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Here's the first page. I did it as a image so then it has pictures and looks more fun to read.
Look closely behind the pictures but please read it 
page1
page2
and for those who can't see the image click on the links
Please point out any mistakes
I hope it's not too hard to read, tell me if it is or isn't because I need to know
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I look forward to reading it when you've restored it though.
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I can't wait to see the perfect gift either. :) Good job so far.
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This page doesn't tell you the whole of Trucy's gift but part of it and the first paragraph tells you about what is going to hapen later on. Hope it's ok
and for those who can't see the image
page 2
I will post the next page when I get more comments (no point writing for no one)
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I'm trying to include ALL he main ones. I wanted to make this fanfic really original. So the story is going to be really long (and surprising) , I've already planned it and stuff and made the next page. Just waiting for more comments Trucy didn' mean it to be a bad gift, but when she gave the gift there were some terrible consequences
Thank you. I thought it would be nice to have page-like images so then they're more interesting to read than a giant block of text. Glad you like it You will find out what happens at Hazakura temple soon enough....
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