.
I hope you aren't trying to rush to post a sporking. I often give myself plenty of time while working through my sporkings so I can get into the mood and make a few revisions, from scratch if I need to. Don't worry about the thread. We'll get by with random things.
As for your sporking, it was alright. I feel like Edgeworth has a disproportionate share of the witty responses (his are certainly the best overall), since I prefer to split it more equally between him and Phoenix. Also, Franziska is a bit too quick to use her whip. She may be upset that she has to return to this fic again, but I usually place more focus on the "refined" side of her when writing her. I suggest moderating on her whippings... except for the "bra exam" bit. That was funny.
It's only on the occasion that Phoenix feels a bit OOC. As much as he is the butt monkey, he can still find a way to, ahem, "turn things around". It's what he and Maya always compete for, anyway. (Maya just has the upper hand most of the time.)
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Oliver wrote:
Sorry for the double post but...That...that's just....
Go get Rubia, I'd ruin this ugly beautiful thing.
I'm afraid because I haven't actually read it yet... but now I realize I'm very suited to it because this sounds like a crossover I've been waiting for.
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Available in small, medium, large, and jumbo size for special occasions.
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