Mini Maya's fanfiction

Wed Dec 31, 2008 8:56 pm

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I've started to do fanfiction but I'm not giving away any clues of what happens next. But you can guess and I'll say if your right or wrong. Anyway...
Here's the first page. I did it as a image so then it has pictures and looks more fun to read. :maya:

Look closely behind the pictures but please read it :ema:

page1

Spoiler:

page2

Spoiler:

and for those who can't see the image click on the links

Spoiler:

Please point out any mistakes
I hope it's not too hard to read, tell me if it is or isn't because I need to know :ema:

Thanks Christie so much for Pearl which I adopted from her :3 Yay Christie

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Re: Mini Maya's fanfiction

Wed Dec 31, 2008 10:06 pm

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Hey, just thought I should telll you the link and image aren't working.
I look forward to reading it when you've restored it though. :maya:

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Re: Mini Maya's fanfiction

Wed Dec 31, 2008 10:10 pm

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Isn't it? It works on my computer. I'll give you a URL to click on so you can read it click on that hopefully it will work :ema:

http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/7380/page1wj2.gif
tell me if that worked :maya:

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Re: Mini Maya's fanfiction

Fri Jan 02, 2009 1:52 am

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This is nice. I felt bad for Trucy. It's hard forgetting special events like that, although it must have been one busy year if she even forgot about Christmas. O_o It's kind of sad that they didn't really celebrate the holiday. You may want to add a little clause about why they opted not to celebrate to clarify a bit because she's still young enough to find the holiday exciting, although she is getting to the point where she might feel that she's a bit old for it. Anyway, nice work. I can't wait to find out what this perfect gift is. :)

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Re: Mini Maya's fanfiction

Sat Jan 03, 2009 5:35 am

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MOAR! XD

I can't wait to see the perfect gift either. :) Good job so far.

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Re: Mini Maya's fanfiction

Sat Jan 03, 2009 7:38 pm

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It was great. :edgy:

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Re: Mini Maya's fanfiction

Sun Jan 04, 2009 12:18 pm

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Here is page 2 (finally)
This page doesn't tell you the whole of Trucy's gift but part of it and the first paragraph tells you about what is going to hapen later on. Hope it's ok :maya:

and for those who can't see the image
page 2
I will post the next page when I get more comments (no point writing for no one) :pearl:

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Re: Mini Maya's fanfiction

Mon Jan 05, 2009 6:09 am

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Wow, that sounds like it will be a bad gift. O_o Poor everyone. Anyway, nice work. I rather like having the words on these page-like images. It's amusing. I wonder what will be happening at Hazakura temple...

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Re: Mini Maya's fanfiction

Tue Jan 06, 2009 3:35 am

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Hehe, this is cute. I like seeing a fanfic with all the main characters, instead of side ones. The main ones are SO much more interesting. (with a few exceptions :Maki:

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Re: Mini Maya's fanfiction

Tue Jan 06, 2009 9:30 pm

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GDM wrote:

Hehe, this is cute. I like seeing a fanfic with all the main characters, instead of side ones. The main ones are SO much more interesting. (with a few exceptions :Maki:

)

And me

I'm trying to include ALL he main ones. I wanted to make this fanfic really original. So the story is going to be really long (and surprising) , I've already planned it and stuff and made the next page. Just waiting for more comments :edgy:

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Wow, that sounds like it will be a bad gift. O_o Poor everyone. Anyway, nice work. I rather like having the words on these page-like images. It's amusing. I wonder what will be happening at Hazakura temple...

Trucy didn' mean it to be a bad gift, but when she gave the gift there were some terrible consequences :sadshoe:

Thank you. I thought it would be nice to have page-like images so then they're more interesting to read than a giant block of text. Glad you like it :keiko:

You will find out what happens at Hazakura temple soon enough....

Thanks Christie so much for Pearl which I adopted from her :3 Yay Christie